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Reviewer: eaglebird Signed Date: 2007.02.14 - 12:20AM Title: Back Where we Started

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Late to read, way overdue, but we'll see how long it takes. Hmmmmm, an Indicator to tickle my imagination. And the prospect of the "six" together for the summer. Sounds interesting, but I really want to see how Harry and Ginny get along.

Author's Response: I hope you like the story. And I think the general consensus is that everyone hates Harry for the first half of the story...just so you know. =) Thanks so much for your great reviews



Reviewer: Breanie Signed Date: 2007.01.16 - 07:34PM Title: Back Where we Started

“Oh I’m sure you are going to hate being stuck with her. I hear those honeymoons are miserable,†Harry laughed as Bill threw his pillow at him.

ha i love this line! makes me laugh every time! so i just decided on the spot that im going to try to review every chapter!


Author's Response: what a nerd



Reviewer: saz j Signed Date: 2006.12.19 - 06:03AM Title: Back Where we Started

oooo, ooo i say, now i know why breanie likes this so much, nice first chapter

Author's Response: thank you very much, she likes you a lot too. lol. Let me know what you think of the rest of the fic!



Reviewer: dalf Anonymous Date: 2006.09.11 - 12:28AM Title: Back Where we Started

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I have high hopes from the first chapter. I have a few small bits of constructive critticism.

First Hedwig as Tom the innkeeper at the leaky caludron pointed out in book 3 "is a very clever pet". She will know that Harry has left and go to him (possibly arriving before he does). That is how it happens in cannon anyway, they are magical afterall, post owls.

The section where Remus and Petuna are talking and then it says Harry is angry and somethign about silencing somethign (the door?) does not read smoothly. I am still only about 80% sure I understood it. If "you should have silenced it" refers to the door then you should have added some bit about the fact that Harry was eves dropping, even if it is unintentional (this is not clear) and that he indicating that he heard and is annoyed, and is refering to the door.

Author's Response: I believe that even though she is a very "clever" pet, Harry has become more concerned with her because she was injured in Book 5. But that is my belief. Harry wasn't deliberatly eavesdropping, rather he could hear his aunt and Remus talking.



Reviewer: Breanie Signed Date: 2006.07.27 - 08:01PM Title: Back Where we Started

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i love the thing about the honeymoon - that makes me laugh - im sure they can be VERY miserable lol. and what do u mean my petunia having an indicator??



Reviewer: Sorn Signed Date: 2006.07.23 - 12:58PM Title: Back Where we Started

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Good start, and I am wondering if Moony and the old nag have a history. 10/10



Reviewer: hpf2114 Signed Date: 2006.07.22 - 03:40PM Title: Back Where we Started

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Reviewer: saz j Signed Date: 2006.03.23 - 03:21PM Title: Back Where we Started

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wow, different, i wonder wot all the whisperin was about, lol, im addin u 2 mi favorite, i liked it so much!



Reviewer: Anna Anonymous Date: 2005.11.20 - 09:13AM Title: Back Where we Started

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okay,let me get this strat why is Aunt Petunia[PENNY] so nice to Harry?



Reviewer: Sirius Ain't Dead Anonymous Date: 2005.10.18 - 01:36AM Title: Back Where we Started

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It was all right.

Author's Response: Um...Thanks I think



Reviewer: Spenser Hemmingway Signed Date: 2005.10.11 - 08:08AM Title: Back Where we Started

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Interesting characterization of Dudley and Aunt Petunia. I guess that there's someone for everyone...even Dudley. I like how you explained Bill's transformation. I hope that he scheduled the honeymoon around the full moon.



Reviewer: Treck Signed Date: 2005.10.10 - 08:35PM Title: Back Where we Started

Ahh nope. Lucy is my nickname for Malfoy Sr.



Reviewer: JSchro Anonymous Date: 2005.10.08 - 03:26PM Title: Back Where we Started

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I like your start so far.I'm interested to see where the Aunt Petunia thing goes. Keep up the good work!



Reviewer: Treck Signed Date: 2005.10.05 - 12:35PM Title: Back Where we Started

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umm... More please

Author's Response: as you wish!




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