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Reviewer: charlz1983 Signed Date: 2008.10.20 - 04:48AM Title: Patterns

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i loved that whole meeting - and percy getting fired - the best part - but what is he going to do now - cos he may now turn to death eaters, if he feels he has nowhere else to go!

i loved how harry got ron asap when he realised, i thought ron really stood out in this chapter! and minister bones has got her wish - she should invite harry onto the cabinet haha - harry for minister!!!!!

Author's Response: Being Minister is one thing Harry would NEVER want to do, no matter how qualified he is for it or how good he'd be at it. It just isn't in his personality to do that kind of work. Glad you liked the meeting - keep an eye on Percy, you'll be surprised at what happens! And yeah - I try to give Ron his time in the spotlight - he deserves it. Glad you enjoyed the chapter! Abraxan



Reviewer: deejinator Signed Date: 2008.08.27 - 01:03AM Title: Patterns

It warmed my heart to see Percy get his come-upance. That is one aspect of the Cannon books that I did not like. Good job.

Author's Response: Thanks a lot! Yeah, there are a lot of things JKR didn't deal with the way I wished she had. It was fun to "fix" those things in my stories, LOL! Abraxan



Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2008.01.13 - 04:08PM Title: Patterns

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aww man i wish that percy would just listen! arggg...i wonder if he's under the imperious! but whatever! great chapter!

CodeRomance

Author's Response: Thanks!



Reviewer: asad_asif_86 Signed Date: 2006.04.03 - 11:29AM Title: Patterns

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Reviewer: JohnniePolo Signed Date: 2006.03.26 - 10:33AM Title: Patterns

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obstreperous??? Awesome word!

Author's Response: ROTFL! That's what my mama would call a "twenty-five cent word" back when a quarter was WORTH something (and made of solid silver!) :-D Glad you liked it! Abraxan



Reviewer: jaybird Anonymous Date: 2006.01.15 - 11:45PM Title: Patterns

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Great!!!! keep the chps comin!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! Abraxan



Reviewer: cyborg Anonymous Date: 2006.01.14 - 10:53PM Title: Patterns

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great stuff... i almost wish you actually thought up harry potter and wrote the series your way because i enjoy your stories so much! keep it up.

Author's Response: ROTFL! Yeah, I wish I'd thought him up and written his stories too! I'd be a bazillionaire! heehee. And what fun to own such rich characters. Well, I'm working on my own original novel now, and I WILL own these characters! And I'm HOPING they'll be as interesting and fun and loveable as the HP characters. Thanks for writing! Abraxan



Reviewer: Renee Anonymous Date: 2006.01.08 - 08:16PM Title: Patterns

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I am enjoying your story so much! I had read The Refiner's Fire before this and it was completely awesome! Your work is flawless. :) I thought at first you were done with this story but I figured you were going to be adding more to The Time of Destiny because it didn't seem to be finished but I wasn't sure. :) I can't wait to read your next chapter(s), I'm so excited! Keep up the fantastic work!

Author's Response: Destiny is 34 chapters long and also has a two-part epilog (total epilog pages = about 85, I think). So now you know how many more chapters to look for! This COULDN'T be the END of the story -- This is Harry's seventh year and he's got to deal with Voldemort, remember? :-> Keep reading and reviewing! I'm glad you're enjoying the story! Abraxan



Reviewer: Vladius Anonymous Date: 2006.01.07 - 01:16PM Title: Patterns

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errrr.....sry for my mistake..i have no ideia that you would be "Mrs" Abraxan instead of "Mr" Abraxan,im realy sry x.x...hey nice chapter again =D (its abouth the 100th time i said that? lol xD) i've loved some of its "surprises" (percy being fired? great =D) but im missing some display of afection between the couples (not snogging or something like that..just that feeling of enjoy each other company). im very curious about what would be the "final battle" =o...im expectating great things ^^ congrats again o//

