Reviews For The Next Generation
Reviewer: James Jameson Signed Date: 2007.09.09 - 06:01PM Title: Chapter 6: Something Wrong that's terrible! lol I liek the swallowing part... very funny Reviewer: knightsbridge Signed Date: 2007.09.08 - 06:16AM Title: Chapter 6: Something Wrong At least Harry figured out that he did something wrong...VERY wrong. You were right in your A/N; it's easy to speak in the abstract, especially when you believe with all your heart that you won't have to face something you don't want to...lol especially if your name happens to be Harry Potter. Kinda' dumb, considering Al was named after professor Snape...and we all know what house HE headed. Nonetheless, Harry figured that since his son James, his parents, he and Ginny, Sirius, and every Weasley had worn the red and gold, it was easy to tell Al it didn't matter what house he was sorted into...until abstract became a reality. Reviewer: eaglebird Signed Date: 2007.09.06 - 01:49PM Title: Chapter 6: Something Wrong I enjoyed the chapter. Al is coping well under the circumstances. Harry made anothe boo-boo lieing to Lily but managed to cover it up. He's learning. I'm looking forward to hearing from Ginny and why she didn't try to get in contact with Lily. Reviewer: Nemo1024 Anonymous Date: 2007.08.31 - 10:36AM Title: Chapter 6: Something Wrong Very good story. I like your writing style, but the chapters are too short. Still, I am not complaining if these chapters will keep on coming :) Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2007.08.29 - 08:39PM Title: Chapter 6: Something Wrong well harry really is in the dog house now and lily has to remeber that parents try for the best and fail everytime....ron is righ tbut not sure how to go needs hermione NOW....kutgw Reviewer: Chrysanthemum Signed Date: 2007.08.29 - 08:18PM Title: Chapter 6: Something Wrong No Review Reviewer: Rowen Ravenclaw Signed Date: 2007.08.29 - 04:49PM Title: Chapter 6: Something Wrong Great Chapter, very much worth the wait. I hope Al shows all that Slytherins are people too. keep up the great writing. Reviewer: Phoenixflower Anonymous Date: 2007.08.29 - 10:38AM Title: Chapter 6: Something Wrong Loved this chapter! Hopefully we'll see some Hermione in the story too though :D hehe look forward to more soon. My fave DH story xx Reviewer: quinn Signed Date: 2007.08.29 - 09:50AM Title: Chapter 6: Something Wrong Captain Unoriginal here, but I'm getting a little steamed with Ginny too! I felt that way after the last chapter, but come on Ginny! Dragging your kid into fights on purpose or not... man. Reviewer: quinn Signed Date: 2007.08.29 - 09:49AM Title: Chapter 6: Something Wrong Captain Unoriginal here, but I'm getting a little steamed with Ginny too! I felt that way after the last chapter, but come on Ginny! Dragging your kid into fights on purpose or not... man. Reviewer: Enchantedgurls Signed Date: 2007.08.29 - 08:44AM Title: Chapter 6: Something Wrong Oh geez, where is Ginny anyway? She can leave Harry all she wants but she can't just leave Lily like that. Poor Lily. LOL I love this story and when I said that I thought Harry was out of character last chapter I meant that I thought he took the argument a step further then he probably would have in canon. Your argument for why he is in character is plausible though. One thing in this chapter though, Lily doesn't have green eyes, it said so in the DH epilogue. In any case, I can't wait to see whats going to happen! :) Reviewer: Alphashard Signed Date: 2007.08.29 - 12:04AM Title: Chapter 6: Something Wrong I like what your doing with Harry so keep it up, he's messed up and needs to take his agnsty medicine! I do look foward to a very long journey of Albus and James reconnecting though :) Oh and I really enjoyed that Albus gave his mother's love to Neville, Woohoo! Reviewer: Kezzabear Signed Date: 2007.08.28 - 09:39PM Title: Chapter 6: Something Wrong Except for the fact that the Epilogue says Albus is the only one of Harry's kids with his eyes i buy it - Harry would taotally act like that if he was taken by surprise as described in your A/N :) . good job, would love to see ginny's side of it and can't wait for them to sort things out...what hoops will harry ahve to jump through I wonder... Reviewer: Elvenlaughter Signed Date: 2007.08.28 - 09:36PM Title: Chapter 6: Something Wrong Ouch. Reviewer: faded memories Signed Date: 2007.08.28 - 08:35PM Title: Chapter 6: Something Wrong So, so, so, so sad and sweet Reviewer: roonilwazlib Signed Date: 2007.08.28 - 07:57PM Title: Chapter 6: Something Wrong Nice!!! AHH what's going on with Miri??? Is she hiding something??? Oooh I wanna know soooo bad! Reviewer: GREYWOLF Signed Date: 2007.08.28 - 06:41PM Title: Chapter 6: Something Wrong Very nice recovery. I think we can accept that Harry just flew off the handle. Of course it is hard to believe that a daughter of Hermione wouldn't have already written home with the news. Well OK, dramatic effect. Reviewer: ShadowFang Signed Date: 2007.08.28 - 06:37PM Title: Chapter 6: Something Wrong Hope Harry finds Ginny . Reviewer: anonymous celebrity Signed Date: 2007.08.28 - 06:34PM Title: Chapter 6: Something Wrong I liked this chapter, and how everything is coming about. Is the next chapter from Ginny's point of view? I'm interested to see that, and where she went off to. The Burrow? Hermionie's? Well probably not Hermionie's seeing as Ron didn't know what was up. But I definately think you made Harry very in-character. Keep up the good work, update soon! Reviewer: hjp74 Signed Date: 2007.08.28 - 06:28PM Title: Chapter 6: Something Wrong another nice chapter allthough at the moment i am enjoying the hogwarts part more than the complet mess that harrys made at home. | |||||||
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