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Reviewer: I Love Ginerva Signed Date: 2012.05.01 - 02:36AM Title: THE DOPPLEGANGER EFFECT
hmm not sure I like the idea of Ginny thinking of Draco as sexy lol. Other than that sickening thought, good chapter overall
ILG
Reviewer: jediprankster Signed Date: 2009.02.17 - 12:41AM Title: THE DOPPLEGANGER EFFECT
I don't normally review part way through an already completed story, but I just had to comment on this chapter. I have read one other story with a soul bond/mate thing between Harry and Ginny where it started this early and Ginny didn't tell Harry about it right away. The other story didn't handle the Time Turner duplicate Harry in even a remotely logical way. Ginny didn't feel two of Harry. She felt Harry disappear momentarily, and felt it as a crippling loss. Your way is better. Not only did you have it make perfect sense, but the way you covered all of those events without changing any of them, yet still made it interesting was fantastic.
Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.09.10 - 11:45PM Title: THE DOPPLEGANGER EFFECT
Really like how you have kept to the cannon but still play around it which to me I love not many can do that really do wish that you wouldn't of given away the future part but now I am assuming you did so ppl would stop sending you flames.
Reviewer: Huskers Signed Date: 2008.03.08 - 12:58AM Title: THE DOPPLEGANGER EFFECT
This chapter, like all your writing, reads well. You have good structure of sentences and things flow well. But, if you were going to keep to cannon on the whole time turner and saving of Sirus and Buckbeak, you probably should have pulled the book out and gotten things and events word for word
Reviewer: Scorcher Signed Date: 2007.03.24 - 07:14PM Title: THE DOPPLEGANGER EFFECT
It's all well and good speking about sexuality and stuff as 12 and 13 year olds (I sertainly did) but when you start to speak about physical aspects it all goes horribly wrong. "well-defined chest and shoulder muscles" on a thirteen year old. What? I played hockey, a much more physically demanding sport I think than quidditch, and I'm sorry to tell you but at thirteen we were not allowed to lift weights as it could have impaired our growth. What we did do is push-ups, sit-ups, pull-ups and stuff and you have to do a whole lot of those to get a well-defined chest and shoulder muscles at such young age. And I highly doubt it that a pureblood wizard such as Malfoy would lower himself to physical training. Unless they've got spells for that...
Otherwise I liked the chapter..
Reviewer: immortalphoenix Anonymous Date: 2006.12.18 - 07:06PM Title: THE DOPPLEGANGER EFFECT
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Reviewer: MIssGinny Anonymous Date: 2006.05.11 - 03:57PM Title: THE DOPPLEGANGER EFFECT
another excellent chapter~~~~~~
Reviewer: cucio Signed Date: 2006.05.01 - 07:10PM Title: THE DOPPLEGANGER EFFECT
Oooooooh!!! Superb! I normally cringe at the soulmates concept, but I didn't see this chapter coming at all!!! I am gobsmacked, flabbergasted, enraptured... My deepest admiration!
Reviewer: Chreechree Anonymous Date: 2006.01.07 - 03:10AM Title: THE DOPPLEGANGER EFFECT
OK, I have to comment again. That was very well done. I don't blame Ginny from having to stay in bed to manage all of that at once. Fun to watch her watch both Harrys at once.
Reviewer: Sibling Creature Anonymous Date: 2005.02.15 - 10:26PM Title: THE DOPPLEGANGER EFFECT
I've been looking forward to this chapter... I was wondering what effect Dual Harry would have on Ginny, and I wasn't disappointed. Also, seeing both timelines narrated simulataneously is something of a treat. :-)
Poor Ginny...
I can only think that any feedback from Ginny during that time could only have added to Harrys feelings of deja vu... :-)
Author's Response: Can you imagine? Must have been hard for both of them!
Reviewer: ronda Anonymous Date: 2005.02.14 - 08:37PM Title: THE DOPPLEGANGER EFFECT
Wow, what a confusing chapter that you put together beautifally. Well done. I could see how all those Harry's could make her sick.
Reviewer: destin4fl Anonymous Date: 2005.02.14 - 04:46PM Title: THE DOPPLEGANGER EFFECT
wow that was cool! well done! i knew what was going on and i felt a little crazy! great job!
Reviewer: Melindaleo Anonymous Date: 2005.02.14 - 02:41PM Title: THE DOPPLEGANGER EFFECT
Although I really liked seeing Ginny making friends of her own at the end, I would have loved a glimpse inside Harry's thoughts on being denied the home with Sirius. I like seeing these things through Ginny's eyes. I mean, we always assume from canon, and it's obvious he was sad returning, but I like getting it from a different perspective. In fact, I'm beyond delighted at going through GoF. I've been so eager for this. The First Task, the Thrid Taks, the Yule Ball,,,but particularly Harry's isolation during the fight with Ron. I can't wait to see Ginny's thoughts on all this. Eagerly anticipating...
Author's Response: Thank you, it's hard to cover everything . . .as you can tell, when I go into specifics, someone somewhere isn't happy.
