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Reviewer: nayin1704 Signed Date: 2016.06.23 - 12:44AM Title: Chapter 5

Snivellus, a ghost and Trelawny as professors is a sign that Hogwarts is not the best Wizarding school



Reviewer: nataylaleah Signed Date: 2013.05.03 - 06:12AM Title: Chapter 5

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Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2012.12.31 - 09:18PM Title: Chapter 5

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I love the relationship building between Bill and Harry. He is such an awesome big brother. I love the idea of another wizarding school. It does make sense that there would be more than one in Britain. The quality of Hogwarts education has always mystified me. I mean McGonagall, Flitwick, and Sprout seem good and Astronomy and some of the electives seem good, but Snape can't or won't teach, Binns and Trelwanay are a joke and Defence which should be a huge subject for Harry is not impressive. Why don't they teach math or literature? It doesn't make sense to me. Sorry for my little rant, but I am really enjoying your story!!



Reviewer: DukeBrymin Signed Date: 2012.12.03 - 06:40PM Title: Chapter 5

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Nice to see Molly coming around.



Reviewer: Spenser Hemmingway Signed Date: 2012.11.20 - 09:18PM Title: Chapter 5

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This is really getting interesting. The only concern that I have as read is that matters are going quite a ways off from canon. Of course that's to be expected with the alternative unverse genre. Still, the bottom line is that Harry needs to grow up to eventually defeat Voldemort. With this version will he even get to meet Hermione? I'm really getting curious.



Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2012.11.16 - 04:14PM Title: Chapter 5

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Lovely end. On one side reminding us how young Harry is and on the other showing that Harry sees Bill as his brother as well as ginnys.

Author's Response: Thank you. I tried very hard to keep in mind how young Harry and Ginny were in this story, and I can easily see Harry turning to Bill as a role model and mentor - one of the first positive ones in his life. I think he would have a tremendous amount of influence on Harry.



Reviewer: mika22412 Signed Date: 2012.11.16 - 12:13PM Title: Chapter 5

Loved it. I like the school they chose to go to. I also like the Molly is slowly accepting them and seeing that Hoggwarts and Dumbledore is all that great.

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you liked the school. I had fun creating it. Molly will take awhile. It is very hard to switch allegiances, and right now she really only has the word of two children, and her oldest son, who, in some ways, is still a child in her eyes.



Reviewer: hptrump Signed Date: 2012.11.16 - 12:03AM Title: Chapter 5

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Chapter 4 is missing.

Author's Response: Thanks for the heads up.



Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2012.11.15 - 11:06PM Title: Chapter 5

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Glad to see things are going a bit more smoothly for Harry and Ginny now. I liked the way Harry was coming to idolize Ginny's older brother, too. I can't wait to see how their first year goes.

Author's Response: I can really see Harry viewing Bill in that light. Bill is just the sort of cool older wizard that younger boys would want to emulate. Cool job. Cool looks. Cool sense of fashion. Yeah.



Reviewer: mika22412 Signed Date: 2012.11.15 - 09:58PM Title: Chapter 5

Everytime I click on chapter 4 it takes me to chapter 5. Can this be fixed?

Author's Response: I'm trying to get help to fix this. The problem is not showing up on my end. I'm so sorry for the technical difficulties.



Reviewer: mika22412 Signed Date: 2012.11.15 - 09:25PM Title: Chapter 5

what happened to chapter 4. I cant read it. I dont want to start this chapter without reading that one first

Author's Response: Two chapters are labeled via SIYE as Chapter 5. The correct headings are my chapter headings. Chapter 4 is there and should be readable. Hope it works for you.



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2012.11.15 - 09:23PM Title: Chapter 5

Well it's about time they get to know what is going with Harry and Ginny...kutgw

Author's Response: Yes, it is about time. But it took someone taking charge and forcing people to listen instead of just reacting.



Reviewer: cartman1701 Signed Date: 2012.11.15 - 08:52PM Title: Chapter 5

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Each chapter has been getting better and better. I am glad to see that you had Bill make Arthur and Molly see some sense, and developed some doubt in the great Dumbledore. I also enjoy the fact that you have Bill be a big brother to Harry, to show a positive male role model. The way you have Harry and Ginny speak is a little above their age and maturity, but it is not too noticeable nor distracting from the story.

Author's Response: Thank you for the encouraging words. I'm glad you are enjoying the story. I really like Bill's character and have had fun making him a bigger part of the story. I can really imagine Harry looking up to Bill. He seems to be the type of person younger males would look up to, for a variety of reasons. I worked hard at not making them see too much older than they really were. I'm glad it's not too distracting that they do - I just wish I'd been more successful. I do think of Harry, especially, as acting/speaking a bit above his age, simply because of having to survive on his own, however, I really strove to keep in mind that they were only 10 and 11.




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