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Reviewer: jerryfs2 Signed
Date: 2017.01.17 - 03:57AM
Title: Chapter 3: Plans
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Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed
Date: 2012.08.18 - 10:34AM
Title: Chapter 3: Plans
I have enjoyed your story quite a lot. It is well written and I really am looking forward to reading the rest.
Good luck with the challenge.
Author's Response: Thank you! Should have another chapter up in the next couple of days.
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed
Date: 2012.08.17 - 04:44PM
Title: Chapter 3: Plans
This last chapter, I really like.... LOL. Hermione and Ron not being party to this? Whoa!
42 death eaters. I would be very intrigued to find out how this will be handled and cannot wait for the entire story to be unravelled. What an excellent storyline.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad to hear you're enjoying it :)
Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed
Date: 2012.08.16 - 02:01PM
Title: Chapter 3: Plans
Great chapter! I love the progress of the story. It seemed a bit off that it will take her a week to regrow a knee cap while it only took Harry one night to regrow all of the bones in his arm. I find it interesting in the three stories I've read so far none of us have included Hermione & Ron. Hope you will finish this. Trust me I know what you mean about making the deadline - I posted at like 11:55 last night. I had to post and then go back and edit it or I wouldn't have gotten it in on time.
Author's Response: Her knee cap was re-grown by the next morning, but I figured it would still be tender and would warrant the use of crutches for 5 days. Unlike an arm there's a lot of pressure placed on a knee. Hopefully that makes a bit more sense, *shrug*. As for Ron and Hermione, I can give or take them. They both have positive qualities that can make them very likeable and a force to reckon with, but they also have some very annoying traits that make me want to shake them. I think it all depends on how they are written and which traits the author decides to have stand out from the others. This deadline was hard to meet and I missed it, but I'll continue to finish the story and should post the remaining chapters over the next few days. Glad you like how the story is progressing!
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 2012.08.16 - 07:33AM
Title: Chapter 3: Plans
Looks like being full of action, but being a vigilante with a shoot to kill policy does not seem very British.
Author's Response: Not British? What about James Bond...lol? I'm aware it's not the common opinion on how Harry would deal with things, but everyone has a breaking point. After spending seven years fighting and the war finally over only to have his family threathened and attacked kind of rocked him. He thought they were safe and he's determined to protect them at all costs. Thanks for the review :)
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