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Reviewer: griffindorechicky101 Signed Date: 2007.08.07 - 11:04PM Title: Happy Birthday Ginerva!

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I REALLY LIKED IT BUT ISNT RON SUPPOSED TO HAVE BLUE EYES AND GINNY BROWN!?



Reviewer: Luna Anonymous Date: 2005.08.28 - 07:28AM Title: Happy Birthday Ginerva!

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Please 4 give the critism as i am a huge of your stories (Loved 'Loves Requiem') but i just had 2 say sumfing as i alsways notice it wen i c it;Ginny's eyes are brown not blue.actually u got her and Ron the rong way around becoz Ginny has brown, Ron has blue.Sorry, thats the only critism but i luuuurrrrvve it so far.lol.*L*



Reviewer: Raiining Signed Date: 2005.03.07 - 08:37PM Title: Happy Birthday Ginerva!

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good story! Liked how you worked Ron, Hermione and Remus, etc. into it. reading on!



Reviewer: Rhiannon Anonymous Date: 2005.02.05 - 04:29PM Title: Happy Birthday Ginerva!

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Um, doesn't Ginny have brown eyes? But blue eyes are still cool. Hey, good story so far. I like to write too, so I'm glad you value that profession. But then again, you're a writer too. Duh.



Reviewer: sunflowerchild Anonymous Date: 2004.12.03 - 04:00PM Title: Happy Birthday Ginerva!

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good story, but why do you keep posting the same chaps. again and again?

Author's Response: Because the second chapter originally had 500 words, and I needed 1000. But now that I have the third chapter, I can finally get on with the story. : )



Reviewer: AngieGS Anonymous Date: 2004.11.24 - 11:04AM Title: Happy Birthday Ginerva!

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What a great and clever adaptation of an old classic. I love how you have done the characters. Keep up the good work, Angie



Reviewer: Myk Signed Date: 2004.11.24 - 10:58AM Title: Happy Birthday Ginerva!

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Well, this is a surprise. I started reading this thinking that I would not enjoy it. However, you have managed to enthrall me! I love the way that the characters are different from canon because of their different upbringing and yet subtly similar. I look forward to the next chapter. Cheers, Mike

Author's Response: Thank you. I should add that I don't have many male fans, so that's cool. Thank you for the input Mike!



Reviewer: Pink Lizard Anonymous Date: 2004.11.24 - 01:18AM Title: Happy Birthday Ginerva!

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This is to Lizzie Weasley. I'm sorry, I didn't mean to offend you or anything, it sounded to me that you didn't like the story in my dim-witted mind, really sorry again. Love Pink Lizardx



Reviewer: Meganne Anonymous Date: 2004.11.23 - 08:54PM Title: Happy Birthday Ginerva!

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so far i really like this story, i loved the movie, Ever After so i'm looking forward to seeing the similarities between the two and what you change. I agree with one of the previous reviewers who said that you should make a change to two from the movie to make the story all yours. you're the author, own the piece of work and make it yours! now, im interested to see what you come up with next. and im definatley not trying to tell you what to write but for some reason i'm seeing images of Fred and George in little pink tutus and sparking wands granting wishes to little red-headed step-children ;)



Reviewer: aurora Anonymous Date: 2004.11.23 - 06:58PM Title: Happy Birthday Ginerva!

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I love the story, as a love the movie it's based on. Clever idea. Please update soon.



Reviewer: ll4ever Anonymous Date: 2004.11.23 - 04:53PM Title: Happy Birthday Ginerva!

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Oh! This is fantastic. A wonderful twist to the normal H/G fics. Please keep writing!



Reviewer: Lizzie Weasley Signed Date: 2004.11.22 - 04:17PM Title: Happy Birthday Ginerva!

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I want to clarify something in which Pink Lizard stated. Idid NOT say I didn't like this story as it is. I love it. Really I do. It's in my favourites so you'd think I'd like it somewhat right? I just thought that changing the Ever After plot just a smiggent might make the story a bit more interesting than having to listen to the movie all over again. I love the movie I really do and your fic is wonderful. Copying the plot is great I love how it's going. Just do something else as well, you know. Make something (Anything) different. I really love this fic and I don't agree with the way PL decided to say that I hadn't liked your story becasue I did. Maybe next time though she should plan out what she says before she says it. Sorry if there was any confusion. ~Love from Lizzie



Reviewer: Pink Lizard Signed Date: 2004.11.22 - 11:03AM Title: Happy Birthday Ginerva!

Pink Lizard again, sorry but I have to disagree with Lizzie Weasley, I think your story is great and it's a great idea to use a movie, especially as it was from a good movie!

Author's Response: Thank you, but she wasnt' dissing it or anything. She was just tellimg me not to stay completely with the story - she's right, it would be really boring if I did that. : )



Reviewer: Love4aSeeker Anonymous Date: 2004.11.21 - 04:48PM Title: Happy Birthday Ginerva!

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Continue, Continue, Continue!



Reviewer: Lizzie Weasley Anonymous Date: 2004.11.20 - 10:31AM Title: Happy Birthday Ginerva!

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I really like what you're doing with this fic. I understand that you've decided to frame it from Ever After and stuff but don't you think you could somehow make it your own. Like do something to it that makes it a bit different in some way. I mean I don't want to read the movie all over you know. I want something a bit different even if the plot is following the same lines.You know don't just copy everything. MAke some new and exciting twist of your own. I'll be looking out for this fic so expect another review soon. Oh and don't forget to update. I can't wait to see this fic in action

Author's Response: Thanx for the tips Lizzie. I'm currently working on the 4th chapter, but the 3rd one seems to have disappeared - so I need to get to the bottom of this little mystery. Thank you for the reviews, and I think I'm going to stick with Ginny's name spelled Ginerva. I'm sorry, but I was told that it was Ginerva and I'm too far in the fic to change it now. Thanx again!



Reviewer: Ginevra Potter Anonymous Date: 2004.11.19 - 06:18PM Title: Happy Birthday Ginerva!

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Her name is GINEVRA not GINERVA

Author's Response: Sorry, sorry - please don't kill me. I thought it was Ginerva. And I liked Ginerva better anyway.



Reviewer: YellowJello817 Anonymous Date: 2004.11.19 - 05:20PM Title: Happy Birthday Ginerva!

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Wonderful story, love it a lot! Please write more very soon! Thankies! I'll be watching out for more...



Reviewer: Ginny_Potter_89 Signed Date: 2004.11.18 - 11:22PM Title: Happy Birthday Ginerva!

Okay, I'm working up the third chaprter - thank you so much for the reviews!



Reviewer: Pink Lizard Signed Date: 2004.11.17 - 02:25PM Title: Happy Birthday Ginerva!

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I really am enjoying your story, Please update soon! Can't wait to read more this will definetly be an interesting read!



Reviewer: Comet Moon Signed Date: 2004.11.17 - 09:48AM Title: Happy Birthday Ginerva!

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I Loved Ever After. Glad to see James and Lilly get along though. Can't wait for more




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