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Reviews For The Life Together

Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2012.08.19 - 11:30PM Title: Find You

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Nice reunion. I've never really thought Ginny would react with anger.



Reviewer: JoeEzSoFunny Signed Date: 2012.08.09 - 08:23PM Title: Find You

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Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2012.08.04 - 05:09PM Title: Find You

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beautiful first chapter
my only suggestion would be to put a line break / extra line in between Harry fainting and waking up - just to make it easier and more obvious when reading

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I 'll correct this. I like this suggetion :)



Reviewer: foxfire23 Signed Date: 2012.03.29 - 04:44AM Title: Find You

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This story has a great start.

Now...a note for you. Something I was told by a friend. Say what you have to say and back away. As long as it wasn't a nasty parting, give him a chance to think. You may, at least, wind up friends and believe me friends are hard to come by. Being 'just friends' with someone you love is hard I know, but at least he's still in your life.

Author's Response: Thanks for your review and advice. I 've already told him. I just needed him to have something to remember me by! :)



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2012.03.24 - 12:23PM Title: Find You

sometimes quick and dirty is the best way when it comes to saying what is needed to be said....kutgw

Author's Response: I know. I just want you guys to know that I am not a coward. I have already told him that I like him face to face. I just wanted him to know that he is so important to me that I write a whole story about him...about us...



Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2012.03.24 - 08:59AM Title: Find You

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Good start to your story. Please update soon so I can see where you are taking this.

Author's Response: Thanks, I 'll try to write as soon as I can, but I 'm not sure I 'll update soon cause I am leaving for a shcool trip... Thanks for reading and reviewing anyway :)



Reviewer: crystaltips1 Signed Date: 2012.03.24 - 04:47AM Title: Find You

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Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2012.03.23 - 06:17PM Title: Find You

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Bless.

Author's Response: Thank you.



Reviewer: hgpassion Signed Date: 2012.03.23 - 12:08PM Title: Find You

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An excellent start! I am looking forward to thee next chapter...

Author's Response: Thanks! :)



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2012.03.23 - 10:37AM Title: Find You

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Not very original at this point but well paced and very little self recrimination. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Ok, thank you.



Reviewer: Imperator 277 Signed Date: 2012.03.23 - 09:20AM Title: Find You

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Very nice. Glad to see a happy story where Harry and Ginny get back together rather than one will with drama, hurt and anger. Am looking forward to new chapters!

Author's Response: Thank you very very much. I 'm glad cause I want the story to be special. :)




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