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Reviewer: I Love Ginerva Signed Date: 2018.01.21 - 06:07AM Title: Chapter 1 - Ginny Weasley's Terrible, Horrible, Very Bad Year

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Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2009.07.19 - 05:45AM Title: Chapter 1 - Ginny Weasley's Terrible, Horrible, Very Bad Year

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Reviewer: Leonheart666 Signed Date: 2009.03.06 - 11:50AM Title: Chapter 1 - Ginny Weasley's Terrible, Horrible, Very Bad Year

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Firstly, your writing style is good, and it was a good story, I enjoyed the fluffiness of it.

But I have to say, some of the canon things you get wrong... I'm surprised it was allowed on the site seeing as it is supposed to be automatic dismissal for a canon mistake.

Harry and Ginny are not in the same year, and would never share any classes together.

Triwizard Tournament is in Harry's fourth year, Ginny's third. You begin the story with Ginny apparently in fourth year, but mention Cedric still alive and the Tournament still going on cus you do the Yule Ball.

Leaky Cauldron is in London, specifically it is home to Diagon Alley. There are two pubs in Hogsmeade, the Hogs Head and The Three Broomsticks. I also seriously doubt the Three Broomsticks even know what Mountain Dew is, seeing as it is an American Muggle drink, and the Broomsticks is a Wizarding British pub.

No such thing as a Hogwarts Lunch Queue, it appears on the tables in front of them and people help themselves.

How does Snape office have a window? It's in the dungeons.

You say Sectumsempra caused Malfoy to bleed profusely... I consider that quite an understatement for a curse that rips a persons chest wide open with what is probably the equivalent power of a sword-slash.

Your story is there, and your writing style is good, but go back and read the books again so you know what is what in the Harry Potter world. As much as my comment may seem harsh, it really lets the story down, and you need to make sure it's top quality



Reviewer: kash2110 Signed Date: 2009.01.24 - 08:15PM Title: Chapter 1 - Ginny Weasley's Terrible, Horrible, Very Bad Year

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A really nice sweet story, told with the right mix of emotions!

You could almost imagine it happened that way!



Reviewer: griffindorechicky101 Signed Date: 2007.12.02 - 11:03PM Title: Chapter 1 - Ginny Weasley's Terrible, Horrible, Very Bad Year

i loveit!



Reviewer: GinnyPotter7 Signed Date: 2007.09.28 - 10:08PM Title: Chapter 1 - Ginny Weasley's Terrible, Horrible, Very Bad Year

I loved that! Fantastic job! I really liked the whole part about Harry's parents honeymoon thing. That was nice to include.



Reviewer: GinnyPotter7 Signed Date: 2007.09.28 - 10:07PM Title: Chapter 1 - Ginny Weasley's Terrible, Horrible, Very Bad Year

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I loved that! Fantastic job! I really liked the whole part about Harry's parents honeymoon thing. That was nice to include.



Reviewer: Crystilia Anonymous Date: 2007.09.20 - 12:22PM Title: Chapter 1 - Ginny Weasley's Terrible, Horrible, Very Bad Year

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great.

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Reviewer: ShadowFang Signed Date: 2007.08.25 - 11:28PM Title: Chapter 1 - Ginny Weasley's Terrible, Horrible, Very Bad Year

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Write a sequal. this was good.
or write a story thats a sequal to this thats longer.
The story was good.



Reviewer: merlinsaprentice Anonymous Date: 2007.07.11 - 10:08PM Title: Chapter 1 - Ginny Weasley's Terrible, Horrible, Very Bad Year

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There are so many storyline errors in this that I gave up half way, just after Hermione left the 'lunch line' to sit with her 'friends' that was the error that went one too far, Just incase you did not know Harry and Ron are her friends, after the totally mixed time lines and Ginny being in a class with Harry then in a class with Hermione Well more can I say...

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Reviewer: moondog Anonymous Date: 2007.05.10 - 11:59PM Title: Chapter 1 - Ginny Weasley's Terrible, Horrible, Very Bad Year

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FIrst to reviewer Kellygoert, the story wasn't refering to Harry's mom Lily having brown eyes. It said that James' mom had red hair and brown eyes...hence why we can conclude that Potter men have a thing for redheads.

Other than that though there are a few things off with this story. It starts of taking place during Harry's fourth year, not Ginny's. His fourth year is the year ot the Triwizard tournament and his infatuation with Cho. The next year his fifth and Ginny's fourth is when he actually sort of dates Cho. Also, it isn't until Harry's sixth year and Ginny's fifth that Harry actually starts to have feelings for her. So yeah, the timeline was sort of condensed for some reason in this story.

Also, there is no lunch line at Hogwarts. The food appears on the tables at mealtimes and they serve themselves. That's how it's always been done in the books unless otherwise stated. Also, Ginny was born in August so that messes up the idea of having to wait six months until her graduation to get married.

Other than these holes in the plot I enjoyed the general ideas and tone of this story. I was only sad that you didn't mention the part where Harry worries that he's being possessed by Voldemort and GInny sets him straight. I would've liked to have seen you write that scene. Good luck on your future writing!

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Reviewer: Kellygoert Signed Date: 2007.05.06 - 09:43PM Title: Chapter 1 - Ginny Weasley's Terrible, Horrible, Very Bad Year

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Okay, i thought it was really good. I enjoyed it very much. I'd just like to say that Harry's mum had green eyes, not brown... You made a comment about GInny having brown eyes just like his mum, but that's not true. Harry's mum had green eyes, that's where he got his eyes from. Just wanted to point that out.... otherwise, awesome!



Reviewer: griffindorechicky101 Signed Date: 2007.05.06 - 05:43PM Title: Chapter 1 - Ginny Weasley's Terrible, Horrible, Very Bad Year

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i lovedit but if you didnt notice the leaky coldren is in london and the three broom sticks is in hogsmead but either way i loved it can you make a sequel and read my story the memories to remember by griffinodrechicky101



Reviewer: stargril404 Signed Date: 2007.05.06 - 12:00PM Title: Chapter 1 - Ginny Weasley's Terrible, Horrible, Very Bad Year

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Just wanted to let you know that Cedric isn't alive in Harry's fifth year. Otherwise, great story.




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