Reviews For Letter to Ginny
Reviewer: eaglebird Signed Date: 2007.04.14 - 06:19PM Title: Chapter 4 - Dissolution I actually enjoyed this chapter and the sequence of events which seemed to follow a nomal expected sequence. On top of my earlier comments in previous chapters though, the overall logic of this story is out of whack. Surely the Prophet would have picked p this story by now and made it public? Reviewer: carolquin Signed Date: 2007.04.14 - 04:58PM Title: Chapter 4 - Dissolution i tried to read your story, i really did. after the first chapter i thought maybe you'd take what reviewers had to say and use it to help your story. as i read on i can see that you haven't taken into consideration what they've said. like the reviewers before me, i agree that its a good plot but too many holes in the story. the characterization of harry/ginny and every one else is just not believable. Reviewer: Sweetie813 Signed Date: 2007.04.14 - 12:51PM Title: Chapter 4 - Dissolution I am enjoying the plot of the story, but not how it is written. Reviewer: Kezzabear Signed Date: 2007.04.14 - 06:59AM Title: Chapter 4 - Dissolution I agtree with teh previous reviewers who ahve said there are many cracks here - another one is that 19 year olds simply don't have naps anymore. | |||||||
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