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Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.01.16 - 02:11PM Title: Revelations
Eventful chapter. I wonder how Molly and Arthur will react to learning they are about to be grandparents.
Reviewer: Blissful Oblivion Signed Date: 2012.06.03 - 01:58AM Title: Revelations
Yet another great chapter. OH NO! Ron's missing! Harry and his friends just can't have a trouble-free life can they? I hope Ron's not in any danger and comes back soon. I've missed his presence in the last few chapters.
I love what you're doing with Grimmauld Place! If only Sirius was alive and he could see the great use his house has been put to. Kreacher really has done a brilliant job of changing the house's appearance.
Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2010.02.04 - 04:39PM Title: Revelations
That's a bit of cliffie...thank goodness i can read the next chapter right away!
I wasn't quite expecting Harry to think George's bombshell was a ruse to get Harry to practise safe sex! I'm interested to find out when this little sub-plot becomes known to the rest of the cast:-)
Harry's embarassement made me smirk...poor Harry
Reviewer: AvantGarde Signed Date: 2008.10.28 - 06:37AM Title: Revelations
So with that last line I have lost all coherent thought and am in desperate need of Poufwa's jaw-dropping smiley... its all just so evil... evil cliffie, evil possibilities, evil! And its exam time and therefore not appropriate to beg on hands and knees and with the promise of cookies for another update. Your plain evil!
Author's Response: Bwhahahahahahahahahaha! (Tim Tams ... for the bribe.)
Reviewer: sagefemme Signed Date: 2008.10.23 - 10:55AM Title: Revelations
I've been perusing and reading fanfiction for about a month now, and I've read quite a lot, but this was the first story line that made me think, "hmm, I should register so I can leave feedback" Now I'm totally stuck waiting with the rest of your reviewers, for the next installment, because I broke my own, NO WIP rule to read yours. :D Like a few others I'm impressed with Ginny's character development and her struggle to understand how the love for family could possibly co-exist in a Death Eater life.
Author's Response: I'm impressed, you broke your own rule! :D You are stuck I guess, hopefully not too much longer though. My beta and I are currently being assaulted by Real Life. But we will get chapter 41 to you ASAP!
Reviewer: kash2110 Signed Date: 2008.10.20 - 08:43PM Title: Revelations
“I’m going to be a dad. That’s good news, isn’t it, Harry?” -The VERY BEST George! Nothing quite like being a father and holding YOUR child for the first time.
I can't believe that I have too wait like everyone now for the next gripping chapter (I knew I was reading them to fast, but I blame you for that!! Well you shouldn't have made the story so GOOD!!!)
Author's Response: Well ... fill in time by reading my other stuff :P I'm glad you've enjoyed it thus far and hopefully the wait won't be terribly too long :)
Reviewer: HallowedGriffin Signed Date: 2008.10.15 - 07:05PM Title: Revelations
Again, good job!
You just keep writing the best stuff.
Will be waiting right here for the next chapter as always. ^_^
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it! the chapter will be here as soon as it can. Right now there is a tutu crisis at my house!
Reviewer: frg234 Signed Date: 2008.10.14 - 08:56PM Title: Revelations
Great chapter as always. There is so much going on that I want to know about. I wonder what hijinks Ron and Bill are encountering in Egypt that reders him unable to receive owls? Must be some missing muggle borns returning in the near future.
The conversation between Harry and Arthur seemed to really parallel with the conversation those two had in the summer. I think you wrote something in a previous chapter that they need to worry about protecting Harry's virture more than Ginny's, so I think Arthur might realize his daughter is kind of the leader in their physical relationship. I thought it was particularly funny when Arthur was asking Harry if he was careful.......he meant heart, Harry started talking birth control. Classic. I also like the "She's yours now" part. Basically saying in Arthur's way, you might not be married......yet, but it is going to happen.
One complaint.....I HAVE to know about the missing muggleborns and that darn Griffindor room. So, the next chapter needs to neatly wrap up both of those mysteries. (not unreasonable of me at all right! :) )
Two thumbs up, loving the story!!
Author's Response: Okay I promise you will find out about Egypt hijinks in the next chapter ... I promise you will find out if they found any missing Muggleborns in the next chapter ... I can't promise anything about Gryffindor's room - in the next chapter. I'm happy that you found the parallels in those Harry and Arthur conversations. In the summer Arthur said that harry had her heart and now he's just making sure that he's being careful with it because, yeah, they belong to each other and Molly adn Arthur know that and as Molly said, in any other circumstances maybe there'd be less latitude but ... well ... he's Harry Potter :P! It's not that though, but war changes people and things and situations. I think Arthur is very well aware that it's not Harry he needs to counsel about taking the lead - he's very much concerned with making sure Harry knows what he's doing actually. And I think that's becasue he knows Harry's at the disadvantage here regarding ... stuff ... lol Anyway enough of my ramble or this will be longer than the next chapter! I'm glad you love it! Don't shoot me at the end of the next chapter *evil grin*
Reviewer: penny_potter Signed Date: 2008.10.14 - 07:35PM Title: Revelations
agh Another cliffy!! But also another spectacular chapter!! Keep it coming! I love it.
