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Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2021.05.04 - 01:02PM Title: The Sunflower State

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You write Quidditch matches quite well. I could easily see the action in my head and enjoyed the match immensely. Your use of Madam Hooch as an emissary for Dumbledore is an interesting concept, but I suppose she's a better stand-in for that headmaster than Professor McGonagall because of her usefulness as a Quidditch ref. I enjoyed her interview with Harry and his rapid acceptance of his invitation to Hogwarts. Well done.



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2021.04.20 - 01:02PM Title: The Sunflower State

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Good that Harry made it to Diagon Alley! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2021.04.15 - 05:32PM Title: The Sunflower State

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Well everyone is about to have more of an eye opening experience.... kutgw




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