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Reviewer: My Wicked Quill Signed Date: 2010.06.05 - 03:53PM Title: Tom Riddle's Painful Return
this story has become one of my favorties i have ever read, and i haben't eben finished. the style of writing is flawless, chaging from one point of view to another so swiftly you don't even notice the change becasue it makes so much sense. it's beautiful and flows so perfectly like Ginny really had been there the whole time. i honestly wish the story did go this way.
and the soft kisses between harry and ginny? dynomite
Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2009.04.03 - 01:11PM Title: Tom Riddle's Painful Return
good chapter - not sure about the kiss
Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.12.02 - 12:13AM Title: Tom Riddle's Painful Return
Well not exactly thrilled with the kisses though I understand where you are coming from. I do like what your doing on several fronts. But I don't know about not having Harry go back to the Dursleys I don'tk now just not to thrilled with it since I know your not going to work really on anything on Ginny front. I mean you have them kissing now just is very very odd. I do like the close relationship though that you have built between them that is for sure. Only time will tell where you go with this and cant wait to see what you do even though there is something things not to pleased with.
Reviewer: txreina Signed Date: 2008.07.18 - 07:06PM Title: Tom Riddle's Painful Return
Very interesting connection these two have, hopefuly they can put it to good use. Harry doesn't really need to kiss Cho, does he.
Reviewer: I Love Ginerva Signed Date: 2007.12.14 - 05:00AM Title: Tom Riddle's Painful Return
Hey, I love how you're following the theme of the books, but it's getting frustrating on how you're teasing us with Harry and Ginny kissing occasionally and not going out... but it'll happen in the end.
Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2007.12.01 - 09:29PM Title: Tom Riddle's Painful Return
arg that bloody stupid michael corner! get ride of him now! lol
CodeRomance
Reviewer: Female Marauder Signed Date: 2007.11.12 - 04:24PM Title: Tom Riddle's Painful Return
This is an awesome story! Can't wait for your next update!
-Female Marauder-
Reviewer: Female Marauder Signed Date: 2007.11.12 - 04:23PM Title: Tom Riddle's Painful Return
This is an awesome story! Can't wait for your next update!
-Female Marauder-
Reviewer: kaypgirl Signed Date: 2007.11.12 - 04:22PM Title: Tom Riddle's Painful Return
They are both so thick!
Reviewer: Pakismith Signed Date: 2007.11.12 - 03:35PM Title: Tom Riddle's Painful Return
Great chapter, thanks you
Reviewer: Rowen Ravenclaw Signed Date: 2007.11.12 - 03:07PM Title: Tom Riddle's Painful Return
so sweet but still so suspenseful. Keep up the writing
Reviewer: nuwnuw Signed Date: 2007.11.12 - 12:01PM Title: Tom Riddle's Painful Return
I don't think I've ever read the Third Task from Ginny's perspective before, and you handled it very realistically (students talking, wandering around, playing Exploding Snap, etc. since they can't actually see what's going on). Ginny's apparent connection with Tom Riddle is both interesting and foreboding. I'm sure I won't get an answer to this right away, but will there be Horcruxes in this story? If there are, then it sounds like the Diary Horcrux transferred itself to Ginny, rather than being destroyed in the Chamber of Secrets. Interesting....
I found Harry's desire to smash stuff at the end very appropriate after everything he'd been through. Oh, and Dumbledore's decision not to send him back to Privet Drive was very surprising, but very welcome as well. I was a bit thrown by Ginny's ability to conjure stuff at the end of her third year since conjuring is N.E.W.T. level magic in canon, but maybe that's just part of your AU. Or maybe it's knowledge she gained from Tom Riddle?
The only thing I found a bit odd was the kisses on the lips "between friends." In my experience, a kiss on the lips is, by definition, more than just friendly. But maybe I'm just old fashioned. Regardless, the somewhat ambiguous relationship between Harry and Ginny is becoming more and more interesting. It's sort of strange that Harry seems to have realized his feelings for Ginny, while she still seems clueless, but it's a kind of refreshing change (even if it is a bit frustrating to see Harry ignoring and denying his feelings). Looking forward to more....
~NuwNuw
Reviewer: Evie_S Signed Date: 2007.11.12 - 11:28AM Title: Tom Riddle's Painful Return
great chapter, update soon!
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2007.11.12 - 11:07AM Title: Tom Riddle's Painful Return
now if ginny was smart and i know she is, she will get rid of croner and go staright ot harry and work on him for a while as we all know a good woman can do wonders for a mans pain...kutgw
Reviewer: Comet Moon Signed Date: 2007.11.12 - 09:06AM Title: Tom Riddle's Painful Return
This should change the Ministry reaction
Well done
Look forward to more
Jim
Reviewer: Liojgu Signed Date: 2007.11.12 - 08:58AM Title: Tom Riddle's Painful Return
you are great. :) good sense of continuity.
Reviewer: starboy454 Signed Date: 2007.11.12 - 07:06AM Title: Tom Riddle's Painful Return
more please
