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Reviewer: xo_morgie33 Signed Date: 2007.01.19 - 09:10PM Title: Blood in the Moonlight
Huh.
That was confusing. But if I understood it---I'm sure it woudl be very good.
Huh.
Reviewer: orango Signed Date: 2006.07.15 - 01:32AM Title: Blood in the Moonlight
this story is kind of disturbing...
Reviewer: madeye232 Signed Date: 2006.01.19 - 05:40PM Title: Blood in the Moonlight
I can only describe this fic as a piece of artwork! I would like to hang it on my wall and stare at it. . . You have a way with words that twists my imagination and makes my pulse jump up a few notches!!! That is a serious bit of creepy writting!! And I loved every minute of it!! Some say it was confusing but I think you just gave room for people to imagine what is really going on, I love stories like that. . . It kind of makes it your own in a way because no one see's it the same so the way you see it is special to you and it's your own to think about. . . . Does that make scense? lol Your imagry is sooooo, god is there even words for it? I can not say because I can't bit words together very elequently. . . The scariest part for me was when Harry 'woke up' and went to the window and looked out to see Lestrange and the way you discribed it, I saw it so clearly! Looking down at the dark shadowy grounds, seeing a figure that suddenly turns and looks you right in the eye! FReak me out!! I saw Harry just push away from that window with the same WTF face!! lol Then it was just part of his dream. . . You trickey girl!! I have to ask this though, did Harry have some memory problems in this fic? Just asking cause he forgets stuff that DD says and he forgot about the dance afterward (or did he know about the dance to begen with?) Hmm, well, i dunno! YOu did a really great job on this fic!!! And let me just say that your time was not wasted at all on this! Briiliant job!
Reviewer: GINNY__POTTER258 Signed Date: 2005.09.30 - 02:37AM Title: Blood in the Moonlight
Good story i loved it it was so dark and evil but ended on a lighter note although i feel the story does not quite seem finished and pulled together like y was harry coughing up blood and y was Bellatrix there a couple of times? stil good story :)
Reviewer: Snapple92 Anonymous Date: 2005.07.15 - 01:45PM Title: Blood in the Moonlight
That was very odd. But it was very good!
Reviewer: Ane Anonymous Date: 2005.07.03 - 02:37PM Title: Blood in the Moonlight
wow.. That was weird... lol I liked it:)
Reviewer: Lilith_Phoenix Anonymous Date: 2005.06.14 - 08:40AM Title: Blood in the Moonlight
oh wow. i love this.
Reviewer: Amanda Anonymous Date: 2005.05.12 - 07:39PM Title: Blood in the Moonlight
Very interesting story. I thought it was very Halloween-ish, very spooky and creepy. Good job on it though.
Reviewer: Hera Signed Date: 2005.05.02 - 02:58PM Title: Blood in the Moonlight
Very good. I like it. A little confusing in places but overall very good. Hera
Reviewer: Erast Anonymous Date: 2005.02.21 - 10:07PM Title: Blood in the Moonlight
Wow...that's very creepy. Usually I don't re-read fanfics but this story compels me to do so to see what really happens. I love the way it allows readers to interpret it in various ways. Anyway, may I ask why Bellatrix does not want Harry to fall in love with Ginny? What does she mean by saying that she'll be Harry's downfall?
Reviewer: Kelsey Anonymous Date: 2004.12.02 - 01:27PM Title: Blood in the Moonlight
that was an awesome story!
Reviewer: Curly - Q Anonymous Date: 2004.11.22 - 06:19PM Title: Blood in the Moonlight
I think that this is an all together wonderful challenge fic! I do hope that you write another one soon **CQ**
Reviewer: Tinstar Anonymous Date: 2004.11.15 - 05:38PM Title: Blood in the Moonlight
Frock. A little bit vague, but I liked that we had to piece together what happened. I also loved the way you handed Harry & Ginny's relationship- no cliche, "oh, I've loved you so long..." crap. C'est tres bon, ma cherie!
Reviewer: Marauder4eva Anonymous Date: 2004.11.07 - 11:21AM Title: Blood in the Moonlight
Great stuff... Loved it. it was a little confusing, but meant to be that way, as it slowly started to make sense. Very creepy and depressing and a very well written piece.
Reviewer: blackvengeance Signed Date: 2004.11.04 - 11:55AM Title: Blood in the Moonlight
That was a bit confusing and really quite scary! It was really well written, though, and I loved the little bit of fluff at the end!
Reviewer: AngieGS Anonymous Date: 2004.11.04 - 11:51AM Title: Blood in the Moonlight
What a chilling, spooky story. You are a wonderful writer and I am glad you won. Cheers.
Reviewer: hairy_hen Anonymous Date: 2004.11.03 - 08:09AM Title: Blood in the Moonlight
This is really, really good. I am highly impressed with your writing in this fic. Very chilling and creepy. I like how you had Harry and Ginny just sitting silence in several places, and only gradually working in the full story of his flashback--makes it very mysterious and compelling for the reader, and satisfying with the bit of fluff at the end. Excellent!
Reviewer: Galleonie Anonymous Date: 2004.10.26 - 01:36AM Title: Blood in the Moonlight
I can only describe this fic as a piece of artwork! I would like to hang it on my wall and stare at it. . . You have a way with words that twists my imagination and makes my pulse jump up a few notches!!! That is a serious bit of creepy writting!! And I loved every minute of it!! Some say it was confusing but I think you just gave room for people to imagine what is really going on, I love stories like that. . . It kind of makes it your own in a way because no one see's it the same so the way you see it is special to you and it's your own to think about. . . . Does that make scense? lol Your imagry is sooooo, god is there even words for it? I can not say because I can't bit words together very elequently. . . The scariest part for me was when Harry 'woke up' and went to the window and looked out to see Lestrange and the way you discribed it, I saw it so clearly! Looking down at the dark shadowy grounds, seeing a figure that suddenly turns and looks you right in the eye! FReak me out!! I saw Harry just push away from that window with the same WTF face!! lol Then it was just part of his dream. . . You trickey girl!! I have to ask this though, did Harry have some memory problems in this fic? Just asking cause he forgets stuff that DD says and he forgot about the dance afterward (or did he know about the dance to begen with?) Hmm, well, i dunno! YOu did a really great job on this fic!!! And let me just say that your time was not wasted at all on this! Briiliant job! -Galleonie
Reviewer: Luna_Lovegood831 Signed Date: 2004.10.23 - 01:29AM Title: Blood in the Moonlight
This was probably the most thought-prevoking of the challange stories. It was very interesting and not like anything else I've ever read. This story was dipping with such symbolism it was hard to navigate thorugh at times, but still very well done. Great job. I expect you will get a very high placement. Great job.
Reviewer: Sir Ollivander Signed Date: 2004.10.20 - 01:29PM Title: Blood in the Moonlight
I reviewed this story for the Challenge and read it twice. It was intriguing to go between the realism with Ginny and what Harry was hearing and feeling. Yes, blood does look black in the moonlight. Definitely a first place contender here.
