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Reviewer: Count Baker Signed Date: 2007.11.14 - 10:45PM Title: Flat of Your Back

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Talk about your ups and downs. I like that you put together another prophecy. Using Samuel as bait was not a good choice by Narcissa and Ophelia's death mow the story has some guts to it.



Reviewer: iloveemmawatson Signed Date: 2007.02.25 - 12:43AM Title: Flat of Your Back

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great chapter who's mom is Ophelia again, im to lazy to look for it

Author's Response: lol. I never really specify, but Ophelia's mother is the sister to Hermione's mother.



Reviewer: saz j Signed Date: 2007.02.20 - 02:34PM Title: Flat of Your Back

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LOVED the vail bit, it was needed and sweet
LOVED AND NEARLY WET MY SEELF LAUGHING, good old albus.
feel proud kate, bloody brill. x

Author's Response: Thanks dearest! What is this I hear about a new sazzy fic??? So excited hurry up and post, love!



Reviewer: Ginny Guerra Signed Date: 2007.02.20 - 12:22AM Title: Flat of Your Back

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Sometimes spelling and grammar complicate my life, but overall, I just love your story. Please update soon. I simply love how you mix and match all the people. And the children are just adorable.

Author's Response: I rushed this chapter a bit because real life made it take longer than it normally does so I'm sorry if I missed something. I'm hoping to get a huge chunk of chapter nine done today! Its already nine pages!



Reviewer: Ginzig1 Signed Date: 2007.02.19 - 07:42PM Title: Flat of Your Back

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Wow, lots of action there! Why do your chapters always seems to come out on my work days?! Don't have much time... Really great. Poor Ophelia. Glad that Hermione is Maggie's guardian. Hopefully they will rescue Samuel quickly. looking forward to more. :)

Author's Response: Ok when do you work??? LOL. I'll try and shoot to have the next one out on a saturday. lol. Hon, feel free to drop me an email if you ever want to chat all thing HP. You have been so great throughout Legend and now this fic, maybe I'll sneak you a few hints ; )



Reviewer: abbs8662 Signed Date: 2007.02.19 - 04:48PM Title: Flat of Your Back

Long one! Yay. It was jam full of goodies too! Update soon please!

Author's Response: =)



Reviewer: abbs8662 Signed Date: 2007.02.19 - 04:48PM Title: Flat of Your Back

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Long one! Yay. It was jam full of goodies too! Update soon please!

Author's Response: I shall try!



Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2007.02.19 - 12:20PM Title: Flat of Your Back

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Good stuff, generally. Valentine's Day, eh? :-}

A couple of oddities you might want to fix: Were those really "ears" Dumbledore's portrait had in his ears,or would that have been "fingers?" And Ginny's "correction" of Thadeus wasn't correct -- actually, Thadeus merely had the order wrong, but his use of "me" in the context was correct, while Ginny's "I" was not.

Sorry about Ophelia, though I suppose it wasn't a surprise. Wonder if Malachi will get his act together with respect to Hannah? And Narcissa shows up at the Shrieking Shack, eh? That doens't bode particularly well.....

Author's Response: I'm curious...why wasn't it a surpise...and Malachi is going to be nicely hard headed for a while. Narcissa+anything=bad news. Keep reviewing and sorry my grammar sucks, I was trying to hurry up and get this chapter up!



Reviewer: Breanie Signed Date: 2007.02.19 - 12:06PM Title: Flat of Your Back

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ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhh! shes dead snif snif - i knew it was coming but shes dead! and yay they found samuel!
and the voices! so harry can talk to his parents and to sirius??? thats awesome!
and lmfao a white rabbit - dumbledore - hahaa
excellent chapter! but i dont remember where Narcissa fits in with thaddeus and samuel - i need u to explain that - well off to study now but ill ttyl tonight when i get home from work
bye

Author's Response: Well now I suppose I could explain the Narcissa thing a little better, but when you react like this its so much more fun...



Reviewer: aryell Signed Date: 2007.02.19 - 12:01PM Title: Flat of Your Back

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Wow! What a twist of turn of events. I was quite surprised at how this chapter ended. And that prophecy...what could it mean?

Oh and I know I bug you about this every review, but... could I please see Draco? Please?

Author's Response: Your wish is my command dearest reviewer...




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