Reviews For The Lady
Reviewer: YelloWitchGrl Signed Date: 2014.08.28 - 10:14PM Title: Chapter 7 That was lovely! I truly enjoyed it. Well done :) Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2012.04.29 - 09:34AM Title: Chapter 7 That made me grin....maybe they will take it in turns to stun Sirius so they can obscure the Ineosieve...lol! Reviewer: AoiKazeToMidoriAme Signed Date: 2010.07.18 - 08:24AM Title: Chapter 7 Wow, that was a great finish to your story! I really liiked the frank discussion that they had about everything before the final battle happened. One small thing, your entry for march 1998, GInny is 16, not fifteen. But, wow great finish. I can't believe you surprised me like that with the girl being Dumbledor's little sister. Of course, the pieces were all there, and I should have picked up on it the instant she was introduced, but, the story seemed so straight forward that I did't think to make that connection to anyone in the known HP universe. I think it was the honesty of the secret and the honesty in the way you told your story. Great job with that. The narrator felt so genuine you were able to slip that through. An honest narrator is almost always a good thing in stories like this. Also, it taught me a lesson, a narrator written so reliably can allow those little turns to take the reader by surprise in a was those who make their stories have sneaky twists never can seem to manage. Thanks so much for this little fic, and than new bit of writting wisdom. ~Ran Reviewer: Yunchao Signed Date: 2010.07.14 - 11:32PM Title: Chapter 7 Good job! I enjoyed your story very much. I liked how you were able to really develop the relationship that Lily and Ginny had. It really brought out those characters. I also liked the background that you gave as Lily's childhood. The explanation that their guide was really Adriana near the ending was brilliant as well! I've just read this story for judging. Thanks for writing! Reviewer: Spenser Hemmingway Signed Date: 2010.07.13 - 08:50AM Title: Chapter 7 What a great finale. I hated to see the story end. You developed and paced it in such an effective manner that the whole tale just pulled you in. I came away feeling for all the characters, and knowing them all the better. It was a great read. Thanks—Eric B. Reviewer: bengpotter31 Signed Date: 2010.07.09 - 10:14AM Title: Chapter 7 Great story. I read the whole thing through which is why I'm only reviewing now. I knew from the start who the girl guide was. But why did they only see Albus a year after his death? Reviewer: LilyLady Signed Date: 2010.07.09 - 09:52AM Title: Chapter 7 That was beautiful. I agree that it ended up feeling rushed at the end, but since you already addressed that, I'll let it go lol. Reviewer: lizzi-mae21 Signed Date: 2010.07.08 - 08:24PM Title: Chapter 7 Gerat job Sissy! I like it better that you didn't say who the "Guide" was until the end and I really love that you wrote about Lily's past- I wasn't expecting that part at all. LOVE it! Now you need to write another one that I can read :D Reviewer: Lord Dreadnault Signed Date: 2010.07.06 - 11:05PM Title: Chapter 7 (Judged for challenge) Congrats on a story well done. You definitely seem to have your grammar, dialogue, and characters under control. You also seemed to have keen insights on the deeper aspects of Harry, his parents, and even Ginny. Good luck. Reviewer: Green Eyes Signed Date: 2010.07.03 - 09:57AM Title: Chapter 7 I really liked this story. I particularly liked the dynamic between Ginny and Lily. I guess I did think that the skills that Giiny had acquired as a result of her training with Lily would somehow be used to help Harry defeat Voldemort. Maybe I missed someting? Anyway, very nice job. Reviewer: Enchantedgurls Signed Date: 2010.07.02 - 03:55PM Title: Chapter 7 Nice job! This feels very canon to me. It's nice to think that Lily and James were so involved in Harry's life, even though they couldn't raise him. And I liked reading your interpretation of canon through the eyes of Harry's parents. Great work here! I wouldn't mind another chapter... :) Reviewer: Ginny Guerra Signed Date: 2010.07.01 - 08:34PM Title: Chapter 7 A bit rushed, but nice. Reviewer: DukeBrymin Signed Date: 2010.07.01 - 10:19AM Title: Chapter 7 Very nice. Good use of the prompt, and well thought out story. My only complaint was that the ending seemed a little rushed. It would have been nice to have more of the resolution. | |||||||
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