Reviews For Letter to Ginny
Reviewer: BobVosh Signed Date: 2013.09.05 - 12:26AM Title: Chapter 3 - Affair I stopped reading on this chapter. There are a multitude of reasons why I didn't like this story. Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2012.10.09 - 01:51PM Title: Chapter 3 - Affair Again, more OOC. It seems impossible that the characters from the book would carry on like these do. The idea of canon Harry having an affair with a married woman, even if it was Ginny, just doesn't seem possible. The quick reconciliation after the seeming anger Ginny had for Harry seems quite unlikely, too. Reviewer: eaglebird Signed Date: 2007.04.18 - 06:05PM Title: Chapter 3 - Affair One more comment on standards. Reviewer: eaglebird Signed Date: 2007.04.18 - 05:57PM Title: Chapter 3 - Affair I apologize for the harshness in my first review of this chapter but not for the message. I have now finished reading this story and I still believe it could be significantly improved. To say this story deserves high merit, though, would be misleading because there are just too many holes with the characters and the plotline. Reviewer: gryffindor lioness Signed Date: 2007.04.18 - 01:54PM Title: Chapter 3 - Affair hey i must agree with Darian 100%. some people can be down right harsh and not accept the courage it can take someone to put forward a piece of work and can't deal with the simple "ok i don't like your story 100%- you could do this, this and this and it might be better but keep going"dude really whats wrong with that review?! Reviewer: knightsbridge Signed Date: 2007.04.18 - 04:05AM Title: Chapter 3 - Affair Wow, that was a bit harsh. If a readrer doesn't like a story, there's always the delete button. Evidently, SIYE disagree, because the story IS here. I admit there are times it's a bit chopy, but there's a lot to suss out, and more chapters to do it in. Reviewer: eaglebird Signed Date: 2007.04.14 - 06:13PM Title: Chapter 3 - Affair This chapter is just too incredible to believe. It utterly lacks credibility. What astounds me most is that your writing style flows so smoothly and it is a pleasure to read. I think that is why I have got this far. I have read too many fanfics at FF.net and HPFF written by 15 year olds and that is what this plot sounds like, but it is obviously written by an older writer. It is the content, facts, plot and logic that needs major work. For example, why waste our time with Theodorus at all. He is just an annoyance, to Ginny, and to us the reader. He has been there for 10 years, but fulfills no useful purpose in the plot. He is a good father but a mediocre lover, he provides food and shelter but no distinctive skills or personality and he just gives up when he discover his wife in bed with another man and immediately grants a dissolution. I am also disappointed that Ginny, a happily married mother with a 10 year old all of a sudden risks her reputation in wizard society by haing an affair. So what if it is Harry Potter. There were other solutions she and Harry could have done to protect her reputation and schieve the same objective. You have sullied Ginny's character by having her and Harry carry out this affair. On a reaaly trivial note why did you spend so many words on owls. Harry loses Hedwig and gets a new owl. Lily gets a new owl. Was there any purpose for this? I would like to know who approved this story to be placed on SIYE? in my opinion it rates as a stort that perhaps should have been sent back for major re-write before being put up on this site. And that would go towards setting a standard. I'm sorry, but I believe this story is way below standard and the only reason I am writing all these comments is that I see the potential for you to be a top notch writer. | |||||||
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