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Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.11.28 - 04:32AM Title: Prelude: Fugue della Foresta Scura
Well I just left you a big long review and got disconnected. So I will give you the jist of it. I really like the Dark and fear riddled atmosphere you have created. And can't wait to see who is the secret keeper is and how exactly this will all end great job can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: meegs Signed Date: 2008.03.23 - 07:41PM Title: Prelude: Fugue della Foresta Scura
This is an absolutely amazing story. I love the way it was set up, and I still love this completely different, yet completely awesome final battle. I'm sad that this is your only other work and that you don't have much recognition.
Hermione's not one of my favorite characters, but I love that it was told from her point of view and showed a close relationship between Ginny and Hermione that was bound to happen since Ginny obviously needed a chick friend.
I hope to see more of your work in the future, because it is some of the greatest work I've ever read. I may not be a very good writer, but I do read enough to know what a good story is, and what a great writer they are.
Reviewer: jeff64108 Signed Date: 2007.11.10 - 06:44PM Title: Prelude: Fugue della Foresta Scura
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Reviewer: everylittlething Signed Date: 2007.11.10 - 05:29PM Title: Prelude: Fugue della Foresta Scura
Hello! I just happened to recognise your name at the top of the update list over here at siye and thought I'd have a read - only got time for chapter one this morning but what a great start! It's like a post-HBP spy novel set in a magical reality!
I look forward to reading some more later and having a look at your stuff over on PhoenixSong. Thanks for reviewing my story too - that's very cool of you. And I think I'm going to enjoy catching up on your stories!
Author's Response: I wrote this because I had never really written a mystery. Although RoP only slightly resembles a traditional ministry, I wanted to capture the uncertainty and paranoia that should be part of the war at this point. I hope the rest of the story keeps your interest as well.
BTW, looking forward to the final chapters of your story.
Reviewer: Breaten Signed Date: 2007.11.10 - 01:47PM Title: Prelude: Fugue della Foresta Scura
Marvelous story, I love your twist on the final battle, and the second traitor. You have the most intelligent stories I have read. I enjoy Cursebreakers, and this story very much.
-Breaten
Author's Response: Thank you very much for that high praise. I try very hard to be original and to create stories that force the reader to think and debate what is happening. As for the Final Battle, I don't believe in stupid or one dimensional villains. I also do not like heroes who are infallible or afraid to be less than upstanding.
-Jonathan
Reviewer: BeyondRedHorizons Signed Date: 2007.11.10 - 01:12PM Title: Prelude: Fugue della Foresta Scura
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Reviewer: squiditch Signed Date: 2007.11.02 - 07:38PM Title: Prelude: Fugue della Foresta Scura
This is a marvelous story. thank you
Author's Response: Your welcome. Thanks for leaving a review.
-Jonathan
