Reviews For Through Shadows
Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2022.06.13 - 06:38AM Title: Morning I really like the ending to this chapter. The use of the words "real" and "alive" have certainly taken on a significance they've never had in a story until this one. I think they're going to be important to the rest of the story because Harry needs "real" in order to recover from his ordeal and Ginny seems to need "alive" so that she stays grounded enough to help him heal. I'm really glad that Harry thinks she's "real" enough to let her help Sirius and then stay by his bedside as he falls asleep. I also love, love, love what she says to her mum and Dumbledore down in the kitchen. It took great courage for her to speak her mind and risk being castigated for her opinion. It was nice that Dumbledore seemed to agree with her. Well done. I'm looking forward to chapter five. Reviewer: CharmHazel Signed Date: 2020.12.14 - 05:48AM Title: Morning I am intrigued by Harry's refusal of being touched by Madam Pomfrey and Molly. I would automatically say Bellatrix did something, but she is still in Azkaban at this moment, so I am assuming false images have something to do with that. I love that Harry automatically accepted Ginny, despite the lack of proper friendship. Will he still accept his friends or reject them for the moment? Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2020.12.13 - 12:33PM Title: Morning Well harry is on the long road to recovery....but something tells me it’s going to take a wile before the crew sees him again......harry navigating what’s real and not is going to take time buts it’s a start and with Ginny who has been on that road before can show the way out... kutgw Reviewer: melindaleo Signed Date: 2020.12.13 - 09:43AM Title: Morning Hmm, interesting that Harry doesn't trust Molly or Madam Pomfrey... is it because they are caring women? I can't help but wonder if it has something to do with Voldemort's contempt of Lily's sacrifice. I did enjoy seeing Harry accept Ginny, even if the idea of him letting her rub the bruise balm in seemed sort of quick. I was surprised Hermione let Ginny bring the tray up without a litany of questions. She's the one I'm worried about with Harry being so delicate. Her need for answers sometimes overrides her good sense. Reviewer: ellen Signed Date: 2020.12.13 - 08:22AM Title: Morning I usually like to read stories that are a bit lighter than this, but I'm glad I tried it. Its well written, and cleverly fits in the canon pieces and answers the questions about that Portkey nicely. I liked the chapter from Ginny's POV too - her character shines through. Reviewer: cartman1701 Signed Date: 2020.12.12 - 06:23PM Title: Morning I honestly do not know how I feel about this story. Part of this feeling is my studying of psychology and investigating child abuse and neglect for 10 years. A teenager who was physically and psychologically tortured is not going to bounce back and be ready to confront their enemies in a matter of months or even years. How are you going to handle him going back to school? How is he going to handle students knowing what has happened to him, especially the children of Death Eaters? Are you going to have Snape be is normal bully self? Realistically, this is a story that can easily hit 500,000 words. I hope you can really give this story the respect it deserves. You have written a truly heavy story. Reviewer: HP18 Signed Date: 2020.12.12 - 06:13PM Title: Morning Way to go Ginny. Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2020.12.12 - 03:39PM Title: Morning Hard chapter but encouraging too! Glad Harry is on the mend! Ginny must be happy that Harry responded to her the way he did! I expect love is at work between Ginny and Harry! Hope the recovery continues! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D | |||||||
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