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Reviewer: hawkeye2008 Signed Date: 2017.05.31 - 09:59AM Title: Harry Lends a Hand

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Reviewer: charlz1983 Signed Date: 2008.10.21 - 04:08PM Title: Harry Lends a Hand

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so much sadness, but loads of rehab! very good writing, poor hermione and molly.

Author's Response: Thanks a lot! Abraxan



Reviewer: Artistand Signed Date: 2008.07.05 - 11:35PM Title: Harry Lends a Hand

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Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2008.01.13 - 08:20PM Title: Harry Lends a Hand

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BLOODY HELL! amazing! DUMBLEDORE! his grandfather! WHOA! very cool! i'm so glad ron didnt lose his leg! yippie! great chapter!

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Author's Response: Dumbledore being related to Harry just makes sense to me. The wizarding world, as Sirius told Harry, is small enough that nearly all English wizards are related somehow. Glad you liked the chapter!



Reviewer: txreina Signed Date: 2006.06.25 - 08:09PM Title: Harry Lends a Hand

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Wow what a jam packed chapter. Harry fixing's Ron's leg so it's not cut off. Dumbledore being Harry's great grandfather. The marriage proposal it was so beautiful. What a great chapter and story.

Author's Response: Thanks a lot! I'm glad you're enjoying it! Abraxan



Reviewer: asad_asif_86 Signed Date: 2006.04.03 - 11:30AM Title: Harry Lends a Hand

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Reviewer: Katie27 Signed Date: 2006.03.24 - 10:39AM Title: Harry Lends a Hand

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Urgh...I have about four paragraphs to read...but the bell is going to ring soon so I have no more time to read. I will try to finish it later one today....hopefully. Wonderful story! Thank you for writing! -Katie

Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it! Abraxan



Reviewer: Breanie Anonymous Date: 2006.02.11 - 09:22PM Title: Harry Lends a Hand

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lmfao - Dumbledore is his grandfather! i loved it!

Author's Response: Great! Abraxan



Reviewer: AMBER Anonymous Date: 2006.02.05 - 02:02PM Title: Harry Lends a Hand

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i luv this story! ur a wiked writer n im so glad u keep on updating!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you think so! But honestly? I would never be the writer I am if I'd ever written in the style you used to write this post -- I'm quite serious! I know this kind of writing is popular with young folks right now, but it will be a serious handicap when you start applying for jobs. It would be a really good idea to start writing in "normal" English at this time in your life so it's a easy for you, a real "habit" later. You can get much better jobs in the future with GOOD English and communication skills!! ;-) No offense, honestly, but it's a serious observation. Work on your English skills and your pay will be much higher when you go for jobs! Thanks for writing, and good luck! Abraxan



Reviewer: Anya Anonymous Date: 2006.02.04 - 07:46PM Title: Harry Lends a Hand

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Thank You for updateing so reagularly every time you do it feels like christmas you have me so caught up in the story its frightening i think i'll get confused when the last Harry Potter book comes out hope i'm not dissipointed after reading this.

Author's Response: What a lovely thing to say! Yes, I hope we're ALL not disappointed by JKR's last HP book!! HBP was a disappointment to me in a lot of ways, although it still had lots of the stuff that makes HP such fun to read. I don't mind the darkness -- I did mind Ginny being so out of character that she just let Harry go at the end! The Ginny JKR has established wouldn't have done that, IMO -- but then again, I grew Ginny up, based on the one JKR started, and MY Ginny would certainly fight for her man, or run off after him if he managed to sneak away from her! And DD not training Harry -- insane! argh. I sure hope she brings these books to a satisfying conclusion!!! I'm glad you're enjoying mine! Abraxan



Reviewer: moonlight51 Anonymous Date: 2006.02.04 - 01:07AM Title: Harry Lends a Hand

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Beautiful...

Author's Response: Thank you very much! Abraxan



Reviewer: Ginavera Signed Date: 2006.02.02 - 08:11PM Title: Harry Lends a Hand

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AHHH The agony of witing, just kidding, I loved this chapter because there were sad and happy parts

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! Abraxan



Reviewer: SmartyPants Anonymous Date: 2006.02.02 - 11:14AM Title: Harry Lends a Hand

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Awesome story! I'm nitpicking here but there are some parts of the story that don't match. but they're not really significant and doesn't take away from the story or plot as a whole. and it's understandable cuz it's so damn long! :) i love it though. keep it long and detailed!! i'm eagerly anticipating the new installment

Author's Response: If they aren't significant, why did you even mention them?? I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Parts you think don't "match" are probably that way deliberately, for some very good reason. I plant red herrings as well as clues, I spend a lot of time building up characters, and giving them flaws as well -- perfect people are boring, after all. Abraxan



