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Reviewer: iKingBearII Signed Date: 2019.06.25 - 05:04AM Title: Family
I love the beginning and Ginny's comment about the table; it was beautifully comedic and definitely in character for her. I have to absolutely commend you about the idea of having the Auror Academy run out of the school-- that's a brilliant way to break through that wall that Gin and I were talking with you about.
I'm really not sure what to think about the Dudley and Petunia situation. I'm all for fics that have a more changed Dursleys' but I am still on the fence about that. Still, I like them the way they're written.
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2015.07.04 - 07:10AM Title: Family
You are a romantic..... killing off Vernon and completely changing Duddley and Petunia. Dudeley, just maybe. Petunia, I really cannot forgive. How can she put a child inside a cupboard for 10 years?
Author's Response: I'm sorry this Petunia bothered you. For what it's worth, she's still evil. It's just that living in Harry's house has given her the one thing she's always wished for: a house slave.
This take on the Dursleys came from two bits in DH: Petunia's unfinished statement to Harry on the night they all leave, and the pathetic (in every sense) view of her in Snape's memories. It seemed to me that she was showing, if not remorse, at least some sense that she and Vernon hadn't treated Harry exactly well, even if it was, from their twisted point of view, for his own good.
In any case, thank you so much for your feedback on this and the other stories. Would it help if I were to tell you that this is the only appearance by the Dursleys?
Reviewer: M_And Signed Date: 2008.05.07 - 12:32AM Title: Family
Sorry I didn't review the first three chapters, but I was so engrossed in your wonderful story that I had to keep reading non-stop. I finally need to comment a little on your story.
First off - Chapter three, (The F-word ) was very well done; though perhaps you should have called it "The B-word". Still, it was bloddy brilliant! lol :)
Second, either you are from England, or you've been there (or knwo someone who has) because the scones nd the lemon curd raang a little too true for those of us across the pond. Either way it was a really nice bit of scene discription that lent some authenticity to the story. Well done!
Finally, one minor correction for you. Hestia Jones' famous quidditch sister is Gwenog, not Morag. Just thought I'd throw that out there.
This is a fabulous story you've written. Now, if I may beg your pardon... I need to read the last to chapters before I go to bed. - M
Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2008.02.15 - 10:38AM Title: Family
Wow... what a change in perspective ten months makes when it comes to the Dursleys! The absence of Vernon seems to have made all the difference in the world as does the isolation of the island. I think I like the change in Petunia and I quite like how Dudley has turned out: his plans to join the SAS seem most ambitious, more so than anything he's ever done in canon... I hope he makes it in.
Anyway, Family is definitely what it's all about. Molly's faith that Harry and Ginny only did what they said they did, the fact that Petunia and Dudley see the value in Harry, and the Weasley men's willingness to trust Harry with their daughter/little sister all show the different variations of what constitutes the sense of belonging that Harry didn't have growing up. You've done a nice job of helping Harry to realize that as an adult, he has the support of and love of those nearest to him.
I've thoroughly enjoyed this story and thank you for sharing it with us.
Author's Response: Thank you!
I definitely felt as if JKR had shown us a crack in the Dursleys' façade during the last two books; I was fascinated to find out what happened to them once they'd lived in a magical environment. Alas, JKR didn't show us! So I felt I had to. ;-)
I have a plan for a follow-up with Dudley. We'll see if that comes to fruition.
And yes, I also felt that it was important that Harry realize that he does in fact have a family.
I'm glad that you've enjoyed this! Thank you again for giving feedback.
Reviewer: DebbieO Signed Date: 2008.02.14 - 12:37AM Title: Family
This is the greatest story. I absolutely love it and I'm thrilled you've continued it. Thanks!
Author's Response: Thank YOU! I'm glad that you're enjoying this!
Reviewer: christopher Signed Date: 2008.02.13 - 10:21PM Title: Family
The fourth chapter seals the deal. Best. Post-Ch 36. Ever.
Thank you so much for posting this.
Author's Response: Thank YOU! :-D
Reviewer: cacata Signed Date: 2008.02.13 - 09:55PM Title: Family
"Oh, Harry,” Ginny said, her voice low in a way that Harry had never heard it except under very private circumstances, “maybe we should have cleaned the table. After, you know–”
“Ginny!” squealed Harry, as all of the members of her family–even Fleur and Mrs. Weasley–leapt to their feet with looks of horror on their faces."
That was absolutely hysterical. I love how you have Harry squeal :) and had Uncle Vernon idie with his boots on. What an image :O
I don't remember if I have ever left a comment on this fic before, but I absolutely love it. I really enjoy how you wtite Harry's relationship with the Weasleys. though he is Ron's best friend, he has a relationship with all of them as individuals too It reminded me of my relationship with my childhood best friend and her family. there were a lot of them too and they treated me as family. It's good to see Harry reconnect with his family and not hold on to bitterness. I hope you continue to write this Harry and Ginny some more.
Author's Response: I will write at least two more episodes to this, I promise—possibly three. :-)
It's always fun getting characters who are fairly unflappable—Harry, usually, or Luna—and push them past their limits. I enjoyed making poor Harry squeal, so I'm glad that you thought it was fun!
