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Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2015.08.19 - 05:15PM Title: Chapter 2: The Sorting

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oops! what can i say? ah oh!



Reviewer: James Jameson Signed Date: 2007.08.29 - 12:31PM Title: Chapter 2: The Sorting

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poor al. I hope that he still stays friends with Miri though. They seemed like good enough friends. I hope that Al will come to see that not all slytherins are pure evil... a lot of them are nice, and were sorted into Slytherin because they had ambitous plans later on. I wouldn't be surprised if Percy was in Slytherin. He's very ambitous.

Author's Response: Yeah, I always thought that PErcy should be a Gryffindore, he's never shown particular bravery... (well, not until DH.) Miri... she's going to have her moments in later chapters. Thanks for leaving a review!



Reviewer: roonilwazlib Signed Date: 2007.08.26 - 12:13PM Title: Chapter 2: The Sorting

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EXCELLENT! I loved the fact that you wrote a post-epilogue story! It's Heather, by the way. And the reason I chose to comment on this chapter is because I loved the Sorting Hat Song!!! I really do :) Albus seems like a very likable character. So does "Greer, Allison!" Great writing, I can't wait to read the rest!

Author's Response: Yay! Someone liked my song!! Sorry, Alison is jsut sort of a background character -- she doesn't come into play very much. Thanks so much for leaving a review!!

Author's Response: HAHA GREER!!! I totally didn't know it was you! And you really don't care about Alison, do you? XD. Thanks so much for leaving a review, and FINALLY getting an account!!!



Reviewer: eaglebird Signed Date: 2007.08.15 - 11:10AM Title: Chapter 2: The Sorting

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It's been 19 years since the Last Battle and as JKR said, Harry and Ron and Hermione were instrumental in reforming the Ministry and probably wizarding society as well. We are in a new era and i suspect that Slytherins aren't as bad as they used to be and that interhouse relations should be in better shape.

Still, poor Al is not where he ants to be and he has a HUGE challenge on his hands. I can't wait to see who his other friends become and how the story develops.

Author's Response: Let's just hope that you're right... :D



Reviewer: muggledog Signed Date: 2007.08.06 - 11:27PM Title: Chapter 2: The Sorting

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Interesting start.

I can't wait to see how the adults react. I wouldn't be surprised if Harry and Ginny, though especially the latter, remain true to what Harry told Al at the train station, but I'm really curious as to how Ron'll react.

Author's Response: Well, you're in for a surprise... :D. I've decided to do, erm, interesting reactions from the adults, and although they might not be 100% in character, I think I've done an okay job. But that's not until ch. 5... Thanks so much for reviewing!!



Reviewer: LilyLady Signed Date: 2007.08.06 - 04:04PM Title: Chapter 2: The Sorting

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Aww poor Albus! I can't wait to see more and figure out how this turns out!

Author's Response: I feel so mean... *grins evilly* Next chapter will be up sometime this week. Thanks for reviewing!!!



Reviewer: bouncerok Signed Date: 2007.08.06 - 12:27AM Title: Chapter 2: The Sorting

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oh my please update asap

Author's Response: Next chapter'll be up sometime this week... it's been finished, but I posted the 1st two right in a row, and I'm trying to wait a week between posts... I'm rathter impatient, though. :D Thanks for reviewing!



Reviewer: elusive Signed Date: 2007.08.05 - 07:11PM Title: Chapter 2: The Sorting

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When reading the epiloge of DH, I remember thinking vaguly, "I wonder if Al really does get sorted into Slytherin..."

I then remembered that DH was, in fact, the last book. JKR could tell us what house he was sorted into, but that just wouldn't be the same as reading it in a story. So I had hoped that someone would write a fan fic with that very plotline. And now you have!

I'm looking forward to reading this story and whatching as Al deals with being sorted into the "wrong" house.

~elusive~

Author's Response: Yeah, I thought the same thing. :D The story is more of how others deal, more than how Al deals. Well, not really. Sorta 1/2 and 1/2. *shrugs* Thanks for reviewing!



Reviewer: Sweetie813 Signed Date: 2007.08.05 - 09:38AM Title: Chapter 2: The Sorting

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Why? Why Slytherin? Ugh! lol
Can't wait for the rest

Author's Response: His Sorting into Slytherin pretty much sets the whole plot moving... as guilty as I feel, it had to be done. :D Thanks for reviewing!



Reviewer: Enchantedgurls Signed Date: 2007.08.04 - 11:27PM Title: Chapter 2: The Sorting

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Oh no!! Poor Al... Well I can't wait to see where this is going. Nice work so far. Update soon! :)

Author's Response: Glad you liked it, and thanks for reviewing!



Reviewer: AngelinaJ Anonymous Date: 2007.08.04 - 02:22AM Title: Chapter 2: The Sorting

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nooooooooooooooo! not slytherin!!!! even ravenclaw would have been great and hufflepuff acceptable but SLYTHERIN!!!!!!!!! you'd better have something good up your sleeve, though i do have to admit, it is an interesting story already....keep it up!

Author's Response: Well, I do feel rather mean... :D. His getting in Slytherin pretty much starts the plot of the whole story, so.... yeah/ Thanks so much for reviewing!



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2007.08.03 - 09:19PM Title: Chapter 2: The Sorting

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well maybe this will move all in to more of a unified hogwarts...not sure but its a little hard on the kid to start it off this way...hope his new freinds help him and that haay and ginny come can see how he is...kutgw

Author's Response: Thanks... I do feel sorta mean, putting Al in Slytherin... :D Thanks for reviewing!



Reviewer: faded memories Signed Date: 2007.08.03 - 02:35PM Title: Chapter 2: The Sorting

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awww.... poor albus

Author's Response: Yeah, I feel really mean... :D



Reviewer: anonymous celebrity Signed Date: 2007.08.03 - 11:49AM Title: Chapter 2: The Sorting

AW dont leave it like that!! Ausome chapter, update quickly!!

Author's Response: Haha, thanks. I think I'll wait a few days, though I've finished chs 3-5. I just posted 2 in a row...



Reviewer: anonymous celebrity Signed Date: 2007.08.03 - 11:48AM Title: Chapter 2: The Sorting

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AW dont leave it like that!! Ausome chapter, update quickly!!



Reviewer: GREYWOLF Signed Date: 2007.08.03 - 10:04AM Title: Chapter 2: The Sorting

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Whoa, talk about a stacked deck. World's most famous parents and now he has become a half-breed,as he will be rejected by both sides. Man, I thought JKR was rough on Harry. You are a meanie.

Author's Response: Yeah... I feel really bad... :D Thanks for reviewing!



Reviewer: James And Lily 4eva Signed Date: 2007.08.03 - 05:12AM Title: Chapter 2: The Sorting

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You're joking!
OMG...lol...keep writing, I can't wait to see what's next for poor little Albus

Author's Response: I'm afraid there's plenty of nastiness for Al... I feel so mean... :D Thanks so much for reviewing!!!




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