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Reviewer: sweetdreamer285 Signed Date: 2007.11.21 - 12:05AM Title: Chapter 10: A Bunch of Idiots
*In awe* My favorite chapter so far! It was like a montage to everything we've been following up to. Well done and keep up! ^_^
Author's Response: Thanks so much! And thanks for leaving a review!
Reviewer: Nemo1024 Anonymous Date: 2007.11.20 - 06:11AM Title: Chapter 10: A Bunch of Idiots
Nice start to each paragraph :) You are still doing a vary good work. Just.... update! :)
Author's Response: Thanks! Update will come in... two weeks max, I really hope. But no promises. XD Thanks so much for leaving a review!
Reviewer: quinn Signed Date: 2007.11.14 - 02:17PM Title: Chapter 10: A Bunch of Idiots
Well done, werekitten! I've enjoyed every chapter, and I'm really impressed with this one! I still disagree with Molly, but now so does Ginny and even, to some degree, Molly herself. Good on ya! I look forward to the tough conversations you have coming up. And I won't say write faster, even though I eagerly wait the next chapter. I'll say take your time, write well, and enjoy it :)
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, it was my beta's to make Molly doubt herself more, so that people like you wouldn't be totally mad at me. And it worked, so kudos to her! I'm glad you liked it, and thanks so much for leaving a review!!
Reviewer: roonilwazlib Signed Date: 2007.11.13 - 08:58PM Title: Chapter 10: A Bunch of Idiots
GO HOME GINNY!
Great story! I have only one suggestion: UPDATE!
Happy early birthday!
--Greer
Author's Response: Hahaha you too (Happy birthdy, that is). Ginny'll go home next chapter, promise! But I don't wanna say anything about when the next one will be out, because it'll probably be a lot longer than I think it will. XD Tanks so much for leaving a review!!!
Reviewer: WaterMoth Signed Date: 2007.11.11 - 03:50PM Title: Chapter 10: A Bunch of Idiots
ooh, i like this chapter
~Watermoth
P.S. please write faster
Author's Response: Yay! Thanks!
As for writing faster... well, maybe I'll send you the next one to preview (you can correct my spelling :D). And you should know how busy I was! I was doing crew! XD Gah, I promised I wouldn't make excuses. Oh well.
Thanks so much for reviewing!!
Reviewer: Starlight Signed Date: 2007.11.09 - 07:22PM Title: Chapter 10: A Bunch of Idiots
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Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2007.11.09 - 06:31PM Title: Chapter 10: A Bunch of Idiots
they all need to start working out the things that are wedge between them,,,,and now is the right time for ginny to lay the ground work for harry to work out his feelings...kutgw
Author's Response: Yeah, everyone's going to start coming back together in the next few chapters. After all, it's only going to be 14 chapters long. Thanks so much for leaving a review!!
Reviewer: Darkkstarr Signed Date: 2007.11.09 - 05:47PM Title: Chapter 10: A Bunch of Idiots
Wahaha! Incredible chapter! Nice way for Miri to get served n_n Now she'll stop being so.....prejudiced? Aah, I don't know the right word. Oh well. Keep updating!
P.S. The last few chapters are rather angsty o.O
Author's Response: Yay! You found your password! You used your account! And you *gasp* left a review!! Thank you!!!
Reviewer: Victor Aagaard Signed Date: 2007.11.09 - 05:10PM Title: Chapter 10: A Bunch of Idiots
Well worth the wait. The organisation, and the corresponding chapter title, were brilliant. These last few chapters have been an emotional pendulum, but we seem to be on the up swing.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad someone actully liked the organisation -- I thought it was a bit much, and my Britpicker thinks I use the word 'bloody' to much. XD Glad you liked it, and thanks so much for reveiwing!!