Author's Response: Oh it's still coming - don't worry! Hopefully soon, we'll see what we can do!
Reviewer: Montie Signed Date: 2008.10.14 - 02:06AM Title: Revelations
Well What can I say I've been reading ages now, an I love this story so much. but I must say Ahhhhh I been left in suspense. :-)
Geoff
PS please, please, please, update soon.
Author's Response: You have indeed been left in suspense ... I am so mean ... glad you are enjoying it!
Reviewer: sockless Signed Date: 2008.10.13 - 10:33PM Title: Revelations
OH MY GOD!!! You have GOT to be kidding me! Ron can not be missing!!!!! Not ok. Update TI #4 please!
Author's Response: Hermione said .... I think he's missing ... ;) Update will be when it gets here, I can't promise an ETA ... sadly ... but don't worry it won't be too long :D
Reviewer: irishdaddy0204 Signed Date: 2008.10.12 - 09:57PM Title: Revelations
I want Arthur Weasley as my father-in-law.....
Brilliant as ever Kezzabear. I still think you are one of the most original & talented outh there. Keep up and update as soon as life allows. We love you no matter how long it takes !!!
Author's Response: Don't we all want Arthur for a father-in-law ... (maybe he's too good to be true but you know what - this is fiction - give me my fantasies!) I now blush at your complimentary tones *blushes*
Reviewer: harrypotterspirit Signed Date: 2008.10.12 - 09:46PM Title: Revelations
The conversation with Harry and George and then the continued conversation with Molly and the boys in the kitchen was so enjoyable. My grin grew the further on I read. Ron missing? Doesn't sound good.
Author's Response: That conversation was first designed in LOLspeak with my beta ... it's er ... come a long way :D Why is everyone so hung up on Ron? *evil grin*
Reviewer: armybabe09 Signed Date: 2008.10.12 - 09:11PM Title: Revelations
I freaking love Kreacher.
Ooooh. But how can Ron be missing? I thought... hmmm I need to reread chapters more often.
Author's Response: Ron's in Egypt with Bill. Apparently he's not been very reliable with the letter writing ... hmmm sinister .. Kreacher's growing on me ;)
Reviewer: elaithin Signed Date: 2008.10.12 - 06:45PM Title: Revelations
Wonderful as always, Kezza. The range you capture in every single chapter just astounds me. Looking forward to seeing what the deal with Ron is. I'm loving 'Sirius House' more and more.
Author's Response: There's a deal with Ron? Oh wait, yeah, right ... he's missing ... I remember now :D
Reviewer: goingbacktosquareone Signed Date: 2008.10.12 - 04:24PM Title: Revelations
* is smug *
I told you... everyone would love teh funneh. Always trust your beta! MWAH! Another fine addition to my favorite story! Now I must go back to your Chapter 15 and find that inconsistency... I guess I don't have to feel too horrible about missing that since I wasn't on watch then. *grins*
Kisses, sunshine and daisies and stuffs...Jen
Author's Response: I do trust the beta! I should feel distincly horrible though ... stupid brain can't even remember my own canon! If it makes you feel any better I have picked up a number of my own errors before it even gets to a beta - oh that's YOU! *mwah!*
Reviewer: Phoeness Signed Date: 2008.10.12 - 04:14PM Title: Revelations
The moment between George and Harry and later with Molly shouting at them was so funny, just like the moment between Arthur and “Mollywobbles” !! But just after that, Gunny’s talk about the Death Eaters’ children and her vision about love was heart-breaking, it left me speechless...
Ron is missing ??? Oh no !! I can’t believe it ! Why tormenting us like that ??!! Well, in fact I love that... ;) Anyway, Ron always comes back...
Kreacher has been wonderfull, I like the way you describe him. And I’m glad Molly accepted to help Mrs Chumley at the Children's house, the poor non-magical woman, she couldn’t be alone...
This chapter is so full of love and it’s funny at the same time, it’s a great chapter, I loved it !!
Thanks, Vanessa
Author's Response: I know you love it ... Ron always comes back? Well ... if you say so ;) Love and funny is a great combination!
Reviewer: arabear Signed Date: 2008.10.12 - 04:08PM Title: Revelations
Woah!! That was intense!!! Where is Ron???
Anyway, great chapter...the stuff with George was hilarious!! And I loved Ginny's moments concerning the Death Eaters children...so sad...
Can't wait for the next one..
:]
Author's Response: Ron is ... um ... missing *innocent glance*
