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Reviewer: Grownupron1 Signed Date: 2013.08.18 - 12:42PM Title: Consequences

I can't help but think that the entire reason this group of stories has been written is to see how many times Harry can get away with kissing Hermione, while staying in a relationship with Ginny and while convincing Ron to not have enough self worth to put up with it.

In the previous story it was, mostly, not his fault. In the previous chapter Hermione did it even though they knew it wasn't going to work which made it pretty nasty. In this chapter though their is no reason for it, other than Harry just wanting to make with out his best mates girl and vice versa for Hermione.

Hermione serially cheats on Ron and yet he just stands by like a sucker. It isn't growth and maturity to let your friends and lovers make a fool out of you; its just weakness.

At this point Harry might literally be the worst best mate since Peter Pettigrew.

Author's Response: The way you interpret it is not the way I wrote it. Sorry you feel that way. Abraxan



Reviewer: charlz1983 Signed Date: 2008.10.20 - 04:45AM Title: Consequences

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you are a bit sadisitic when it comes to harry!!! hehe you just don't want him to catch a break now, do you!! i like the whole sleeping beauty thing - very funny!

Author's Response: It's such FUN to torment poor Harry! He's so resilient, he always bounces back well, bless him! :D Good thing this is fiction! Glad you're enjoying it! Abraxan



Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2008.01.12 - 01:57PM Title: Consequences

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that was really brilliant! very cool! i enjoyed this chapter very much! it was light and fluffy! just perfect!

CodeRomance

Author's Response: Fluffy can be fun! Glad you enjoyed it!



Reviewer: txreina Signed Date: 2006.06.22 - 09:52PM Title: Consequences

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Life in Azkaban good I'm glad that no matter of their age they would have to pay for their part of Malfoy's plan. Great chapter and the underwater love scene wow they were amazing.

Author's Response: thanks a lot! I'm glad you enjoyed them! That love scene was one of my favorites to write. Glad you liked it! Abaxan



Reviewer: jlwitch Signed Date: 2006.05.17 - 09:05PM Title: Consequences

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That was really fun to read. It's stories like these, especially the lake section. That really make a person wish all this were real. It would be such a pleasure to be able to do half the stuff they are able to do in these tales.

Author's Response: Oh, I agree completely! ESPECIALLY the lake stuff, and the flying (like a bird, not on a broom - that doesn't look comfortable! heehee). Wouldn't it be fun? That's where a lot of things in my stories come from, my "wishful thinking". . . . Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for writing! Abraxan



Reviewer: asad_asif_86 Signed Date: 2006.04.03 - 11:26AM Title: Consequences

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Reviewer: Katie27 Signed Date: 2006.03.22 - 02:44PM Title: Consequences

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Yup...one chapter just as I said I would do. Lol...So little time but so much to read! I must say that reading this one chapter has made may day five times better. I have had...er...the third worse day of my life today so this was a good thing to do....reading I mean. Thank you so much for cheering me up...and thank you for writing so beautifully. -Katie

Author's Response: I'm glad I was able to cheer you up! Hope things are going better for you now! Thanks for writing! Abraxan



Reviewer: Xfactor Anonymous Date: 2006.01.03 - 12:30PM Title: Consequences

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Once again...Wow! I loved the way Ron was able to control his temper and still assert his authority. I think the refining spell is a cool idea, definitely unique.

Author's Response: Thanks a lot! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter! Yes, Ron's maturing now (finally, bless him!) and able to control his temper. That's a good thing, since he wants to be an Auror! Thanks for writing! Abraxan



Reviewer: freshwater Anonymous Date: 2006.01.02 - 12:19AM Title: Consequences

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Underwater lovemaking? Hmmm....I suppose that is a pretty creative way to make up for having the poor dear boy nearly beaten to death and Ginny tormented with his being "so near yet so far" while under the sleeping curse. Although I was hoping for a bit more, uhm, detail. **blush**

Author's Response: heehee -- this is an R rated fic, not NC-17!! Glad you enjoyed it! And honestly, such scenes read SO much better when the reader lets his or her imagination join in the fun! heehee. Abraxan, who's quite fond of that bit as well



Reviewer: Wulfric Knight Anonymous Date: 2005.12.28 - 02:36AM Title: Consequences

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I've finally caught up with your story I just finished reading up to this point both your stories and I absolutely love them (took me about two weeks) I haven't read any of the other reviews for the chapters so I don't know if it was meationed that Ted Tonks I belive is a Muggle. I'm pretty sure they said so in Order of the Phoenix but I may be wrong feel free to correct me. Lovely story keep writeing

Author's Response: Nope, Ted Tonks is a MUGGLE-BORN wizard, not a Muggle. Check the HP Lexicon (or OoP itself) if you want. Glad you're enjoying the stories! Abraxan



Reviewer: blondeshorte88 Anonymous Date: 2005.12.25 - 12:44AM Title: Consequences

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that was such a sweet chapter near the end...i absolutely loved it. now i know where the engagement ring has been! r we goin to find out why ginny was acting all weird at the beginning? j/w, luv luv luv the story! can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying the story! You'll just have to keep reading to find out what's going on with the characters! :-) Abraxan



Reviewer: Ender Signed Date: 2005.12.23 - 03:56AM Title: Consequences

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lovely, quite lovely. the story needs to move foreward, though. i would love to get to the climax of this story and then start on the sequel- there will be one, of course? it would be a shame if you did not continue this wonderful tale- right up to where harry is as old as dumbledore.

Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying this fic -- and it IS moving toward the climax. JKR writes the kids' entire year and that's what I'm doing here. I'm also building Harry's character and preparing him for the final conflict. And no, there won't be a sequel. I'm working on a novel for "real" publication now. These two were a warmup for that. There's a nice long epilog in Destiny which has the "germs" of short stories I may write in the future when I feel a need to revisit Harry (who I love dearly), but I can't spend all my time doing stuff that I can't sell. I put too many hours (two full years for these two fics) and too much effort into my writing to give it away for free, although this has been fun. I'm glad you're enjoying my writing. I'll let everyone know when I have something published, so stay tuned! (And don't be impatient, it will take me a while to get the new one done -- and it won't be NEARLY this long!!!!!) Thanks for writing! Abraxan



Reviewer: leron Anonymous Date: 2005.12.22 - 06:47AM Title: Consequences

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i love ur story and this is a great update. cant wait for the next one. XDDD

Author's Response: Thanks a lot! Abraxan



Reviewer: Shaurya Anonymous Date: 2005.12.22 - 04:48AM Title: Consequences

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Great update. Harry seems a lot more cheerful now, which is wonderful!

Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, Harry is learning how to enjoy life. Glad you enjoyed the chapter! Abraxan



Reviewer: sarah Anonymous Date: 2005.12.21 - 08:37PM Title: Consequences

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This story is great but it could be better if you could add lines like, to hell with the minstry.

Author's Response: sorry, that wouldn't improve it at all! ;-> Glad you're enjoying the story! Abraxan



Reviewer: Vladius Anonymous Date: 2005.12.21 - 05:24PM Title: Consequences

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another great chapters as expected xDDD swimming in the lake and snogging down there was a very funny ideia huahuauhauhahuhahua xDDD thx and congratulations again ^^ you're really a great writer

Author's Response: Thanks a lot! Glad you liked it! Abraxan



Reviewer: Dreamer Anonymous Date: 2005.12.21 - 03:39PM Title: Consequences

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u are a super good writer good job this is one of my favorite chapters

Author's Response: Thanks! Abraxan




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