Author's Response: LOL! No problem, it happens a LOT! I just find it very funny for some reason! Glad you enjoyed the chapter! THere wasn't time for the kids to act "friendly" in this chapter -- the boys were busy straightening out the wizarding world! LOL! And the "final battle" is coming in just a few weeks! Keep reading and reviewing! Abraxan



Reviewer: master-spellcaster Anonymous Date: 2006.01.04 - 09:30PM Title: Patterns

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Hey abraxan, you are a good writer. I would love to have a London Lions jersey. That would be great. I am a major, major, major Harry Potter and Quidditch fan. The dementor capture spell is a great invention to inclue. I am writing a story as well: Harry Potter and the Du Sundavar Freohr. If it is actually posted and you see it, I would love for you to read and review it. If you see and review it, you can be as critical as you like. Include some writing tips whatever. I will not care. As I said above, would love a London Lions jersey.

Author's Response: Sorry, I'm not reading fanfic right now becuase I'm so busy writing! I'll try to look at it when Destiny's finished, but I've already started my original novel and need to crack down on that and finish a sculpture pretty soon so it will be bronze in time fo rmy first show in April. . .pant, pant, gasp WHEEZE! LOL! Glad you're enjoying my fic! And about the jersey -- I'll have the logo for it online in a day or two and alreayd have a web page set up with Paypal on it to take the orders. I'll put the info on all the sites that host my stories as soon as possible! Abraxan



Reviewer: blondeshorte88 Anonymous Date: 2006.01.04 - 08:29PM Title: Patterns

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Interesting chapter...another one w/o to much tragedy. Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: There can't be great tragedy in EVERY chapter! That would get boring after a while! heehee. Keep reading, the ride's gonna get rough pretty soon! Abraxan



Reviewer: Brianne Anonymous Date: 2006.01.04 - 08:04PM Title: Patterns

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Hey i love ur stories so keep writing! they're great!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot! Abraxan



Reviewer: murgel Signed Date: 2006.01.04 - 03:40PM Title: Patterns

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HA! what a chapter! You are brilliant. I would have liked to read more Ginny stuff but it was not meant to be. This chapter about politics was brilliant and did perfect in staging more events and pulling the plot further. its a full 10/10 and I would even give it special recomendations.

Author's Response: Wow! Thanks a lot!! What a lovely review! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! Abraxan



Reviewer: odonata Anonymous Date: 2006.01.04 - 03:36PM Title: Patterns

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quite impressive. one false note, though, given how you portray harry; namely, you did not give hermione the credit she deserved for the pattern wrt the mugglenappings. aside from this quibble, must say that i am eager to see the next chapter. pls write faster (even if this is why these small glitches arise).

Author's Response: Ginny noticed part of a pattern too -- they'll get their thanks, never fear. Glad you liked the chapter. Abraxan



Reviewer: erin Anonymous Date: 2006.01.04 - 03:19PM Title: Patterns

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Wonderful - as ever! Please keep posting asap!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot! Glad you enjoyed it! Abraxan



Reviewer: Xfactor Anonymous Date: 2006.01.04 - 09:49AM Title: Patterns

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I've said it once and I'll say it again...You just keep topping yourself. This chapter had me feeling like I was there in the middle of the "posturing and pontificating." Your descriptive talents have done the job again. I know there wasn't a lot of action to deal with here, but as you've shown, there doesn't always have to be a lot action going on for it to be a good chapter. I can only hope that the final battle scenes matches what you you have done so far. I could hardly hope for something better...could I? Well, with the talent that you have displayed so far, I'm sure you could, and will, rise to the occasion and give something truly magnificent. Now that I have you all buttered up, any hints as to what might be coming up? ;-)

Author's Response: OOoooo, you did a WONDERFUL job of buttering me up! Hints on what's coming up??? Hmmm, Blood, death, surprises, suspense, plot twists, snogging -- that kind of thing! heehee Thanks for a LOVELY review! Abraxan




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