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Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.09.10 - 06:39PM Title: Avatar
Hmm don't like that you have had Ginny hear that conversation and that you let us know what is going to happen I really do think that takes alot away from your story since now know what to expect which to me really does hurt since not really going to get any surprises and takes away the waiting game of when does Harry realize what is going on with him and Ginny so that is kinda sad really not too pleased you did that don't know what made you do it.
Reviewer: Huskers Signed Date: 2008.03.07 - 04:32PM Title: Avatar
I still really like how you're writing your story, but witnessing the conversation between Dumbledore and Mira, is really a mistake. You've given away the ending, and but for the most diehard of readers, you've taken away the whole reason to read the story. That's just my opinion. Luckily for me, I want to know how they get there, not just that they get there.
Reviewer: Scorcher Signed Date: 2007.03.24 - 01:23PM Title: Avatar
The problem with giving Ginny these kind of powers is that it tends to make Harry ordinary. There is no need for Harry if you have a younger person with more power and knowledge running around. And to make her a girl makes that person even more extrordinary in the magical world. Now that is alright if you are writing a Ginny Weasly story because then you can have Ginny do all the cool stuff like figure out the Sirius situation and go through the triwizard tournament. But if it's a Harry Potter story from Ginnys POV then it gets strange: what is the point of having Harry do it all when theres a girl looking through his eyes who could do it all better.
I know this story and this series is pretty much written already but I hope that you've been careful with the amount of power that you've given to Ginny. Not to mention that giving Harry the time to be a "normal" boy means that when he will start training, he'll be years behind Ginny.. and again that's just wrong. Why train someone if you already have another person who could do it with their eyes closed..
Reviewer: immortalphoenix Anonymous Date: 2006.12.18 - 07:05PM Title: Avatar
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Reviewer: Rocky235 Signed Date: 2006.06.09 - 11:26AM Title: Avatar
Poor Harry, he doesn't have a chance. Ginny even knows how many kids they'll have. At least at first.
Reviewer: MIssGinny Anonymous Date: 2006.05.11 - 01:26PM Title: Avatar
wowsa another really excellent chapter but im still trying to figure out who mira is. at first i was thinking lily but it said lily wasnt an elemtal person so whoooo is it???
Reviewer: Pari Anonymous Date: 2005.04.06 - 12:04AM Title: Avatar
Okay, just to clarify, Ginny does know about the Order, because when she and Albus were talking in her garden she compared Merlin and the Round Table to Dumbledore and the OotP. Still love the story, im just a finicky witch! PS: I just ordered your book! It should be here in 7 to 10 business days!
Reviewer: Firenze Anonymous Date: 2005.04.02 - 10:02AM Title: Avatar
Great chapter