Reviewer: frankleybrilliant Signed Date: 2007.11.09 - 04:45PM Title: Chapter 10: A Bunch of Idiots
werekitten, you've done it again and written another wonderful story. I don't know who you are or where you're from, but you have a serious talent for writing. You strong style becomes apparent in your very straightforward yet enthralling method of storytelling, and through a lack of foreshadowing, you keep the audience on your toes throughout the entire story. Thank you for giving me something to enjoy this much. I look forward to the other chapters. You must have had some wonderful peers and teachers to be able to write with such a well thought out and well structured format that keeps away repetition and blandness. Keep up the good work. As was said about Shakespeare, "writing is not innate, but is created in oneself through one's influential peers and experiences."
Author's Response: I told you, read the story before you review. And stop that nonsense about not knowing who I am. And stop lying.
Reviewer: RiverChild Signed Date: 2007.11.09 - 02:49PM Title: Chapter 10: A Bunch of Idiots
I've been following this story for a while, and it's the best Al/Slytherin story I've read so far. It's a really goo dstory and I hope you update soon! :)
Author's Response: Aw, thanks! As for the next update... well, I thought this one would take me two weeks max and it took over a month, so I'm making no promises. I HOPE it'll be out before next month. I'm so glad you like it, and thanks so much for leaving a review!
Reviewer: Elvenlaughter Signed Date: 2007.11.09 - 02:41PM Title: Chapter 10: A Bunch of Idiots
Melodrama, angst angst angst... at least Miri is coming around. And I feel like James is on the right track as well. I would love to see a father to father discussion between Harry and Draco about their sons' friendship, that would be really interesting... I think Ginny is right, that she should have gone home three days ago. Everyone has made some bad decisions, but they're all learning. That's good, I want Albus to be okay as well. He needs to have a chat with his parents.
Author's Response: Yes, everyone is beginning to cme around. Harry and Draco.... that would be HILARIOUS, and I would love to write it, but I don't think I will. I've a. sorta neglected Al's friends, and to give them a bigger role now would be weird, and b. got no time to write this story, and so am trying to finish it soon. Thanks so much for leaving a review!!!
Reviewer: Enchantedgurls Signed Date: 2007.11.09 - 01:33PM Title: Chapter 10: A Bunch of Idiots
I liked this chapter! I'm glad Ginny is finally going to go home. Don't worry about not updating sooner, real life comes first and often gets in the way. In any case, just one thing. Siye now has two different categories for Post-DH. There is the category for during the 19 year gap (Post-DH/AB). Then there is a category for after the epilogue (Post-DH/PM). This story is currently in AB ("after battle") but should be put in PM ("Potter marriage"). Just wanted to let you know. Update when you can! :D
Author's Response: Yeah, I knew if I delayed Ginny's return any longer people would take out the pitchforks and torches. Thanks for mentioning the category thing -- I'd completely forgotten. I'm so glad you liked it, and thanks for leaving a review!
Reviewer: sidnandragin Signed Date: 2007.11.09 - 12:50PM Title: Chapter 10: A Bunch of Idiots
What a great sory!
I read it all in one shot and I have enjoyed it and now I cannot wait til the next great chapter.
Wonderful how you have the characters all learning about what does it really mean to belong to a house and what does it truly stand for?
I love that you realized that Voldemort was just plain evil who gre up looking after himself. He made the choice. Al has a different look and I think Harry forgets that his children arenot raised like that so why is it now different?
Ginny, I do hope that she goes back to talk with Harry but I wonder why it is that Harry has not taken up the book that Ron gave him, 12 Fail Safe ways to Witches.
I hope they can get over this and talk with all their children.
Al is so cute but I understand James as well. It is hard for one sibling to look after the other even as close as they are with one another and no one wonder about him.
I cant wait. Wonderful brilliant showing!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! You essentially got all the points I was trying to make, especially with this chapter. I'm so glad you liked it, and thanks for leaving a review!
Reviewer: James Jameson Signed Date: 2007.11.09 - 02:15AM Title: Chapter 10: A Bunch of Idiots
YES YOU DO GINNY!!!
Author's Response: It's obvious that you didn't want Harry and Ginny to get back together () Thanks so much for leaving a review!
