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Reviewer: hpf2114 Signed Date: 2009.12.12 - 04:01PM Title: Apprenticing with Electricity
Your a good writer, but your still an ass. Not just an ass, an Fin ass. For a writer I guess thats a complement.
Reviewer: Count Westwest Signed Date: 2009.08.13 - 08:06PM Title: Apprenticing with Electricity
I got hooked on this story... and I hate it. I know I will read through to the end despite it being so frustrating. I guess that says something good about you as a writer, because I hate stories were Harry seems to have no b***s. That's the only way to describe it. How is he going to face Voldemort without a pair, remains to be seen. This whole mess is not Ginny's fault... it is entirely Harry's IMO. I just had to vent for a moment... on to the next chapter.
Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2009.04.04 - 06:16PM Title: Apprenticing with Electricity
another great chapter
I'm very glad that the Ginny / Dean relationship is over now though
Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.12.02 - 02:53AM Title: Apprenticing with Electricity
I won't even comment on how badly I think you messed the poker thing up. I will also not touch the hair thing other than you tried to fix your mistake but did it to late. I will say I like the way your going with this you have got the damn crazy crappy Ginny out of the story and have the one you should of had the whole time so I love that. I really like the duels with Dumbledore and happy he is helping more than in cannon. I really do think that was a great idea though do wonder what Voldy has up his sleeves I think... And I said I THINK your about to pull your climax and have Ginny grow up and take a chance or have Harry grow up and tell her his feelings I hope you go the Ginny way and let her dangle for awhile that Harry doesn't just jump right on it. I mean you have put Harry through so much crap and let Ginny go almost scoth free and decide to give her even more. I don't know think you make things a lot easier on Ginny and give her things she doesn't deserve but can't wait to see what you do great job.
Reviewer: txreina Signed Date: 2008.07.18 - 07:17PM Title: Apprenticing with Electricity
Well I'm glad she finally broke up with Dean. Though that girl has alot of nerve, accusing Dean of not trusting her. Excuse there's is no reason in the world he should trust her. If Ginny was on the other side of this coin she would have blown him to bits. But who cares about that now, let's get to it. Come on Harry down let me down.
Reviewer: caitlyn62442 Signed Date: 2007.12.03 - 01:40PM Title: Apprenticing with Electricity
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Reviewer: kaypgirl Signed Date: 2007.12.02 - 11:52PM Title: Apprenticing with Electricity
I hope you update this soon, though I'm torn between more of this story or more of Prodigal Daughter. Okay maybe this story wins because they haven't gotten together yet. Now I want to go reread the beginning of PD. Do you know when you'll be updating either?
Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for reviewing, and I'm glad you are enjoying the story so much. It's always great to meet a fan of The Prodigal Daughter. It was my first fic so it's sort of special. I wanted to tell you that TPD has been continued over at www.simplyundeniable.com. It just didn't fit in with the ratings on this site and so I moved it to the Restricted Section on SU. You'll have to register to read it. I'm not finished yet but it's up to Chapter 18 over there. Again, thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2007.12.02 - 09:07PM Title: Apprenticing with Electricity
you know what you've got a great story but honestly you pissing me off and lot of your readers....i know you hate answering reviews where the the reviewer doesnt give you great praise but thats the whole point...and i'm sorry i'm being such a bitch about this but will you please explain why this is taking harry and ginny so long to realize they're in love with each other...or if not realize it because i seem to get the impression that they both do but they're just too stubborn to admit it! its really pissing me off and you have some serious explaining to do. I really love your story its very dramatic if not a bit too much and very well written but some of its just getting way out of hand...if ginny and harry don't get together soon you're going to drive us all NUTS! i hope you reply back!
CodeRomance
Author's Response: Two words my dear, faithful reviewer: Calm. Down. LOL It's just a story! On a Harry/Ginny website -- you know they are going to be together! :) Do you think we should make it easy for you? A little angst never hurt anyone, and I promise, it'll be worth it. Hang in there!
Reviewer: Jackaroe Signed Date: 2007.12.02 - 07:54PM Title: Apprenticing with Electricity
This is a nice story.
Although, I was wondering why Ginny spent so much energy denying her feelings. Dreams of Harry dyeing while scary, should be enough. She already knows he is a marked man. A relationship with him wouldn't put him in any more danger than he already is.
Reviewer: Danna Signed Date: 2007.12.02 - 11:54AM Title: Apprenticing with Electricity
Hi congratulations ! This chapter is amazing.
I can't wait for the next one.
Please update as soon as you can.
Thnaks you and good luck.
Danna
Reviewer: UnorthodoxConvention Signed Date: 2007.12.02 - 07:03AM Title: Apprenticing with Electricity
Does this mean that Dean's finally out of the picture? Thanks for another chapter and the regular (and frequent) updates! :)
Reviewer: cueball Signed Date: 2007.12.01 - 08:49PM Title: Apprenticing with Electricity
I agree with what some of the others are saying...definitely in love with this story! Keep up the most excellent work!
Reviewer: DebbieO Signed Date: 2007.12.01 - 08:06PM Title: Apprenticing with Electricity
Whoa...I'm so glad I discovered your work. This is an outstanding, passionate, sexy, intense ride. Your Harry and Ginny banter is amazing. I love Ginny's angry, fiery, profane personality. It reminds me a bit of the movie Some Kind of Wonderful, but much more angsty and dramatic.
It seems Ginny is pulling a Harry, trying to protect him by staying away from him. Dumb, da, dumb, dumb... Frustrating as heck to the reader in a way that keeps us reading. Well done. I look forward to more. :-)
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2007.12.01 - 09:48AM Title: Apprenticing with Electricity
wellnow the pathis clear and harry can move in but then again maybe not....kutgw
Reviewer: griffindorechicky101 Signed Date: 2007.12.01 - 12:22AM Title: Apprenticing with Electricity
omg omg this was like soosososo good hurry with the next chapter please!
Reviewer: Rogue28 Signed Date: 2007.11.30 - 10:43PM Title: Apprenticing with Electricity
Wow!!! It's stories like this that made me fall in love with fanfiction and SIYE. You had me cheering, pulling hair , screaming with fustration at these characters all through this story.Just when you think that someone has wised up they screw it up! Excellent writing.
Reviewer: hot48cricket Signed Date: 2007.11.30 - 09:59PM Title: Apprenticing with Electricity
30 chapters? Does that mean we only have to wait for 13 more before Harry & Ginny get together?
I'm glad that Ginny chucked Dean...But I'm not sure I like Ron being to bright in the romance department...and very surprised that Hermione told a secret!
Reviewer: rosepotter Signed Date: 2007.11.30 - 09:47PM Title: Apprenticing with Electricity
this... is... my... FAVOURITE EVER FANFIC!
LOL sisiusly i think im in love with it.
update soon?
Reviewer: LolaPotter Signed Date: 2007.11.30 - 04:25PM Title: Apprenticing with Electricity
i see it coming... i see it coming... maybe not int he next chappi, but definetly at some point... i see it coming!
if you could see my dancing in my room... oh i love this tory and it is so --- the tension is so.. i have no words, but in a good way... i am speachless, just wonderful work... like always...and when harry makes the first move... he has to make it, because ginny won´t do it... i wonder how he does it, because kissing isn´t an option between these two, i mean they always do that... so, hm?! please update faster....
