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SIYE Time:12:59 on 13th August 2022


Reviewer: Miri Signed Date: 2007.06.06 - 12:36PM Title: L O V E

I checked out your bio page here because your name made me wonder about your background. I see I was right and that English is your second language which makes your accomplishment with this story even greater. I wish my Spanish was as good as your English!

I also see that you have a couple of stories that sound intriquing but that have not been updated for a long time. I don't like reading stories that never get finished so I was wondering if you might ever finish either of them?

Again, this is a lovely story ( muy linda! ) which is even more impressive by reason of not being written in your native tongue.

Author's Response: Oh thankss!!! I know I know... I've been threatened many times for not finishing my other stories lol I know I will... someday... I need a beta though... I haven't written/spoken/studied English in 2 years so I'm pretty spoilt (??) Thanks for the review and for the understanding



Reviewer: Miri Signed Date: 2007.06.06 - 12:04PM Title: L O V E

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On the whole, this is a lyrically beautiful piece. There are a couple of slightly confusing passages and I'm not sure if Harry and Ginny, as mature as they are for their ages, would use this language. But still it is a beautiful and moving piece, especially the last paragraph. This is what all Harry/Ginny fans want for them and for us the readers.

Lovely job.



Reviewer: carolquin Signed Date: 2007.06.02 - 08:18AM Title: L O V E

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i've got goosebumps all over!!!

the story was beautiful. it's the sort of scene i am hoping for with book 7 and if a scene like that doesn't exist then i'll just take this story and slip it between the pages.



Reviewer: knightsbridge Signed Date: 2007.06.01 - 06:57PM Title: L O V E

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Beautiful...I have nothing else I can possibly say.

Darian




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