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Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2009.04.05 - 01:13PM Title: Til the Day I Die

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aww, I TOTALLY love fluff
this chapter made up for some of the previos ones



Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.12.04 - 02:02AM Title: Til the Day I Die

Well like you said all fluff though I am surprised no teachers have talked to Harry and Ginny about the sleeping arangements. I do think you had a whole lot of sex here damn.... But you did good most people can't right a good scene you did a pretty darn good job.



Reviewer: CyanGreenBreath Signed Date: 2008.10.22 - 07:34AM Title: Til the Day I Die

This story has gone from showing promise to being disgraceful. I no longer have any sense of either character caring about each other at all. You've toyed with their feelings, attitudes, emotions, and reactions until they are both not at all human, and certainly not pure. Their whole story here is dirty, and there is no sense of them even liking each other, let alone being in love. They are two nymphomanic cowards with dependence issues and exceptionally low moral standards. Their "need" for each other is a self satisfying itch that need to be scratched so that they can live their lives and feel better about themselves, forget about their problems. THere is no real love in their relationship, I can't even tell if they genuinely give a flying fig about each other at all in fact. You're a good writter, you've got great technical skill, and are fantastic at getting across individual instances, particular moments in a story. You have however strung them together in such a manner as to destroy all of your character's and your story's credibility. If this was ever meant to be a love story, I'm afraid you missed your mark. If it was mean to be a piece about exploring the darkness of relationship adn how far we will go to twist things around, to lie and cheat and hurt ourselves and others for the utter destrcution of human emotion and emotional addiction than you hit you rmark splendidly.



Reviewer: gryff_princess Signed Date: 2008.07.27 - 11:52PM Title: Til the Day I Die

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Reviewer: Danna Signed Date: 2007.12.13 - 11:29PM Title: Til the Day I Die

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Hi,

Really nice chapter, for those who appreciate the romance and all the fluff.

Please update soon.

Take care!

Danna



Reviewer: swngnblues Signed Date: 2007.12.13 - 04:54PM Title: Til the Day I Die

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I had picked up the first few chapters of this, and sort of dropped it (sort of a lack of interest in FF overall). But when I saw you'd published quite a bit more in a short time, I had to give it another go. I love your writing style. You write them simply, and let the dialogue and actions do the talking. And the angst that you can generate - between Prodigal Daughter and this... wow. You can tell that your story arc is well conceived, and you aren't making the characters unbelievable. I'm looking forward to the continuance of this story, and where you wind up with it. From the A/N I've read, it looks like you're not far from the finish. Can't wait to see where you take us next. : )

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you gave it another shot and started reading again. I hope you continue to enjoy it! Thanks for reviewing!



Reviewer: HeavensHavoc Signed Date: 2007.12.12 - 02:15AM Title: Til the Day I Die

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The dialog in your story, I feel, is very smooth. I could feel the emotions of the characters as well. Overall I am enjoying this story.

Author's Response: Thank you!



Reviewer: teenyjewel Signed Date: 2007.12.11 - 08:05PM Title: Til the Day I Die

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What a wonderfully fluffy chapter! Very good, it is about time Harry and Ginny get their chance. Hermione isn't going to tell Dumbledore is she? I am sure he will find out soon though. I loved this chapter it was very good! I can't wait for another chapter. I have become very addicted to your story!!



Reviewer: harry_ginny_duh Signed Date: 2007.12.11 - 08:03PM Title: Til the Day I Die

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Well, Harry and Ginny certainly jumped back on the horse then! Or should I say they jumped back on each other,,,either expression works! I must say, I am in love with this story. I speed through the chapters and I must say...I was pretty effing pissed when Ginny went back to Dean! I'm so glad you posted the last 2 chapters though. I have gone back and read all of your stories and you have a knack for writing! You definitely deserved any awards you have earned. Keep updating, I'm loving every minute of this story!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Glad you're enjoying and thanks for the review!



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2007.12.11 - 07:58PM Title: Til the Day I Die

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well ron can go piss on a rope becuase they are back and bad as ever and sex is always a good thing...no matter what the edge is....kutgw lucky bastered



Reviewer: monkeyboy Signed Date: 2007.12.11 - 07:48PM Title: Til the Day I Die

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awwwww... how cute.



Reviewer: ReneeGinSoftie Signed Date: 2007.12.11 - 04:42PM Title: Til the Day I Die

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awww how sweet!

more please!



Reviewer: jennymafurr Signed Date: 2007.12.11 - 02:11PM Title: Til the Day I Die

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holy shit.

horny little buggers aren't they?



Reviewer: ginnyp_harryp Signed Date: 2007.12.11 - 01:02PM Title: Til the Day I Die

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awsome chapter !! so much fluff!! haha update soon :]



Reviewer: NYC10016 Signed Date: 2007.12.11 - 10:39AM Title: Til the Day I Die

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just parking my review from another H&G fanfic site over here: H-O-T! H-O-T! H-O-T!!! this is what i expect H&G as a couple all over Hogwarts during the end of HBP sans mature-rated-scenes: very PDA, soooo affectionate and obviously inluv though Harry may be a bit tad conservative but still since Her Worship JoKR failed to give details of H&G couple days in HBP, many thanks to wonderful H&G fanfic writers who pen excellent H&G moments such as this fluff-to-the-max scenarios :> me luvin' every word of it. good touch in tackling the obvious no-supposedly-funny-business going on amongst couples in Hogwarts as well as Ron's very spot-on reactions to H&G. i'm hedging you penned this all--smile-lovey-dovey H&G chapter because you're just about to pull the double-whammy smack angst/depressing twist in plot on us avid readers. bring on the angst/sadness/melancholy because those nasty situations always bring out your best skills & talents in stitching-H&G-writing-together. my hedge: either death of luved ones or grave attack from Voldemort which will make H&G falter a bit but hoping not yet ... that'll come later, right. sidebar last: i really am delighting a very inluved Harry over Ginny & finally Ginny is also being all-out on Harry. all the angst chapters are worth reading chapters like this, big time! huge brownie points on back-to-back quickie updates! best from NYC!



Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2007.12.11 - 08:38AM Title: Til the Day I Die

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awwww now that was what i call a romantic chapter! bloody brilliant! bout bloody time wo0p! loved it and update soon!

CodeRomance



Reviewer: KaraPrescott Signed Date: 2007.12.11 - 07:30AM Title: Til the Day I Die

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And it was fluff worth waiting for!



Reviewer: aragorn829 Signed Date: 2007.12.11 - 04:40AM Title: Til the Day I Die

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wow is all i can say



Reviewer: ultranicola Signed Date: 2007.12.11 - 02:37AM Title: Til the Day I Die

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one word: HOT! great story - can't wait for the rest.



Reviewer: cherrion Signed Date: 2007.12.11 - 02:18AM Title: Til the Day I Die

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Great chaoter. I think that this chapter was a nice change from hte usual arguements, or Harry moping around.

I liked it, but now the question is: Are they soul Mates or Not. Personally I hope they are!

Author's Response: Nah...not really. They just have a really close connection. There won't be any mystical spiritual connection in this story ... you know, other than Voldemort being inside both of them...and well, there is a scene later on but I won't ruin it for you :)




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