Search:

SIYE Time:9:13 on 27th July 2021

Reviews For Girl Talk

Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2010.08.30 - 06:38PM Title: Chapter 2: Lily

starstarstarstarstar

Loved the last line!!

I think ginny is going to have to find someway to not be so exhausted in the morning after these "dreams" as she will end up with even more homework if she cant perform in class.



Reviewer: GoDons Signed Date: 2010.06.24 - 05:43AM Title: Chapter 2: Lily

starstarstarstarstar

No Review



Reviewer: babewithbrains Signed Date: 2010.06.19 - 08:35AM Title: Chapter 2: Lily

Just wanted to let you know, slight error...Ginny's fifteen in her fifth year, not fourteen. Other than that, I have to admit that this story seems different from the other stories entered for the challenge. I didn't think that Lily would see Ginny more than once in a dream, and I definitely didn't expect her to teach Ginny spells. The characterisation of GInny was spot-on - I'm her age and I'd act just as rude in her situation. Well done!

~Soraya~

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and thanks for the pointer. If only the Brits would stick to the calendar year for each school year, it'd be a lot easier to keep track of ages =( Yes, I thought this style of speech would suit Ginny. I guess it helps that I still remember what it was like to be fourteen, not that it was very long ago X)



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2010.06.17 - 08:44PM Title: Chapter 2: Lily

i think is getting there and lily is trying but lily also has to remeber that ginny may need a different apporch to stuff.kutgw

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Yes, Chapter 3 ought to show some of the different approaches Lily will have to take to get through to Ginny.



Reviewer: DukeBrymin Signed Date: 2010.06.17 - 09:36AM Title: Chapter 2: Lily

starstarstarstar

Loved the thoughts about Luna at the end of the chapter.

Ginny says she's eighteen up there at the beginning of the chapter--but she's only in fifth year. ???

And Ginny states something about the thoughts of what she'd like to do to Harry, but then protests that she doesn't think about him anymore--kind of confusing.

Looking forward to seeing where this goes.

Author's Response: Oh drat, I meant to type 'fourteen'. Damned typo. Thanks a bunch. Well, aren't we all liars when it comes to what we really feel? And Ginny is more confused than most about her own feelings =)




../back
! Go To Top !

Sink Into Your Eyes is hosted by Computer Partners. HARRY POTTER, characters, names and related characters are trademarks of Warner Bros. TM & 2001-2006. Harry Potter Publishing Rights J.K.R. Note the opinions on this site are those made by the owners. All stories(fanfiction) are owned by the author and are subject to copyright law under transformative use. Authors on this site take no compensation for their works. This site 2003-2006 ALL RIGHTS RESERVED. Special thanks to: Aredhel, Kaz, Michelle, and Jeco for all the hard work on SIYE 1.0 and to Marta for the wonderful artwork.
Featured Artwork © 2003-2006 by Yethro.
Design and code 2006 by SteveD3(AdminQ)
Additional coding 2008 by melkior and Bear