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Reviewer: Larry Signed Date: 2007.01.28 - 01:30AM Title: The One Ring
Poor Harry, been there, done that. A nice start and a good read.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.
Reviewer: GINNY__POTTER258 Signed Date: 2007.01.19 - 04:55AM Title: The One Ring
there was only one chapter this time so i wan't able to miss any! : ) that's both good and bad
good- no missed chapters bad-don't get to read the rest of the story...even if i have to go back and re-read it all over again...please still continue this story though! i'll try my hardest not to skip another chapter i promise!
Author's Response: I will finish the story--I promise. I won't leave so many people hanging on a story begun and not completed. My ethics/morals don't sit well with that because I know how it feels when that happens. Anyway, I'm glad you liked it--thanks for the review.
Reviewer: GINNY__POTTER258 Signed Date: 2007.01.19 - 04:10AM Title: The One Ring
great chapter it's so unrealistic to have harry find the perfect ring so quickly so that's good! it's a shame that you didn't finish though! : )
Author's Response: I know. I will finish it though. Just obviously not for the challenge.
Reviewer: kmagarden Signed Date: 2007.01.12 - 08:23PM Title: The One Ring
reading/reviewing for challenge. Ohhhh, I didn' t notice this wasn't complete before I started reading. You are off to a really good start! I enjoyed this chapter - even if you didn't get it completed for the challenge, I hope you take the time to finish, I'd love to see how it turns out!
Author's Response: Yes, I know, I'm a bad person and didn't make the deadline. I'm sorry. But, I will take the time out to finish it. I'm glad you liked what I have of it so far!
Reviewer: Jim McGuffin Signed Date: 2007.01.11 - 10:30PM Title: The One Ring
Judged for competition.
Well, this fic is off to a good start. It's funny how Harry takes Ron/Hermione along with him to go engagement ring shopping -- even if Ginny's own brother knows nothing about her! LOL! And in the end, they just go off snogging somewhere. He's right -- he should've left them back at home. LOL!
But I am disappointed that you were not able to finish the fic by the deadline. You did warn us in an earlier review that you were busy with your finals, but I was hoping that you'd be able to finish the fic during the Christmas holidays.
I'm rating this fic 5/10 -- a half-finished fic only merits half the points. But good news! On January 20th, after the winners are declared, the challenge category will be open again, and you'll be able to update this fic. I've read some of your other fics, so I know this one will be good as well. Fred and George haven't appeared yet, and with a title such as "Scrooge," I know this will turn about to be a delightful parody of Charles Dickens's class. I'll definitely be looking out for an update on this soon!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed the beginning--and I was very sad that I couldn't make the deadline. Breaks are just as busy for me as the school year--minus summer break (well, sometimes. Most of the time I take summer classes to get ahead in school or so I can take more performing arts courses). I'll certainly finish this story. I'd liked the idea, and it's a short write, so I'll finish it up. I hope you review again! I always look forward to hearing what you have to say. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Katastrophe Signed Date: 2007.01.09 - 02:21AM Title: The One Ring
Judged for Challenge.
Was there supposed to be more to this story?
Wishing you best of luck in the competition.
Author's Response: Um, yes, there was supposed to be more to this story, hence the "Complete: No" in the full story summary. This story just didn't make my top list of priorities unfortunately and didn't make it to the deadline.
Reviewer: Keira Azul Signed Date: 2006.12.31 - 11:05AM Title: The One Ring
Judged for Challenge
Good start -- I hope you get the rest in before the deadline (I always wait until the last minute - procrastinators unite! :) ). Good Luck.
-K
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the start--I'm quite sorry I didn't make the deadline.
Reviewer: carolquin Signed Date: 2006.12.26 - 07:41PM Title: The One Ring
this chapter is being reviewed for judging purposes...
nice start but you have a contradiction in your story:
“What use are you if you don’t know things like that? Why did we even bring you along?” She turned to Harry. “Why did we bring him along?” Harry shrugged.
“Because he’s Ginny’s sister and knows her really well,” he said. Hermione huffed.
according to this sentence, ron is a girl
Author's Response: I give a heavy sigh as I read the third review that mentions my mistake. It was an accident. I was tired. I wrote this chapter during finals week. I will fix it--thank you for pointing out the error so I can edit the story and fix it. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Spenser Hemmingway Signed Date: 2006.12.26 - 11:13AM Title: The One Ring
A Muggle jewlry store is a definite twist, and it opened up some possibilities as well. The explanation that Harry wanted to give the gentleman was a good analysis of the cultural differences that they are facing, and an accurate one as well. That is not to say that there is anything wrong with a bit of time for their engagement. One point...I think that you wanted to say that Ron is Ginny's brother, not his sister (paragraph fourteen). This was a nice start. Thanks and good luck. Eric B.
Author's Response: Oi. Everyon's been pointing that out. I haven't even had time to check this site until today, but obviously it is a glaring (and annoying) error. I was tired when I wrote this. Considering I wrote this chapter during finals week I think I can be excused as long as I fix it. I best get on that. I'm glad you like it so far--thanks for the review.
Reviewer: hjp74 Signed Date: 2006.12.26 - 04:02AM Title: The One Ring
Great start defenatly lokking forward to the twins.
Only a minot point when did ron become ginnys sister.
Author's Response: Oh whoops...I was probably really tired when I wrote the chapter. Thanks for pointing that out--I'll make sure to track down that error and correct it. I'm glad you like it so far. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Breanie Signed Date: 2006.12.25 - 10:02PM Title: The One Ring
aww so cute! update soon!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. I'll be sure to update as soon as I can.
