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Reviewer: eaglebird Signed Date: 2007.02.16 - 12:29AM Title: The Second

The story seems to have developed its own rhythm. Harry has accepted Ginny's "happiness" with Colin which he cannot provide. I wonder just how serious the relationship is betweeen Ginny and Colin, eg, are they just holding hands or going a lot further. I think that knowledge would drive me and Harry into desperate measures, and forget the "happiness" aspect. Remus as head of the order and Ron as second foreshadows the transaition into more battles with Voldemort. I really enjoyed the general recognition of Ginny's powers, as well as Moilly's by the other Order members present. Glad to seeRon and Hermione really solidified in their relationship.

Author's Response: Colin and Ginny's relationship is based off a relationship I have in my own life. Ron and Hermione aren't solid yet, they just have an unspoken understanding

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Reviewer: saz j Signed Date: 2006.12.19 - 05:06PM Title: The Second

o ohhhh, what happened now?

Author's Response: keep reading and reviewing!

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Reviewer: Sorn Signed Date: 2006.07.23 - 01:12PM Title: The Second

I am still not buying Ron as #2, and the way Harry gave orders and Ron followed tells me that he is not #2.

I do love the story though and hope you keep it as intersting as it has been. I will be sure you review your next chapter and will most likly be over Ron as #2... maybe.

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Reviewer: General Kenobi Signed Date: 2006.07.06 - 09:13PM Title: The Second

Oh man, erm.. somebody is hurt. I Wonder Which Whoosy got hurt? I'm glad Ron will have a position where he will no longer have his inferiority complex getting in the way of his judgment. Update soon.

Author's Response: yay much better thanks!

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