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Reviewer: I Love Ginerva Signed Date: 2023.01.24 - 04:33AM Title: The Last Lonely Birthday
Wait, where's the battle at the ministry?
Reviewer: RealmofShadows Signed Date: 2009.12.08 - 01:08AM Title: The Last Lonely Birthday
Great story! Can't wait to continue with it tomorrow!!
Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.09.11 - 09:40PM Title: The Last Lonely Birthday
Hmm well I was thinking that you had started writing this before HBP but now I am not to sure.
Reviewer: arien043 Anonymous Date: 2007.09.25 - 11:58AM Title: The Last Lonely Birthday
It was a nice chapter, but it was spoilt by the formatting problems you seem to have in this last chapter. Maybe you could fix it? It's downright distracting, trying to decipher what you've written when every fifth word is joined to it's neighbour.
Reviewer: onibaku Signed Date: 2007.08.02 - 06:14PM Title: The Last Lonely Birthday
well, this it's a really good history, i like it. But i see that it's not finish, please update soon.
Reviewer: MIssGinny Anonymous Date: 2006.05.18 - 04:22PM Title: The Last Lonely Birthday
another good chapter loved the paperweight harry sent
Reviewer: critmo Signed Date: 2006.05.02 - 11:39AM Title: The Last Lonely Birthday
Another interesting chapter. Now, I'll be interested to know how the thing with Dean happened.
Reviewer: Sibling Creature Signed Date: 2006.04.28 - 04:00PM Title: The Last Lonely Birthday
I had been looking forward to this chapter when you started writing of Ginny hooking up with Michael, and as nice as is is to see the end of that, I find this particular story doesn't hold the same interest for me anymore as the other stories in this series. My main issue with this story, is that it felt like all the fluffy moments between Harry and Ginny should have steered the story in a different direction. I realise that as a bridging story to a post OOTP fic the path was pretty much set from the start, but it just feels too... forced. .. if that makes any sense.
That said, I do still intend to continue reading it to the end, when you eventually get there. Its still nice to be able to see some of these scenes from another perspective. :-)
Reviewer: witowsmp Signed Date: 2006.04.28 - 02:12PM Title: The Last Lonely Birthday
I didn't know you were continuing this story until I happened to check siye today. The last one I'd read was chapter 25. Harry remembered her birthday yet again! I can't wait for this story to be finished! I guess it'll end when they get on the train.
Reviewer: Ted Anonymous Date: 2006.04.28 - 11:40AM Title: The Last Lonely Birthday
I have enjoyed this entire series several times, and this just closes a gap between two of your stories in the sequence.
I was a little disappointed in how it ended it seemed you had gotten tired of writing it and you left a bunch of plot bunnies out there.
Reviewer: Ginavera Signed Date: 2006.04.28 - 10:45AM Title: The Last Lonely Birthday
The only thing I didn't like about this chapter is that it took to long!!!Errr! I also noticed more grammatical errors than usual, but the chapter was nice! Thanks for breaking it off with Corner for her! He was getting to be an annoyance
Reviewer: brad Signed Date: 2006.04.27 - 11:40PM Title: The Last Lonely Birthday
The formatting on this is horrible; lots of words juxtaposed together, the intervening space that should be between them deleted. Both on the normal page and the 'for printing' version. Can this be fixed?
Reviewer: Chreechree Signed Date: 2006.04.27 - 07:56PM Title: The Last Lonely Birthday
Last week, I went back through the series (through Tempest) and loved it all over again. I thought about sending you an email to ask if you planned on finishing Forgotten Girl as it's an odd gap in the middle of the series. I assumed that you're busy with your new story (urgh, I really do need to start it) and hoped maybe you'd get around to completing this later. I'm thrilled to see that you're filling in the blank space and look forward to seeing just how the Ministry plays out (in terms of Ginny's reactions to Harry and his thoughts). This chapter exhibited one of my favorite elements about the early parts of this series: when Harry “gets it” without realizing he gets it. Even though I know how it all plays out, I’m excited for Ginny as she’s only weeks away from their relationship changing. So well done!
Reviewer: Tron Anonymous Date: 2005.02.07 - 03:40PM Title: The Last Lonely Birthday
Is this the entire chapter?
