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Reviewer: White Tiger Signed Date: 2009.02.15 - 09:51PM Title: Chapter 1: Revelations
The prophecy is different from the Prologue. The chapters are right after each other. There is no reason that the prophecy should be different.
I'm sorry if I sound critical, but it's the little things that are important.
White Tiger
Reviewer: Rocky235 Signed Date: 2007.08.15 - 10:37AM Title: Chapter 1: Revelations
I saw your note on FatesDebt Yahoo. Best of all you left an address to your story.
The letter separation in each paragraph is unusual. I've never seen anything like it before. I know it's not your fault either.
I'm enjoying your story and all the characters. I like the scene in the ROR when Hermione took charge.
Reviewer: griffindorechicky101 Signed Date: 2007.07.26 - 05:30PM Title: Chapter 1: Revelations
aww man it ended i realy like this story! when is the next chapter i cant wait!
Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2007.05.29 - 06:13AM Title: Chapter 1: Revelations
you did not just do that! sry it took me so long to read this chapter...but it seemed that everytime i got to read some of it i always was intereupted. well it was really good. this whole thing is making me nervous...and what exactly is wormtails task...and i hope they are able to fix this! oh im just very excited! update soon!
Reviewer: hjp74 Signed Date: 2007.05.28 - 06:56AM Title: Chapter 1: Revelations
yove got an intresting idea going here & i lookforward to where you will be taking it although iam not sure about the title as so far he hasant relly made any majour new mistakes. the way you portray harrys insecratys is well done & iam looking frorward to his & ginny first majour convasation.
Reviewer: witowsmp Signed Date: 2007.05.26 - 11:25PM Title: Chapter 1: Revelations
This seems like an interesting story. Do continue it.
Reviewer: knightsbridge Signed Date: 2007.05.25 - 07:48PM Title: Chapter 1: Revelations
Jeez...love cliffhangers do you?
Dean is his usual putz of a self...and what IS Dumbldores biggest mistake? He's made so many with Harry it's hard to suss this one out!
Looking forward to more. I try never to say this, but please update soon.
If you live in the States, have a nice 3 day weekend.
Darian
Reviewer: harrystwin1 Signed Date: 2007.05.25 - 02:24PM Title: Chapter 1: Revelations
I like this, your portrayal of Harry and his conflicted feelings for Ginny is spot on as is Hermione's character. Great cliff hanger. I can't wait to see how you will do the timetravel portion.
Reviewer: drose95 Signed Date: 2007.05.25 - 08:32AM Title: Chapter 1: Revelations
i can't wait to see the next chapter...hopefully they will turn back time...
Reviewer: Tron Signed Date: 2007.05.24 - 10:41PM Title: Chapter 1: Revelations
Interesting story! I hope you have more for us soon.
It should be interesting to see how you plan to get a message to Harry and/or Ginny about their future. If you haven't read Harry Potter and Fate's Debt by Intromit - give it a try. It is available at SIYE. In that story, Harry sends himself a message into the past. It is one of the best fan fictions I've read.
Thank you for sharing with us and I look forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: redwoodhouse Signed Date: 2007.05.24 - 10:34PM Title: Chapter 1: Revelations
Pretty good start. Now how to do the time travel ?????? I like Harry/Ginny stories especially when they get together sooner.
Reviewer: MandaEvelyn Signed Date: 2007.05.24 - 09:31PM Title: Chapter 1: Revelations
I really enjoyed this chapter. The general plot to this story is so interesting. Bravo. Please update soon.