Reviewer: Hg4ever Anonymous Date: 2006.02.02 - 07:36AM Title: Harry Lends a Hand

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Who woulda thought :) ? Its an absolutely great idea for dumbledore to actually be Harry's great-grandfather. *tear* i'm so happy that Harry has family who's so wonderful and really caring ='D! Dumbledore would make a fabulous 'father-like' grandfather to Harry =')! The way you described that scene was really touching :D :D :D, just like Ginny thought :), i hope they put that memory in a pensieve too (or are they??). Aaanndd, great proposal moment =O! *smiley*smiley*all over that scene* haha. But it was heartbreaking to watch (yeah, watched in my mind =O ) Ron be (sorta) rejected at that moment with Hermione. But i bet they'll get their time of proposal straight sometime later ;D, this was just not the moment like Harry's and Ginny's. Chapter overall was a great and happy one xD xD!! Soo glad everything turned out okay =D, i can't wait until they all get married (00h, flUFF!) along with meeting their quidditch team x-). Oh, that reminds me, i can't order those t-shirts ='(, because i dont live in the US. But still, the lion design is really good and looks so happy lol! Anyway, this chapter was AWESOME! Update quick please xD! (*sigh* school again next week ='( )

Author's Response: I have SEVERAL overseas orders for the t-shirt! Your being from someplace else is NOT a problem!! Simply go to the ordering page and click on the link to email me (or e me at sculptedhorse@aol.com -- that's my business addy) and I'll send you ordering info for your country! Glad you like the design! Glad you liked the chapter too! Thanks for a lovely review! Abraxan



Reviewer: Merlani Anonymous Date: 2006.02.01 - 11:09PM Title: Harry Lends a Hand

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A wonderful chapter, as always.

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it! Abraxan



Reviewer: Leron Anonymous Date: 2006.02.01 - 05:25PM Title: Harry Lends a Hand

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i LOVE that dumbledor is harry's grandpa..he has family...yay!!! but now hes all alone in the scary hospital wiht out his fiance!!! poor harry cant wait dor the next update...keep u p the gerat work adn i cant believe the stories almost over!! i love it and it will be sad to see it end...cant wait till the next chapter xox mwa

Author's Response: I'll be sad to see it end too - I really love spending time with Harry and his friends! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! Thanks for writing! Abraxan



Reviewer: ambush Signed Date: 2006.02.01 - 01:20PM Title: Harry Lends a Hand

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I really love this story! Great work - cannot wait for the next chapter. You're really progressing this story well - kudos to you!

Author's Response: Thanks very much! Abraxan



Reviewer: Xfactor Anonymous Date: 2006.02.01 - 09:51AM Title: Harry Lends a Hand

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What a chapter! The whole thing was very well played out but I want to focus my comments on two aspects: First, my heart nearly broke for Ron as he proposed. I felt so sorry for him that Hermione didn't give him the answer he wanted. I understand why she answered the way she did but I hope she does say "yes". Second, (allow me to gloat a bit) I was right, I was right, I was right. Way back in the story (chapter 21), I had commented that I missed where Dumbledore and Harry discussed that they are related. You told me that we don't know if they are or how closely they are. However wrong my assumptions of the relations were at the time, in the end I was right (end gloat). Dumbledore's story was truly touching and you provided an excellent reason for secrecy. I was happy for both of them, especially when Harry got excited about it instead of angry. Every time you update, I'm in an emtional turmoil because I feel like I'm right there with them. This chapter was no different. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Oooooo, you feel like you're right there with them??? COOL! That's what I'm trying for! YAY! Feel free to gloat! When you wrote that, I thought, "DANG what did I give away there???" And honestly, in one of my chapters, my betas got a good strong hint about DD and Harry's relationship because I called DD "grandfather" in that version -- I'd been working on these latter chapters while editing that chapter! It was hard to keep that secret so long! I'm glad you found the chapter a satisfying read! And yes, poor dear Ron. But his timing was off -- Hermione really needs to get past her parents' deaths a bit before she can think straight. Thanks for writing! Abraxan



Reviewer: Renee Anonymous Date: 2006.02.01 - 07:58AM Title: Harry Lends a Hand

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I love this story. Im happy Ron gets to keep his leg and I was really happy about Dumbledore being Harry's grandfather. I can't wait for your next chapter!! Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot! Abraxan



Reviewer: lola Anonymous Date: 2006.02.01 - 07:32AM Title: Harry Lends a Hand

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ehy only 4 chapters left????? *tears in my eyes*

Author's Response: Three now, plus a two-part epilog (the second part is nearing 60 pages, so it will be a good, long read). I'm glad you're enjoying my fic! Abraxan




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