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Reviewer: juice14 Signed Date: 2009.08.05 - 03:29AM Title: Chapter 4 - Endgame
Concentrated adventure distilled to its strongest. Nice story! I think it can actually be a framework for something bigger.... 2 thumbs up!
Author's Response: Heh heh! Thanks!
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2009.07.21 - 12:30PM Title: Chapter 4 - Endgame
Excellent! Love your last few paragraphs! Are you writing for horror films?
Author's Response: Phew! Four whole reviews! Thanks a lot!
Yes, I intended to close off the last paragraph of Chapter 1 with a cliffhanger. I was indulging my more dramatic muse when I wrote the Creevey scene in Chapter 2, and I took note of certain tropes seen in action movies when I wrote Chapter 3 and 4's fight scenes.
Reviewer: FirePhoenix86 Signed Date: 2009.03.19 - 03:29AM Title: Chapter 4 - Endgame
Very nice, the Denis Creevey twist was a great idea. I've been having trouble with his character in my story, mainly i can't think of a way to draw out his grief as long as i want too. I liked the whole story, and i might head over to your sequel. Sounded interesting with that little teaser at the end here. very good!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I don't know if there will be a sequel or not. I'm just leaving things open at the end so I have wiggle room if I DO think of a sequel.
Reviewer: FirePhoenix86 Signed Date: 2009.03.19 - 03:29AM Title: Chapter 4 - Endgame
Very nice, the Denis Creevey twist was a great idea. I've been having trouble with his character in my story, mainly i can't think of a way to draw out his grief as long as i want too. I liked the whole story, and i might head over to your sequel. Sounded interesting with that little teaser at the end here. very good!
Reviewer: stark40763 Signed Date: 2009.03.15 - 02:10PM Title: Chapter 4 - Endgame
I do hope you are planning a sequel! This was pretty brilliant! :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I don't think there'll be a sequel, although I will reuse the universe as a stage for some other fics. I do think Harry isn't done with the Knights of Walpurgis ; )
Reviewer: Yunchao Signed Date: 2009.03.13 - 12:29PM Title: Chapter 4 - Endgame
Great story! I just read this story for judging. I liked the very well thought out and complex plot. I never really believed Clarke haha. Thanks for writing!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! In a way, I guess I have failed. I wanted Clarke to play the helpless old man until finally revealing himself as the real antagonist, although I know that sometimes I couldn't get around having him do suspicious things. Ah well, at least the rest of the plot worked :D
Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2009.03.13 - 11:43AM Title: Chapter 4 - Endgame
Well that was an interesting ending left you wanting more which is something none of the other stories did they ended it with a firm ending. Have to wonder if you plan on writing more on this plane or not. I will say I really did love it and really do have a tough decision coming up with your story great job can't wait to see more from you.
Till next time,
Tad
Author's Response: Heh! Thanks for the review! Anyway, I did think hard about how to end each chapter and the story in general, and I always want to end my fics with a bit of wriggle room anyway. The last letter is cryptic, but I think you'll solve most of the acronyms except 'YKW' and 'N'. 'N' was Stone's first name, Nick, in a first draft of the fic, and YKW is You-Know-Who, which is Harry. It's an ironic Easter egg thing ; )
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2009.03.04 - 07:38AM Title: Chapter 4 - Endgame
Oh, Merlin! What an imagination you have. A downright Harry Potter and the Hammer House of Horrors! Urgh!
Well done and congratulations!
Author's Response: Thanks for your reviews! Hammer House of Horrors? I hardly thought my fic was THAT gruesome...
Reviewer: HGRHfan35 Signed Date: 2009.03.04 - 04:06AM Title: Chapter 4 - Endgame
I loved the humour in your story very much. Unlike many stories in this challenge, yours was not to dark and again, brought with a dash of humour.
You left the end open with the suggestion for a 'new' dark lord on the rise. Interesting use of the Knights of Walpurgis, JKR depicted that as the original name of the Death Eaters based on Walpurgis Night.
In short terms, liked it very much and again, I hope you do well in the challange.
Author's Response: Humour? If by 'humour' you mean the fact that I was rather more light-hearted with the Challenge than some of the other authors, then yes. Otherwise, I'm quite sure I don't know any exceedingly humourous bits in the tale... Mind giving me some feedback as to what parts you found funny?
Yes, I left things open... just in case ;) Thanks again for dropping by.
Reviewer: jennyelf Signed Date: 2009.03.02 - 12:06AM Title: Chapter 4 - Endgame
OOh, are you planning a sequel? This was really interesting. I want to know who the master was. Hmmm... Very clever.
~Jenn :)
Author's Response: Thanks, Jenn. If I do think up a sequel, the Master will get more screen time.
