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Reviewer: Believer Signed Date: 2010.01.25 - 12:46AM Title: Say It Ain't So
Just so you know, you have an inconsistency on whether Dumbledor had a son or daughter. First Snape makes the comment: "Verona was Albus’ granddaughter. He raised her when his son and daughter-in-law were murdered by the Dark Lord’s alliances." Then Dumbledore says: "When Verona’s parents were murdered, my darling daughter Venice, I tore the babe away from England and hid her in southern France."
Other than this, I am really enjoying your story.
Reviewer: eaglebird Signed Date: 2007.02.16 - 07:14PM Title: Say It Ain't So
OoooH!!! My favorite chaper by far, so far!!!
I'm really glad you introduced the Founders. Their lessons are so valuable to all of us.
I like the link to Harry's grandfather. Altho' JKR has downplayed the role of harry's ancestry, I think she really missed an important opportunity to expand the scope of Harry's Chosen One and most powerful wizard etc. status.
Author's Response: I think she had to leave Harry's family out of it for a reason. In university studies of literature, the true "hero" must come from a mysterious background. Harry has that, not only the unknown family but his arrival at the Dursleys and Voldemorts attempted murder of him. I wanted to tie Harry back to his family so that he could see, even though he is alone in one sense, he is as much a part of that family as Ginny is to hers
Reviewer: Ultimateauror Anonymous Date: 2006.12.28 - 09:45AM Title: Say It Ain't So
Lord, my love. You know, I was going to wait until the end, and tie up the last three chapters with one long review, but I was so afraid that by doing so, I would leave something out. This chapter has been well worth the wait. So many things in this chapter made me beam with happiness.
Firstly, I love your Snape. To me, and many disagree, Snape is the ultimate character of redemption. He had so much against him for so long, yet you never gave up on him. That is who he has become to me, and I am happy that you are able to draw him out so nicely on paper. The details of your plot are wonderful, from the relationship of her with Ms. Dumbledore, to the transference of sides is wonderful. I am not entirely clear why Hermione was kept in the loop, unless it is clearly because out of the group, she has the least emotional involvement, and is typically the voice of reason. If that is why, I agree, if there were other motives, I am not sure I picked up on them.
Secondly, your Draco. I am not entirely sure if Draco would be capable of a turnaround, as he is a coward, but you have allowed him to grow, which is the most important thing for him. I would not necessarily think he would fight along Harry's side in the war, but he has evolved emotionally into something else, albeit through his "worst enemies." For that, you have captured my Draco perfectly.
Ginny and Harry. This goes without saying, I have been fignting you on this from day one, and you have made my agonizing well worth it. They are wonderful together, and I love the way you incorporate the Founders into this chapter. Not only were there gifts to the young lovers well crafted and thougth out, but their emergance from the paintings was a gift in itself, that I did not expect. I am floored by your unending stream of creativity. I adore the personalities that you have given them, and how each of them has impacted this story.
And the idea of Harry's scar being the horcruz, is ver imaginiative, but how can he survive without it? And if he is not meant to survive, then why go through the pain of having the founders protection? I know you are going to answer all of this for me, but I am worried for my hero's safety...
Okay, I think I have summed up my fellings on this chapter, moving along now.
Love,
Court
Author's Response: Hello beloved! I'm so glad you have come over to our little site here! I'm glad you like Severus, to me he is just the one person we all love to hate, but hate that we can't love him any less. lol. He sought out Hermione because she is the voice of reason, in the sequel he'll make a little more sense. Draco is going to change and though he could never bring himself to fight along side Harry, he can fight for the world that would suit him best. At this point, the only good thing in his world is Susan and he knows that. I'm glad you like Ginny and Harry. I know the wait was painful, but I know you loved it all the same. I love you and your reviews and I can't wait so see what you think of the rest!
Reviewer: saz j Signed Date: 2006.12.22 - 06:13AM Title: Say It Ain't So
beautifully written, congrats
Author's Response: thanks!
Reviewer: General Kenobi Signed Date: 2006.12.15 - 03:39PM Title: Say It Ain't So
Hahahahahaha! Dart practice! Brilliant! I was laughing my ass off ont hat one. By the way, was it a moving portrait? That would be hilarious to see old Snivellis dodging darts, and the glee on old McGonagall while trying to poke holes in the old greasy git.
Author's Response: LOL, I'll let you use your imagination, Eddie. I'm glad you liked it! Stay out of trouble this weekend...for a change.
Reviewer: Breanie Signed Date: 2006.12.12 - 02:05PM Title: Say It Ain't So
aww i love it u kno i do! and haha mcg throwing darts at the portrait!
Author's Response: lol thanks sweet
Reviewer: aryell Signed Date: 2006.12.12 - 01:25PM Title: Say It Ain't So
Ok all I can say is that this is one of the best fanfics I've read plot wise. There are quite a few grammar and sentence structure mistakes, but then again who am I to say? I have the worst sentence structure in the world whenit comes to wrting.
I've got to say that Ron becoming mute is genius! It really showed Ron's development in character. I almost wish you were JKR so that she made Ron mute in book seven. Keep up the good work I'm giving it a TEN!!
Author's Response: *Ducks as JKR throws a very heavy book at me.* LOL Don't say that! She is amazing, but thank you for the wonderful compliments.
Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2006.12.12 - 11:06AM Title: Say It Ain't So
Excellent. I can see how Harry would feel shattered by the news from Hermione. But Ginny seems to have what it takes to help him.
Author's Response: Im always glad to hear when you agree with me. LOL. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Moonlight51 Signed Date: 2006.12.12 - 12:44AM Title: Say It Ain't So
:'-) that was a rather touching chapter..
Author's Response: thank you very much
Reviewer: Ginzig1 Signed Date: 2006.12.11 - 08:46PM Title: Say It Ain't So
I loved the tender moment between Harry and Ginny, nicely written. Interesting gifts the founders gave Harry and Ginny. I look forward to seeing exactly how they are used to bring down Tom. Great chapter.
Author's Response: thank you milady
