Search:

SIYE Time:13:22 on 28th March 2024
SIYE Login: no


Reviewer: dramaking341 Signed Date: 2006.03.13 - 08:12PM Title: Part Two

starstarstarstarstar

I loved it...please do write more to it ~Matt



Reviewer: madeye232 Signed Date: 2006.01.31 - 12:50AM Title: Part Two

starstarstarstarstar

Great story. I love the humor of the weasley's! well done. a 50/50 rating if at all possible



Reviewer: Erica Anonymous Date: 2005.10.09 - 02:33PM Title: Part Two

starstarstarstarstar

Great story. I love the humor of the weasley's!



Reviewer: Torak Signed Date: 2005.09.16 - 06:17AM Title: Part Two

starstarstar

Um... where did the ending go? The story was enjoyable (although the ending was far too abrupt; this feels like the setup for another three or four chapters), but you really need to work on your English. The dialogue needs some work, as does the grammar, and there are a few bits that don't quite sound right, but on the whole I enjoyed it. But it definitely needs a continuation - with short stories, as with any fiction, the ending is one of the most important parts. The end is the last thing a reader will read, and thus what they'll remember clearest; with no real ending, all they'll remember is "oh yes, the unfinished one".



Reviewer: GW_Dreamer Signed Date: 2005.09.01 - 09:56PM Title: Part Two

starstarstarstarstar

I loooved it!!!! It was cute! Besos



Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Date: 2005.09.01 - 09:25PM Title: Part Two

starstarstarstarstar

I LOVED this chap!!!! I think it is a shame that you are going to publish no more however. You could take this quite far it has extraordinary story potiential

Author's Response: I might go further with this story but I'm not sure... I have to come up with a good storyline for the next parts... but i'll try :P



Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Date: 2005.09.01 - 09:25PM Title: Part Two

starstarstarstarstar

I LOVED this chap!!!! I think it is a shame that you are going to publish no more however. You could take this quite far it has extraordinary story potiential



Reviewer: Shell Anonymous Date: 2005.08.31 - 09:23AM Title: Part Two

starstarstarstarstar

It was nice and it had fluff!



Reviewer: soder Anonymous Date: 2005.08.30 - 05:35PM Title: Part Two

half-star

VERY UN-CHARECTERISTIC!!! its just dull.



Reviewer: cori_b Anonymous Date: 2005.08.30 - 08:59AM Title: Part Two

starstarstarstarstar

how FUNNY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I absolutly Love it EEEKKKKKEEE!




../back
‘! Go To Top ‘!

Sink Into Your Eyes is hosted by Grey Media Internet Services. HARRY POTTER, characters, names and related characters are trademarks of Warner Bros. TM & © 2001-2006. Harry Potter Publishing Rights © J.K.R. Note the opinions on this site are those made by the owners. All stories(fanfiction) are owned by the author and are subject to copyright law under transformative use. Authors on this site take no compensation for their works. This site © 2003-2006 ALL RIGHTS RESERVED. Special thanks to: Aredhel, Kaz, Michelle, and Jeco for all the hard work on SIYE 1.0 and to Marta for the wonderful artwork.
Featured Artwork © 2003-2006 by Yethro.
Design and code © 2006 by SteveD3(AdminQ)
Additional coding © 2008 by melkior and Bear