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Reviewer: James Jameson Signed Date: 2007.09.09 - 06:01PM Title: Chapter 6: Something Wrong

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that's terrible! lol I liek the swallowing part... very funny

Author's Response: I hope you're referring to the bad choices by the characters, and not my writing style... :D. Thanks so much for leaving a review!



Reviewer: knightsbridge Signed Date: 2007.09.08 - 06:16AM Title: Chapter 6: Something Wrong

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At least Harry figured out that he did something wrong...VERY wrong. You were right in your A/N; it's easy to speak in the abstract, especially when you believe with all your heart that you won't have to face something you don't want to...lol especially if your name happens to be Harry Potter. Kinda' dumb, considering Al was named after professor Snape...and we all know what house HE headed. Nonetheless, Harry figured that since his son James, his parents, he and Ginny, Sirius, and every Weasley had worn the red and gold, it was easy to tell Al it didn't matter what house he was sorted into...until abstract became a reality.
Al was put in that house for a reason, and I seriously doubt it was with evil intent.

Darian

Author's Response: Yes! I'm so glad someone agrees with me! Thanks so much for leaving a review!

Author's Response: Yes! I'm so glad someone agrees with me! Thanks so much for leaving a review!



Reviewer: eaglebird Signed Date: 2007.09.06 - 01:49PM Title: Chapter 6: Something Wrong

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I enjoyed the chapter. Al is coping well under the circumstances. Harry made anothe boo-boo lieing to Lily but managed to cover it up. He's learning. I'm looking forward to hearing from Ginny and why she didn't try to get in contact with Lily.

Author's Response: That's all in chapter 7... which is now up! Harry, learning how do cope with relationship problems? That'd be a new one... :D. Glad you liked it, thanks so much for leaving a review!



Reviewer: Nemo1024 Anonymous Date: 2007.08.31 - 10:36AM Title: Chapter 6: Something Wrong

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Very good story. I like your writing style, but the chapters are too short. Still, I am not complaining if these chapters will keep on coming :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm working on longer chapters the next is about 4,000 words, my longest one yet. But it's still really short... Thanks so much for leaving a review!



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2007.08.29 - 08:39PM Title: Chapter 6: Something Wrong

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well harry really is in the dog house now and lily has to remeber that parents try for the best and fail everytime....ron is righ tbut not sure how to go needs hermione NOW....kutgw

Author's Response: Haha, accurate analisation. Thanks so much for leaving a review!!



Reviewer: Chrysanthemum Signed Date: 2007.08.29 - 08:18PM Title: Chapter 6: Something Wrong

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Reviewer: Rowen Ravenclaw Signed Date: 2007.08.29 - 04:49PM Title: Chapter 6: Something Wrong

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Great Chapter, very much worth the wait. I hope Al shows all that Slytherins are people too. keep up the great writing.

Author's Response: Thanks! And thanks so much for leaving a review!



Reviewer: Phoenixflower Anonymous Date: 2007.08.29 - 10:38AM Title: Chapter 6: Something Wrong

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Loved this chapter! Hopefully we'll see some Hermione in the story too though :D hehe look forward to more soon. My fave DH story xx

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it! Hermione will be coming in Chapter 8, probably. Thanks for leaving a review!



Reviewer: quinn Signed Date: 2007.08.29 - 09:50AM Title: Chapter 6: Something Wrong

Captain Unoriginal here, but I'm getting a little steamed with Ginny too! I felt that way after the last chapter, but come on Ginny! Dragging your kid into fights on purpose or not... man.

On the other hand, not even the slightest feeling of judgment from Neville, er, Professor Longbottom.. I love that guy.

Great chapter, Keep them coming!



Reviewer: quinn Signed Date: 2007.08.29 - 09:49AM Title: Chapter 6: Something Wrong

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Captain Unoriginal here, but I'm getting a little steamed with Ginny too! I felt that way after the last chapter, but come on Ginny! Dragging your kid into fights on purpose or not... man.

On the other hand, not even the slightest feeling of judgment from Neville, er, Professor Longbottom.. I love that guy.

Great chapter, Keep them coming!

Author's Response: You'll get a better look into what Ginny's feeling next chapter. I'm glad you like Neville... :D. He's always been one of my favorites. Thanks for leaving a review!



Reviewer: Enchantedgurls Signed Date: 2007.08.29 - 08:44AM Title: Chapter 6: Something Wrong

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Oh geez, where is Ginny anyway? She can leave Harry all she wants but she can't just leave Lily like that. Poor Lily. LOL I love this story and when I said that I thought Harry was out of character last chapter I meant that I thought he took the argument a step further then he probably would have in canon. Your argument for why he is in character is plausible though. One thing in this chapter though, Lily doesn't have green eyes, it said so in the DH epilogue. In any case, I can't wait to see whats going to happen! :)

Author's Response: I wanted to leave you all in suspense about Ginny for a chapter... she'll be back in ch. 7. Yeahh, I sorta changed Lily's eye color. Sorry... Thanks so much fore leaving a review!!



