Reviews For Combat Catalyst
Reviewer: jennyelf Signed Date: 2008.03.03 - 07:34PM Title: Combat Catalyst
I loved the effect of the burning wheel. There is always a burning wheel isn't there? One o fthe things I love about this universe is that girls don't just sit on the sidelines. With that in mind, I love what Luna did. :)
Reviewer: running_swift Signed Date: 2006.02.01 - 12:46PM Title: Combat Catalyst
Pink... fog? Pink fog? Pink... *shakes head*
Yes, well, I found this hilariously great! Obviously you have a not-so-soft spot for Snape, and you enjoy writing Luna. She's mad, she is. I do like Luna much more now that I've read your fics. Never really thought about what she'd be like as a main-ish character.
Trust Hermione to jot down every single detail of the battle... although that would just be a very her thing to do; besides, it was useful, right? I love that bit with Luna tying up the Death Eater whilst Harry and Ron are just talking about the erm... effective trick. Great trick, that. Have never had the pleasure of trying it, unfortunately. :p
Yet again, I praise Luna; for Neville. Nice cockney accent, by the way, Sergean'! I thought I'd never see the day that Neville would take charge; military-style or not!
You know, this has got to be one of the most enjoyable fics I've read. You write so well that it's funny without you actually having to realise it. If that made sense. Yes. Well.
Great, I say! Optimistic adventures!
Reviewer: ElusiveEvan Signed Date: 2005.12.30 - 08:31PM Title: Combat Catalyst
Excellent of course, yes loved the Einsteinism, and the Seargent-major charm made me giggle!
Reviewer: michelle Anonymous Date: 2005.12.14 - 10:24PM Title: Combat Catalyst
awsem,superb,great,more more more
Reviewer: o0xBeCky Signed Date: 2005.12.13 - 08:54PM Title: Combat Catalyst
awesome story.i agree w/ the other person- i love how you portrayed luna. you should try writing longer ones...your a good writer and one with chapters could be amazing !!
Reviewer: CRAZY4YO0Hx3 Anonymous Date: 2005.12.13 - 04:18PM Title: Combat Catalyst
i liked it a lot. i loved the way you portrayed luna, becuase a lot of people dont get her character right, and you hit it dead on. good take on the whole thing.
Reviewer: sammy Anonymous Date: 2005.12.11 - 05:30PM Title: Combat Catalyst
The plot was too predictable, and the characters weren't portrayed quite right. However, the writing was fair, and the grammar was good.
Reviewer: Breanie Anonymous Date: 2005.11.22 - 10:05PM Title: Combat Catalyst
i loved it! that is exaclty what i want to happen - couple wise - Nevile and Luna, Ginny and Harry, and Ron and Hermione
Reviewer: Nemo1024 Anonymous Date: 2005.11.12 - 09:26AM Title: Combat Catalyst
...oh, and of course the classic point of a burning wheels always rolling out of the debris. Nice take on the explosion scene!
Reviewer: Nemo1024 Anonymous Date: 2005.11.12 - 09:17AM Title: Combat Catalyst
There was something definitely of Terry Pratchett here.... "Monstrous Regiment" for one! Oh and I loved this line: "... immersed in a small and very private world of pain." You've done a brilliant work!
Reviewer: soxxloony Anonymous Date: 2005.11.12 - 01:09AM Title: Combat Catalyst
haha funny. cute and sexy with an evil mix.
Reviewer: harrypgirl Signed Date: 2005.11.04 - 07:20AM Title: Combat Catalyst
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Reviewer: Sunshine Anonymous Date: 2005.11.03 - 07:12PM Title: Combat Catalyst
You do like Terry Pratchett, don't you? I do too, and I got a huge kick out your story. I loved the million-to-one-chance and the sergeant major charm. Very funny. Just what I needed on a break from a research paper. Thanks!
Reviewer: joviality Signed Date: 2005.11.01 - 12:33PM Title: Combat Catalyst
A really enjoyable read =)
Reviewer: Astrid_rose Signed Date: 2005.10.30 - 06:11PM Title: Combat Catalyst
This is definitely my favorite so far of these entries. Excellent balance of humor and action. I also like the emotion involved with Harry cursing that Death Eater and Dumbledore understanding and helping. The cupids attacking the Death Eater, the line about stakes, Neville's sergeantness- all fun bits that lightened the otherwise tense mood. Good work!
Reviewer: jacmompat Anonymous Date: 2005.10.23 - 06:43PM Title: Combat Catalyst
Read for judging.
Reviewer: Courtney Anonymous Date: 2005.10.21 - 11:03PM Title: Combat Catalyst
that was good. but if that was a movie it would have i higher rating i think. if you picture it in your head its pretty graphic. the quills pinning the death eater, the explosion, ginny and the vampire.... cool though
Reviewer: Soder Anonymous Date: 2005.10.20 - 08:10PM Title: Combat Catalyst
the whole thing was movie like. i actually imagened it like a battlefield of WW2 or somethin'. Neviile was very funny indeed. Great story!
Reviewer: KikiDeeDee Anonymous Date: 2005.10.20 - 03:31PM Title: Combat Catalyst
Oh how charming. What an excellent little entry into the challenge. All the necessary elements for a stunner. Loved the Serg charm on Neville what a superb little idea.
Reviewer: Zentross Anonymous Date: 2005.10.17 - 10:23PM Title: Combat Catalyst
Great story, this was the best out of five I've read in the challenge so far. I enjoyed the character interactions and the detail. Good Job