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Reviewer: Count Baker Signed Date: 2007.11.12 - 05:05PM Title: December 21

I am a romantic at heart. This story pulled on my heart strings. I loved it. I wish I could be that romantic. I am not very creative with romantic stuff, but it seems you have it together. Thanks!

Author's Response: I wasn't romantic to begin with, but if you take the time to really try and think the whole scene out, be it in fiction or reality, everything will turn out absolutely perfect. Thank you for reading and leaving such a great review.



Reviewer: Count Baker Signed Date: 2007.11.12 - 05:02PM Title: December 21

I am a romantic at heart. This story pulled on my heart strings. I loved it. I wish I could be that romantic. I am not very creative with romantic stuff, but it seems you have it together. Thanks!

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Reviewer: Count Baker Signed Date: 2007.11.12 - 05:01PM Title: December 21

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I am a romantic at heart. This story pulled on my heart strings. I loved it. I wish I could be that romantic. I am not very creative with romantic stuff, but it seems you have it together. Thanks!

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Reviewer: iloveemmawatson Signed Date: 2007.02.14 - 10:39PM Title: December 21

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Reviewer: Chreechree Signed Date: 2007.01.18 - 09:37PM Title: December 21

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Oh, yes, very fluffy indeed. Nice start, although the proposal was supposed to be over Christmas of Harry’s seventh year, and as their first date post war was over the last Hogsmeade visit of his seventh year, this clearly must be taking place later. I know you’re having a Christmas proposal and covered a seventh year proposal, but next time you enter a challenge, pay close attention to the required elements. Still, I like this so far. The note was an excellent way to build anticipation. Very sweet and fluffy.


Author's Response: To be fair, I had this fic finished before that I realized that...It was my fault, but I did go back and have him propose in a flashback in his seventh year. I may have bent the rules but they didn't break =)



Reviewer: GINNY__POTTER258 Signed Date: 2007.01.13 - 10:32PM Title: December 21

i wonder what he's going to do that was a pretty mean trick they played on the twin but they deserve it i mean their costumes matching trenchs and shades while trying to be insconspicious? please blend in not match and look like sherlock holmes jeez! : )

Author's Response: lol



Reviewer: GINNY__POTTER258 Signed Date: 2007.01.13 - 08:48PM Title: December 21

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i wonder what he's going to do that was a pretty mean trick they played on the twin but they deserve it i mean their costumes matching trenchs and shades while trying to be insconspicious? please blend in not match and look like sherlock holmes jeez! : )

Author's Response: lol.



Reviewer: Alexi Drake Signed Date: 2007.01.01 - 01:20PM Title: December 21

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Talk about pure happy fluff.

Author's Response: lol thanks!



Reviewer: ginny4everandalways Signed Date: 2006.12.18 - 11:44AM Title: December 21

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First off, I have to say, if your story got anymore romantic I'd have to cry! It was an absolute pleasure to judge and read your story! I can't describe how much i enjoyed it! Keep Writing!

Author's Response: Im glad you liked it! I hope to hear what you think of the rest of it!



Reviewer: harryluvsginny Signed Date: 2006.12.15 - 05:08PM Title: December 21

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Nice start-off chapter. Very good writing-it keeps you wanting to know more. I think you'll do very well in the competition (I'm a judge)! Good luck!

Author's Response: thank you very much I can't wait to see what you think of the rest!



Reviewer: Spenser Hemmingway Signed Date: 2006.12.12 - 10:35AM Title: December 21

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The twins deserved that, and so did Ron and Hermione. I can picture Harry doing that to Ginny there, and the response was perfect for a couple reasons. First, it got Fred and George, and second it set the stage for something else...in five days. Two questions: Does Ginny have her Apparating License and wouldn't those wards also stop outbound Floo use? Still, an entertaining chapter. Thanks. Eric B.

Author's Response: In the first chapter, Harry does the 7th year proposal...more joking really. Currently they are all post Hogwarts so yes, Ginny can Apparate. As for the wards, who knows...its magic ;)



Reviewer: carolquin Signed Date: 2006.12.11 - 10:07PM Title: December 21

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This story is being reviewed for judging purposes...

Very nice beginning!

Author's Response: Thank you very much!



Reviewer: Dumbledore Anonymous Date: 2006.12.11 - 08:52AM Title: December 21

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I didn't much like the 'My Ginny' thing. It was a bit annoying. I loved the rest of it. The date was hilarious.

Author's Response: I agree the "my Ginny" may be a little too sweet, but I did it for the fans of pure sap. LOL. Please keep reviewing.



Reviewer: jacsmompat Signed Date: 2006.12.10 - 08:46PM Title: December 21

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i love this story. i am waiting to see what happens. I can just see the twins in tsheir trench coats and pretending to read the paper. Good luck in the challenge.

Author's Response: Thanks for your review, please keep it up!



Reviewer: Breanie Signed Date: 2006.12.10 - 01:31PM Title: December 21

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ooh what does harry have planned? is he going to be really romantic??

Author's Response: only time will tell my darling



Reviewer: Yunchao Signed Date: 2006.12.09 - 10:24PM Title: December 21

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Wow, very fluffy. That was a good chapter, keep it up! Please check my accout for my email and email me when you chose to update and/or edit this story as I am one of the judges and this way I'll keep on top of things.

Yunchao

Author's Response: It is fluffy, much more than I would usually do, but its Christmas and Harry is proposing. Its really hard not to be fluffy. Besides, I write this for Jaq who loved fluff and I hope that she loves it wherever she is.



Reviewer: Ginzig1 Signed Date: 2006.12.09 - 08:55PM Title: December 21

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It was funny imaging Fred and George following Harry and Ginny, then jumping in the mud to get Harry. Very romantic; a love note and roses. ahhh Ginny's such a lucky girl. Good start to the challenge, looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you very much, Im hoping to post the next chapter very soon. Please continue to review.




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