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Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2008.01.11 - 11:13PM Title: Merlin's Solution

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well i'm not mad at Merlin or harry any more but still! you'd think they'd be a bit more considerate! either way i'm glad harry's as good as new...if not better! brilliant chapter!

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Author's Response: Sometimes drastic measures need to be taken -this was one of those times. Glad you enjoyed it!



Reviewer: txreina Signed Date: 2006.06.22 - 09:26PM Title: Merlin's Solution

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My heart break for Harry. No one can understand what he's had to endure almost from the time he was born. His parents dead, those mirseable Dursley, Sirius, and if that's not bad enough Voldermolt it's no wonder he didn't have a meltdown sooner. Harry needs to had a clear head the next time he faces Voldermolt.

Author's Response: Yup, you're right! Abraxan



Reviewer: jlwitch Signed Date: 2006.05.16 - 02:58PM Title: Merlin's Solution

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Bravo Abraxan! I was starting to feel like I was the only one allowing Harry to have mental breakdown. Not many people brave that. Which is kind of understandable. But if you honestly sit back and think of everything poor Harry has been put through; would you honestly be able to live a happy life with all that hanging over your shoulders? No I think not! I think anyone that went through this stuff, any normal human being, would have that last straw pulled somewhere, and they would go into a complete breakdown, if not loose their mind, or comit suicide, and no one could blame them. I mean seriously, I'm surprised he hasn't had a break down in the books yet, though I wouldn't put it past JKR to put it in book 7, especially since she tries to work real life problems in sometimes. Thank you for putting that in there.

Author's Response: THANK YOU! I totally agree, as you can imagine! I've been through some pretty hairy things in my life, and so have some of my close friends and family - I know how it feels to be in situations not as rough as what Harry's gone through, so surely he'd have even more trouble coping than the rest of us, especially since he has no family support system and has to depend on himself more than most kids. I'm glad you agree with my assessment. Abraxan



Reviewer: asad_asif_86 Signed Date: 2006.04.03 - 11:26AM Title: Merlin's Solution

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Reviewer: ookami mononoke Anonymous Date: 2006.03.24 - 01:59PM Title: Merlin's Solution

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Hey, this is a great story, I absolutely love it! The characterization is great, and you can really see how the characters mature and grow with each experience they have. PS- you might want to check the end of chapter 23, in the last two sections. It jumps around in the middle of sentences. I don't know if it was a copy and paste error, or something else, but it was slightly confusing piecing together what all was going on there for a little while. Great Job! It's awesome! =^^=

Author's Response: I'll check that chapter, thanks! THere was some kind of upload glitch on another chapter too. Thanks for letting me know. And I'm glad you're enjoying my story! Abraxan



Reviewer: nintschi Anonymous Date: 2005.12.07 - 05:39PM Title: Merlin's Solution

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hi this story is so great this and refiners fire are amazing, I could not stop reading how many pages are these already ? I love the land of phoenix,gryfindor heir, and the whole story james evans :) aahhaha please update very soon you are very talented thanks for sharing your ideas with humble reading fans take care Nintschi

Author's Response: I honeslty haven't counted how many pages are in Destiny for months, and I've done a lot of writing since then. Back then there were over 1100 pages (ACK!) Now there are MORE! It's finished in first draft form now, including the epilog, and I'm just polishing as hard as I can! I'll probably take time to count pages again sometime soon. Glad you're enjoying my fics! Thanks for writing! Abraxan



Reviewer: Vladius..yes, again '^^ Anonymous Date: 2005.12.05 - 10:14PM Title: Merlin's Solution

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allow me to make a correction: i said that i liked "somethings" in Time Of Destiny and Refiner's Fire? ive liked many, many things in those fics =]

Author's Response: Great! Thanks! Abraxan



Reviewer: Vladius Anonymous Date: 2005.12.05 - 10:10PM Title: Merlin's Solution

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excellent fic..one of the greatest fics i ever read =oo really!!!! i've really liked somethings that happened in Time of Destiny and Refiner's Fire....add Vladius in you fan list xDDD sry to bother u but...im not sure if i get this, but you'll upload a chapter per week or something like that O.o? im really sry to bother u with this but im VERY axious to read the next chapters '^^ hope u'll forgive me for bothering you with this "next chapter plz" things...but...ahh sry again x.x ahhh plz do not notice my grammar errors '^^ i have no problem in reading in english but i cannot talk/write very well yet (im brazilian '^^)... Thanks for the great fic ^^.

Author's Response: Wow, your English is excellent! Far better than any foreign languages I've tried to learn! Good for you! I'm glad you've enjoyed the stories so far, and yes, I upload a chapter per week (on Destiny -- Refiner's is all online). Destiny is 34 chapters long plus a long epilog, so you have eleven more weeks of uploaded new chapters to look forward to! Thanks for writing! Abraxan



Reviewer: Millsie Anonymous Date: 2005.12.05 - 05:26AM Title: Merlin's Solution

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Excellent chapter as always. This is a great story. I have particually enjoyed reading about Harry's adventures. Im glad that he is now happy. That phoenix place was a really good idea as a way to cheer up Harry. I would love to hear some of Merlin's story's some time. I hear that they are really good but it would be nice to actually hear what he did for once. Would it also be possible for Harry to play a prank or something as he is in such a good mood. I always enjoy reading about a good prank. I hope you send Dumbledore away soon. I would do him a whole lot of good. I thought Harry's errand for Dumbledore was creative. Anway I dont have any suggestions about this chapter. It is well written - engaging the reader and I can connect with the characters. Thanks for a great chapter and an excellent story. Also thanks for updating frequently. I lookforward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: I'm glad you're happy that Harry's happy! I am too!! Glad you liked the land of the phoenixes! As for Harry playing a prank, that would be fun, but he's in the middle of such serious preparation for battle, I don't know if he'd think of doing a prank right now, even when he's so happy. But it's a fun idea! Glad you liked Harry's "errand" for Dumbledore! Dumbledore liked it too! heehee. Glad you 're enjoying the story! Thanks for writing! Abraxan



Reviewer: Xfactor Anonymous Date: 2005.12.02 - 10:13AM Title: Merlin's Solution

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Excellent job once again. I was extremely happy to see two chapters had been added. That really satisfied (somewhat) the "patience" monster that was screaming in my head. Great explanation as to where Harry had gone and it was great to see him so happy. With him this happy, I imagine ol' Voldie would have a hard time against Harry now, especially with all of the love that Harry must be feeling. I hope the next update is soon.

Author's Response: Sorry about the delay, but sometimes real life gets in the way of fanfiction! Glad you enjoyed the chapters! Abraxan




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