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Reviewer: eaminoh Signed Date: 2007.04.15 - 08:43PM Title: Chapter 1 - Poignant Goodbye
Ginny is too old to be calling her mum .. mummy not going to work
Reviewer: ginnyxharryxlove Anonymous Date: 2007.04.15 - 04:03PM Title: Chapter 1 - Poignant Goodbye
i think that this chapter was a little out of character for both harry and ginny.
if ginny is 16 years old, isn't she a little too old to be calling her mom mummy?
also, for being 17 harry seemed a little too prim and proper when he was writing his letter.
don't hurt me!
i still love the story.
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Reviewer: ginnyxharryxlove Anonymous Date: 2007.04.15 - 04:01PM Title: Chapter 1 - Poignant Goodbye
i think this chapter was a little out of character for harry and ginny.
i mean, ginny is 17 years old, so i dont think she'd call her mom mummy.
also the way that harry wrote the letter seemed a little to prim and proper.
don't hurt me!
i still love the story.
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Reviewer: ginnyp_harryp Signed Date: 2007.04.14 - 10:41PM Title: Chapter 1 - Poignant Goodbye
I don't know what to think really...I mean I LIKED it but it didn't make an impression, favorite anyway...
Reviewer: ginnyp_harryp Signed Date: 2007.04.14 - 10:41PM Title: Chapter 1 - Poignant Goodbye
I don't know what to think really...I mean I LIKED it but it didn't make an impression, favorite anyway...
Reviewer: Evanette Lily Signed Date: 2007.04.14 - 12:50PM Title: Chapter 1 - Poignant Goodbye
uh, just one thing... how could they tell if Ginny was pregnant the morning after she and Harry had made love??
Reviewer: Ginny Guerra Signed Date: 2007.04.13 - 01:33AM Title: Chapter 1 - Poignant Goodbye
So witches' bodys work 48 hours faster than any other woman's? That's good to know.
Anyhow I'm liking the story, though I don't thin either of them would be that irresponsible.
Reviewer: carolquin Signed Date: 2007.04.12 - 05:55PM Title: Chapter 1 - Poignant Goodbye
i like your story, i really do but wizard woman are not different from muggle woman. it takes more than 10 hours to get pregnant.
also, ginny is 16 years old and by calling molly 'mummy' makes her sound like a little girl. 'mum' makes her sound more her age.
don't get mad at me!!! i really like it so far and i will be reading your story.
Reviewer: eaglebird Signed Date: 2007.04.12 - 04:40PM Title: Chapter 1 - Poignant Goodbye
I really liked your tender approach to Harry's setting off on the horcrux hunt and his and Ginny's love-making last night together. Molly is a true ally to Ginny, in this, the beginning of a long and difficult journey.