Reviewer: Alphashard Signed Date: 2007.08.29 - 12:04AM Title: Chapter 6: Something Wrong

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I like what your doing with Harry so keep it up, he's messed up and needs to take his agnsty medicine! I do look foward to a very long journey of Albus and James reconnecting though :) Oh and I really enjoyed that Albus gave his mother's love to Neville, Woohoo!

Author's Response: Wow, people are calling a story I wrote angsty... I never thought that would happen. :D. Gald you like it, and thanks so much for reviewing!!



Reviewer: Kezzabear Signed Date: 2007.08.28 - 09:39PM Title: Chapter 6: Something Wrong

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Except for the fact that the Epilogue says Albus is the only one of Harry's kids with his eyes i buy it - Harry would taotally act like that if he was taken by surprise as described in your A/N :) . good job, would love to see ginny's side of it and can't wait for them to sort things out...what hoops will harry ahve to jump through I wonder...

Author's Response: I wanted to keep you in suspense about Ginny for another chapter -- she'll make her appearence next chapter. I sorta forgot that Lily doesn't have green eyes... XD. I'm glad you think Harry wasn't totally OOC. Thanks so much for leaving a review!!!



Reviewer: Elvenlaughter Signed Date: 2007.08.28 - 09:36PM Title: Chapter 6: Something Wrong

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Ouch.

Author's Response: Haha. Thanks for leaving a review!



Reviewer: faded memories Signed Date: 2007.08.28 - 08:35PM Title: Chapter 6: Something Wrong

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So, so, so, so sad and sweet

Author's Response: I hope you're referring to the plot, not my writing style... :D. Thanks so much for leaving a review!!!



Reviewer: roonilwazlib Signed Date: 2007.08.28 - 07:57PM Title: Chapter 6: Something Wrong

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Nice!!! AHH what's going on with Miri??? Is she hiding something??? Oooh I wanna know soooo bad!

Author's Response: Haha thanks. Miri... she won't do much for a few chapters, sorry. Next one will be out sometime next week-ish. Thanks so much for reviewing!!



Reviewer: GREYWOLF Signed Date: 2007.08.28 - 06:41PM Title: Chapter 6: Something Wrong

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Very nice recovery. I think we can accept that Harry just flew off the handle. Of course it is hard to believe that a daughter of Hermione wouldn't have already written home with the news. Well OK, dramatic effect.

Author's Response: I'm glad you kept reading, thanks so much. I suppose Rose would have written... well, she wanted to get some experience of her classes before sending home a letter. Thank so much for leaving a review!!



Reviewer: ShadowFang Signed Date: 2007.08.28 - 06:37PM Title: Chapter 6: Something Wrong

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Hope Harry finds Ginny .
Or Ron takes Harry's place as hero and talks to Ginny,
Where is Ginny by the way?

Author's Response: I wanted to leave you in suspense about Ginny for a chapter... you'll find out with my next update! Thanks so much for leaving a review.



Reviewer: anonymous celebrity Signed Date: 2007.08.28 - 06:34PM Title: Chapter 6: Something Wrong

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I liked this chapter, and how everything is coming about. Is the next chapter from Ginny's point of view? I'm interested to see that, and where she went off to. The Burrow? Hermionie's? Well probably not Hermionie's seeing as Ron didn't know what was up. But I definately think you made Harry very in-character. Keep up the good work, update soon!

Author's Response: Yeah, I decided to leave a chapter of suspense about Ginny. The next chapter is almost entierly about her and Lily. I'm so glad you think Harry's in character -- not many do. Thanks so much for reviewing!



Reviewer: hjp74 Signed Date: 2007.08.28 - 06:28PM Title: Chapter 6: Something Wrong

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another nice chapter allthough at the moment i am enjoying the hogwarts part more than the complet mess that harrys made at home.

I can just about accept now that harry tends to lose his temper and say thing before engaing his brian but for ginny to just abandone or so it seams her daughter for what seams to be a extended period of time is again streching things having said that the story its self is very well written & you are taking on dsome very complex thems in a very mature manor (Personally i not that fond of agnst unless it ether harry & ginny together & evryonelse has a problem with it) but i will stick with this story just to see how you manage to bring evry one back together again plus ron & hermiones reaction to evrything should at least prove a bit of ligh relife to what is at the moment quite a down beat & agnsty story.

James

Author's Response: Angsty. I never thought anyone would call one of my stories angsty... I'm glad you think Harry's reaction was at least a bit reasonable. As for Ginny, you'll see what happened with her next chapter. She didn't mean to desert her daughter. Ron and Hermione won't find out about Al for a few more chapters, but I'll try to give you a break from the angst. Thanks so much for leaving a review!!




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