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Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.08.07 - 10:30PM Title: He Who Cannot Be Harmed

Very good chapter really want to know what your going to do with Amrita I really do think this is the wild card to the story and I am really starting to feel bad for poor Ginny too really think you need to just get a move on and get past this phase really haven't been learning anything new or adding to the story all that much I don't think.



Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.08.07 - 01:58PM Title: He Who Cannot Be Harmed

Well I think that answers my question of Cedric not coming to Ginny and shows I guessed right on the attack only thing I am kinda sad I didn't catch was the bathing in the river of styxs I mean didn't even pass my mind should of got it very glad you keep putting your mythology in here your story is rapidly rising in my favorites list though I do wonder it seems almost as if you have made it more light hearted as it goes on like you dumbed it down a little so it could be considered kids and such I don't know just seems in earlier chapters you kinda had it at a whole other level.



Reviewer: veela girl Signed Date: 2006.03.10 - 02:10PM Title: He Who Cannot Be Harmed

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gosh, your story is just great there's nothing more to be said i'm actually supposed to be working and i quickly have to change the website everytime someone comes in, but your story has just captured me



Reviewer: Sophia Montgomery Anonymous Date: 2005.05.31 - 03:51AM Title: He Who Cannot Be Harmed

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Good job on this chapter.



Reviewer: Rhinnon Anonymous Date: 2004.06.07 - 07:20PM Title: He Who Cannot Be Harmed

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I like this! I just hope Amrita gets rescued soon and Ginny gets freed. There's just been too many bad things happening. Things have to be set to right. SOON. I want to see how Harry's new invulnerability turns out.



Reviewer: rach Anonymous Date: 2004.03.07 - 06:28PM Title: He Who Cannot Be Harmed

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this chapter was great! just like the rest...WHEN IS CEDRIC GETTING BACK!! SOON I HOPE!! lol update soon



Reviewer: Delani Anonymous Date: 2004.03.06 - 03:45PM Title: He Who Cannot Be Harmed

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My goodness! I am hanging off of a cliff at the moment! Every since the Greatest Scandal.... I have loved your writing, but wow! After gliding through the first 20 chapters, I will gladly review! This is amazing, and I love following the mythology, since I myself love it! Hopefully the jet of light wasn't green, eek! when will Cedric come back? Harry is an "Achilles" Cool! Can and will not wait longer for more, update please!



Reviewer: JenniferW Anonymous Date: 2004.03.03 - 04:17PM Title: He Who Cannot Be Harmed

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Hi, I absolutely adored your trilogy, and only just in the last few weeks gotten to read this story. I am really enjoying it, but college is not allowing me to read as much as I want to. :( I'm currently taking a Humanities class that we JUST studied Greece/mythology, and i LOVE addition of Greek mythology to your story. It's just awesome! I'm sorry for not having reviewed earlier, but hopefully I can spare a few moments a week and keep up! (I should be doing homework now...) Keep writing, you're wonderful at it!



Reviewer: Gillian Anonymous Date: 2004.03.02 - 06:24PM Title: He Who Cannot Be Harmed

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Great chapter! I loved it! Awesome job! Oh No! I hope Gin's alright!!!



Reviewer: Erin Anonymous Date: 2004.03.02 - 05:04PM Title: He Who Cannot Be Harmed

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Wow, great cliffhanger. I'm wondering what color light it was that hit Ginny in the chest.. Hopefully NOT green. That'd be bad. I thought that when the quidditch game was over, Harry would get to go home! I guess not.. hopefully he will soon, though. That scene with Daffy and Sirius was really good. It was cute how Daffy thinks Sirius is even cooler than her dad :P.. Anyway, great job as usual and i'm looking forward to the next chapter! :D



Reviewer: Marissa Anonymous Date: 2004.03.02 - 04:38PM Title: He Who Cannot Be Harmed

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That was a great chapter! i hope cedric gets back soon i want harry and ginny to be beack together again



Reviewer: ally Anonymous Date: 2004.03.02 - 04:15PM Title: He Who Cannot Be Harmed

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Oh, yay! Whoo! *dances for the updated chapter* Great chapter. Ginny should just figure out that the rason she can't see the thestrals is 'cause Harry is still alive...and now he's even 'untouchable' hehehe...this is getting really interesting.



Reviewer: jordy Anonymous Date: 2004.03.02 - 03:41PM Title: He Who Cannot Be Harmed

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great chapter! But, WHY did you have to end it there??? Not fair. I hope updates are soon to follow...



Reviewer: Fire Anonymous Date: 2004.03.02 - 02:05PM Title: He Who Cannot Be Harmed

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This is my favourite story of all time. It's just not fair that you are so good at writing! I love the poem at the beginning, it's one of my all time favourites. I love this story, please please keep it up.



Reviewer: Rosebeth Signed Date: 2004.03.02 - 12:23PM Title: He Who Cannot Be Harmed

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Good chapter with a really mean cliffhanger! Look forward to more.



Reviewer: Nemo1024 Anonymous Date: 2004.03.02 - 11:15AM Title: He Who Cannot Be Harmed

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That was one mean cliffhanger you presented us for... You'll have to pay for it with a quick update! :] Yeah, invinvible!Harry is something to look forward to - the Death Eaters will not know what hit them! Oh, and I look forward to the scene of Cederic appearing in Ginny's dreams (did I mentione it before?) - please say that you will write it!



Reviewer: Angie Anonymous Date: 2004.03.02 - 10:45AM Title: He Who Cannot Be Harmed

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Holy evil cliffie of all evil cliffies. That was just plain mean. Again another great chapter (except for the cliffie) I am just so enjoyig this story and love all the greek background that you have weaved into your story. You have such a great imagination and then such a good way of presenting it so that we can picture it in our heads. Great job and I am glad I didn't offend.



Reviewer: arios (too lazy to sign in) Anonymous Date: 2004.03.02 - 12:31AM Title: He Who Cannot Be Harmed

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Terrific couple of chapters! I wish I had this imagination and write something like this! Kudos!



Reviewer: xtina Anonymous Date: 2004.03.01 - 10:52PM Title: He Who Cannot Be Harmed

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great chapter! you really need to get more reviews on this site!! haha and you post chapters early than on FF... so pretend this is twenty reviews instead of just one... :-)



Reviewer: lulupotter Anonymous Date: 2004.03.01 - 02:09PM Title: He Who Cannot Be Harmed

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it was a good chapter!!




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