Reviews For Love Me, That's All I Ask Of You
Reviewer: dramaking341 Signed Date: 2006.03.13 - 08:12PM Title: Part Two I loved it...please do write more to it ~Matt Reviewer: madeye232 Signed Date: 2006.01.31 - 12:50AM Title: Part Two Great story. I love the humor of the weasley's! well done. a 50/50 rating if at all possible Reviewer: Erica Anonymous Date: 2005.10.09 - 02:33PM Title: Part Two Great story. I love the humor of the weasley's! Reviewer: Torak Signed Date: 2005.09.16 - 06:17AM Title: Part Two Um... where did the ending go? The story was enjoyable (although the ending was far too abrupt; this feels like the setup for another three or four chapters), but you really need to work on your English. The dialogue needs some work, as does the grammar, and there are a few bits that don't quite sound right, but on the whole I enjoyed it. But it definitely needs a continuation - with short stories, as with any fiction, the ending is one of the most important parts. The end is the last thing a reader will read, and thus what they'll remember clearest; with no real ending, all they'll remember is "oh yes, the unfinished one". Reviewer: GW_Dreamer Signed Date: 2005.09.01 - 09:56PM Title: Part Two I loooved it!!!! It was cute! Besos Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Date: 2005.09.01 - 09:25PM Title: Part Two I LOVED this chap!!!! I think it is a shame that you are going to publish no more however. You could take this quite far it has extraordinary story potiential Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Date: 2005.09.01 - 09:25PM Title: Part Two I LOVED this chap!!!! I think it is a shame that you are going to publish no more however. You could take this quite far it has extraordinary story potiential Reviewer: Shell Anonymous Date: 2005.08.31 - 09:23AM Title: Part Two It was nice and it had fluff! Reviewer: soder Anonymous Date: 2005.08.30 - 05:35PM Title: Part Two VERY UN-CHARECTERISTIC!!! its just dull. Reviewer: cori_b Anonymous Date: 2005.08.30 - 08:59AM Title: Part Two how FUNNY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I absolutly Love it EEEKKKKKEEE! | |||||||
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