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Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.01.16 - 04:41PM Title: Missing

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Hogwarts is never really a safe place for Ginny. The question now is who took her and why.



Reviewer: Blissful Oblivion Signed Date: 2012.06.14 - 02:46AM Title: Missing

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That was a really horrible end to the chapter and I'm glad I'll be able to read the next chapter straightaway. I hope Ginny's all right - I'm biting my nails in worry. I wonder how those two men got inside the castle? Hope they're chucked right into Azkaban.



Reviewer: DukeBrymin Signed Date: 2010.02.23 - 02:11PM Title: Missing

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Nice one there, trying to make us think Harry and Ginny had found a Harry Potter chocolate frog card, then it's not!



Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2010.02.06 - 08:18AM Title: Missing

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Is it possible she is in gryffindors room? Has Harry forgotten to check the marauders map?

Can Harry never escape the evil gits?



Reviewer: charlz1983 Signed Date: 2009.01.20 - 01:24PM Title: Missing

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soooooo good and what an ending!!!!

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed!



Reviewer: annep Signed Date: 2009.01.12 - 06:35PM Title: Missing

I can’t believe that Harry only told Glenda his first name—she would only care about a family name. Apparently he wasn’t interesting enough for her to ask him for his full name. Our esteemed author is teasing her readers!

“He’d been thinking how he was never quite aware of when something would make him remember the past so violently.” This whole paragraph was wonderful; you do a great job of exploring character. It’s a bit amazing, after all they’ve been through together, that Harry still worries his friends will get tired of him and leave. (Those blasted Dursleys! And Dumbledore too, for abandoning a child to them!) Maybe Harry and Ginny should go back to Australia for the month of May.

The intruders into Hogwarts may or may not be linked with Ginny's disapperance. If Ginny was being pursued (like Neville had been the year before) the Gryffindor room may have let her in to give her refuge “in time of peril” or maybe Glenda sensed Ginny was wearing the amulet and wanted her to enter. Obviously our Trio isn't taking the time to think about the events, preferring to let emotion take over and to tear around the castle (at least you're keeping Harry in character!). Okay, that’s rather mean; I’m sure I’d be irrational if it was my loved one who was missing.

So maybe soon our very kind author will let us know more about the attacks on Harry (this chapter & the quintaped). I’ve been waiting for you to flesh out your hints from chapter 39 about Professors Thistlewaite and Fiesche. Does flattery help us get answers sooner, o most illustrious and talented scribe? ;)

I'm enjoying how Charlie's "You're so lucky...I can't beat you up" lines are continuing. Harry probably will be hearing these jokes from all the Weasley brothers until his & Ginny's golden wedding anniversary.

Hopefully Neville will get a chocolate frog card too.

You have so many story threads going on with this story; I don't know how you keep up with them all!



Author's Response: LOL about the name. Poor Harry still worried about abandonment ... *sob* Your speculations about where Ginny is are indeed very interesting ;) . Yes the Professors and the Qintaped will come up again, patience grasshopper ... I don't know how I keep up with the story threads either! I'm sure I don't know why some people have bothered to even try :P . The next chapter will be up after my lil piece o fluff is completed. I'm having such fun with it and then we'll get back to the climax of RL. (yes, I said climax, if you've ever seen a graph of how narratives look, the ah, climax is near the end ... just sayin' ...)



Reviewer: HallowedGriffin Signed Date: 2009.01.02 - 03:34AM Title: Missing

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Ooooh, a cliffhanger!!!

Great chapter by the way, and a Happy New Year too!!!

Author's Response: Happy New Year to you also! I certianly hope you are hanging on to the edge of that cliff! ;)



Reviewer: lionquidditch Signed Date: 2009.01.01 - 07:58PM Title: Missing

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Loved the chapter, enjoyed the scene with the group finding Ron's Chocolate Frog card. I can't wait to see where you go with the abduction of GInny. Great chapter as usual

Author's Response: Is she abducted? Oh dear ... ;) I'm glad you liked the Choc Frog Card scene is was horrible to write and keep straight! At least it worked for at least one person!



