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Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.09.11 - 04:52AM Title: THE MAZE

Hmm do like how you do Ginny's voice in his head almost always line up to what he was thinking in cannon just kinda caught that.

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Reviewer: MuggleBorn Signed Date: 2008.02.25 - 05:07AM Title: THE MAZE

I'm liking the series so far, and the telling from Ginny's pov is nice. However, there is some merit to the comment that Ginny's interference somewhat cheapens Harry's accomplishments. In most other H/G bond stories I've read, Harry and Ginny tend to work as a team (both of them being aware of the connection). In this, Ginny seems to be the real brains behind the operation, with Harry just going along for the ride and following her instructions. With the amount of work that Ginny does for the two of them, you might as well put her in Harry's place. On the other hand, that would completely alter their characters, so I'm not exactly sure what to say about it.

Also, you may want to get a beta to take a look at it. Its well-written, but there are a few words missing here and there and you have a tendency to skip spaces on occasion. Minor errors like that detract from the overall quality of the story and make it difficult to read at times.

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Reviewer: Scorcher Signed Date: 2007.03.25 - 11:16AM Title: THE MAZE

And ofcourse Harry would have given up without our hero Ginny coming to his aid. So what now he's a whimp? He practically had to have Ginny guide him through the whole damn thing. I really don't get what you need the problems in the other level of existence for. It's not like you need something in which Ginny is the hero to write about seeing as shes doing everything as it is. Oh and I can just see where this will go in the next book.. a confrontation in the department of mysteries really is going to be a peace of cake with a 15 year old female voldemort in the group. Or are they going to go there at all seeing as Ginny is so god damn clever that she'll know the visions Harry sees is a hoax. I'm guessing Sirius won't die in this one.. it's a damn shame..

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Reviewer: MIssGinny Anonymous Date: 2006.05.17 - 03:29PM Title: THE MAZE

once again another good chapter! i love the aspect of seeing some of this from Ginny's point of view i think she needs such a bigger part in all this and you have provided that! thank you!! and keep up the good work!!!!!

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Reviewer: critmo Anonymous Date: 2006.01.16 - 09:03AM Title: THE MAZE

I've been partly re-reading, partly reading for the first time and just wanted o let you know that this is a brilliant chapter. The interchanging levels on which Ginny feels and acts become very clear.

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Reviewer: starpikmin Signed Date: 2005.06.27 - 09:09PM Title: THE MAZE

Wow!! I was expecting this chapter for so long! I took my breath away! Again you did an amazing job! I can only say that I loved it and I hope you update soon.

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Reviewer: sillymin Anonymous Date: 2005.06.27 - 04:58PM Title: THE MAZE

wow, that was.... breathtaking. I can't imagine what going through that and not helping would have been like for Ginny, but with this chapter, of course, I can kind of see the bare bones of what the feeling must have been like. Great job! This chapter was so.... real.... and trust Michael to be completely ignorant. And, I must say, I'm glad that he was ignorant and Ginny had Bill there. Michael would have just ruined it... I was rooting for him to remain oblivious and stay out of the way! Great job. I can't wait for more from your world.... it's such an addicting place to read about, though I feel like I'm actually there while reading much of the time

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