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Reviewer: Senator of Sorcery Signed Date: 2014.02.17 - 09:41PM Title: Chapter 1
Very nice, I liked that bit about Harry's reaction to the lingerie, that's perfectly in character! I wish it had a bit more to it though. The mSlate sounds very good, and Ginny acted very in character about it. I'd wish you luck in the challenge, but, you know, we're competing and all... So goodish luck? I think?
Reviewer: Spenser Hemmingway Signed Date: 2014.02.17 - 09:48AM Title: Chapter 1
I enjoyed this story. The puns about viruses and Spam were perfect. The conversation format between Ginny and Angelina was also especially effective. Good job. Thanks--Eric B.
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2014.02.15 - 07:36PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh boy they are in a real mess now....kutgw
Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2014.02.14 - 01:23PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it! A spam filter - that's great :)
Reviewer: Brennus Signed Date: 2014.02.14 - 07:24AM Title: Chapter 1
I groaned loudly at the 'spam filter' line, which was pretty much the reaction you were after, I expect.
Author's Response: Yuppers.
There are just so many puns I couldn't fit in.
Reviewer: ellen Signed Date: 2014.02.14 - 04:09AM Title: Chapter 1
That was fun - perfect to brighten up my work morning on yet another rainy day.
Reviewer: hot48cricket Signed Date: 2014.02.14 - 02:43AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh, Myyyy - muggle studies should be mandatory for all those raised in a magical household!!
Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2014.02.13 - 07:34PM Title: Chapter 1
Enjoying it so far, but don't understand the summary?
Had to giggle at them sending pepper up potion for hermione's "virus"!
Author's Response: Thanks
Since I'm guessing a few other peol ewon't recognise it, the first half of the summary is a reference to Clark's Third Law (one of the great Science Fiction laws, postulated by Arthur C Clark): 'Any sufficiently advanced technology is indistinguishable from magic.' According to Doctor Who (the serial, old-Who story 'Battlefield', IIRC), the reverse is also true.
It would appear I need to work on writing summaries.