Reviewer: KEK Signed Date: 2008.12.31 - 07:36PM Title: Missing

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This story is really good, I just found it the other day and ended up reading all 43 chapters in about 3 days......
Again, this story is amazing, keep up the great work.
Oh, and I'm really glad that Ginny is alright.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it - and what makes you think Ginny's all right? *blinks innocently* muhahahahahahahaha



Reviewer: Yolis7 Signed Date: 2008.12.28 - 08:14AM Title: Missing

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Love it..keep it up..amzing..is all i can say..ur the best..

Author's Response: Thanks! Next chapter is keeping on keeping on, never fear!



Reviewer: monty1 Signed Date: 2008.12.28 - 02:32AM Title: Missing

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great chapter as always

Author's Response: Thanks!



Reviewer: sagefemme Signed Date: 2008.12.26 - 12:35AM Title: Missing

I've got my theories, too.

It wouldn't be HP if it was all Sunlit Days. There has to be quiddich drama, and agonizing intrigue....or why bother??

oh and the cards... it's all warm and fuzzy when Ron gets the limelight a bit. Makes me entirely happy.

The update wait on Rebuilding Life is a delicious torture...like waiting for home made fudge to set, and absolutely worth the weeks.

Author's Response: I ma glad it's worth it, I was beginning to think everyone had given up on it! Meanwhile - YAY RON!



Reviewer: Professor_Chris Signed Date: 2008.12.25 - 10:49PM Title: Missing

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Another great chapter... Even if it did end badly, I hope they find her soon and that she is okay...

Author's Response: It ended badly? Oh no! :P



Reviewer: Phoeness Signed Date: 2008.12.25 - 04:46AM Title: Missing

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Cool, a new chapter for Christmas !! Thanks Kezza, I missed you and the story. This one is very good, amazing, it’s crescendo ! Happy at the biggining and sad at the end... you’re good at it, aren’t you ;) ?!!
I laughed so much with the cards, Ron’s reaction is hilarious !
I feel so bad for Ginny... and Harry and the others of course. I though somethings was going wrong when Ginny didn’t come back from the Harpies. I have a few theories but I keep them for myself since they’re not really precise ;)
Merry Christmas, and happy new year (well, I’m early...) !

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you think I'm good at this thing! I wonder if one of your theories pans out - you'll have to tell me!



Reviewer: DebbieO Signed Date: 2008.12.25 - 01:24AM Title: Missing

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Scary chapter! Harry never catches much of a break even post Voldemort.

Author's Response: Poor Harry ...



Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2008.12.24 - 09:20PM Title: Missing

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It is Christmas. I cannot believe you have Ginny captured. Poor Harry. Not again!

Author's Response: Ah, but is she captured? *laughs maniacally*



Reviewer: I Love Ginerva Signed Date: 2008.12.24 - 08:50PM Title: Missing

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I really think I'm going to have to kill you for leaving it there!!!! That's cruel and unusual punishment.

ILG

Author's Response: *thud* Iz ded *evil grin*



Reviewer: marinepotterfan Signed Date: 2008.12.24 - 06:29PM Title: Missing

I hope Harry looks at the Map it will tell him where she is more than likely.

TFW
MPF

Author's Response: Oh ... will it? Muhahahahaha!



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2008.12.24 - 04:31PM Title: Missing

me i think i would have gone for the map and then try the chamber but thats me...hope harry and ron are ok and ginny makes it out with out a lot of problems....kutgw

Author's Response: The Chamber is closer than the Map and none of them are thinking clearly *rollseyes at the three of them*



Reviewer: GryffindorGal87 Signed Date: 2008.12.24 - 04:27PM Title: Missing

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Gah! Cliff hanger! You really know how to turn a story on it's head! :-) Awesome, amazing chapter! Loved everything in it. I can't wait for the next one! :-)

Author's Response: Hopefully it won't be too long :D .




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