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Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2020.04.05 - 12:26PM Title: Prologue: Tathata

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If I didn’t know better i would have thought i was in my ancient history class trying to figure everything out...kutgw



Reviewer: nayin1704 Signed Date: 2017.01.07 - 10:28PM Title: Prologue: Tathata

I've read this story so may times but wasn't able to leave any reviews. I just want to say that you're really a good writer



Reviewer: TomBombadil Signed Date: 2013.07.03 - 10:12AM Title: Prologue: Tathata

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This is a nicely written abstraction, sort of Genesis combined with a master plan created by an obsessive compulsive genius. Since your story is complete and a sequel is underway, I will be jumping ahead. If Ginny exists merely as a distraction, I will opt out. No matter how good the plot or how well written the prose, I am a died in the wool H/G shipper! LOL!



Reviewer: sunnyseaforever Signed Date: 2012.05.17 - 10:48AM Title: Prologue: Tathata

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On the first read, it was really very confusing. I was like 'Uhm...What?'. So I had to read it again. And I think it made a bit more sense to me.



Reviewer: chipmyster1992 Signed Date: 2011.12.15 - 08:16PM Title: Prologue: Tathata

and final review on this chapter (i promise!). i find your take on ginny being a low-power entity vastly different from any other fic and cannon aswell, good and bad, coz i like different fanfic, but i also love the whole semi-powerful i-won't-take-sh#t-from-nobody-without-po unding-your-face-in



Reviewer: chipmyster1992 Signed Date: 2011.12.15 - 08:06PM Title: Prologue: Tathata

although im annoyed (and impressed) with how quickly I understood it after reading the whole chapter. forgetting the part about 'aspects' and 'attributes' for the moment, when the marbles analogy was brought up i understood it as i was reading about it. but i had to read and re-read the bit about 'aspects' and 'attributes' several times to fully understand. but now that i understand it it makes for a great chapter. confusing as HELL at the start but still great



Reviewer: chipmyster1992 Signed Date: 2011.12.15 - 07:55PM Title: Prologue: Tathata

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well, I dont know how you did it. But you somehow made a subject that in reality is very simple, STUPIDLY complcated and IMMENSELY confusing especially when using marbles as a substitute for the persons involved. but all in all a decent... by-chapter?? if i understood correctly, prologue cant be used as the "marbles" and time are already in motion when the thinker imagins them as the substitute. but its all "wibbly-wobbly timey-wimey....stuff" to quote "The Doctor" and the whole confusing mess of temporal mechanics



Reviewer: nat3738 Signed Date: 2010.05.23 - 10:22AM Title: Prologue: Tathata

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I spent two months reading and trying to understand this prologue (I'm stubborn that I didn't skip it). I think I can say I do understand this, though I'm not sure. Very cleaver writing, indeed.

Author's Response: If you're close, that's probably good enough. And you're ahead of most people either way. Thanks very much.



Reviewer: Dopeydo Signed Date: 2010.05.21 - 02:50PM Title: Prologue: Tathata

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Wow. I think my head just got twisted so badly it went back to the same place again. I think I get this, but I just know if I try to explain it, I'll have an immense headache and nothing in the review.

Author's Response: That's pretty much what I was after. Thanks!



Reviewer: BrutallyHonest Signed Date: 2010.01.11 - 09:49PM Title: Prologue: Tathata

where do you come up with this sh*t? crazy! aspects? one? i wouldnt be able to keep it all straight if i were writing it! lol great, though, once you get past the initial "what the f*ck is going on!?"-ness lol

Author's Response: It's been percolating in my head for years. I'm not sure what that implies about the state of my brain, though. Thanks!



Reviewer: RealmofShadows Signed Date: 2009.11.07 - 11:28AM Title: Prologue: Tathata

Interesting but highly confusing.. I'm sure it'll make sense soon

Author's Response: Hopefully it makes more sense now that you've read the story. It's meant to be cryptic at first. Thanks!



Reviewer: juice14 Signed Date: 2009.08.13 - 11:42PM Title: Prologue: Tathata

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Huh.... you weren't kidding about different lol.... pretty deep :)

Author's Response: I did warn you. =)



Reviewer: jmpnjimbob Signed Date: 2009.03.10 - 04:27PM Title: Prologue: Tathata

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I have only been reading fan fiction since last Fall. I’ve usually tended to only ready stories true to canon and have only recently started reading alternate universe fictions. I just came across your story last week and have spent many a night up late reading it. I’ve enjoyed how you’ve taken some of the situations from the original story line and adapted them to yours. I’m happy to see that you have a Meaning of One, part Two and various other Meaning of One universe stories for me to continue to read. Hopefully you’ll keep adding more stories to your universe. Please keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words. I definitely do intend to continue the series, and in fact I'm in the earliest planning stages for Part Three. I hope you enjoy the ride.



Reviewer: Monty Signed Date: 2008.11.28 - 07:50PM Title: Prologue: Tathata

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Hi Sovran :)

Its late and I felt like an H/G story, so had a look at the most read on here and yours was one I've not started reading before; I'm glad I've had a look! I thoroughly enjoyed your prologue; I though it was thought provoking and original and definitely sets up the rest of the story in a way I haven't seen done before. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of it when I've got the time, hopefully I'll be awake long enough to read the next couple of chapters now =]

Many thanks for a great start, here's hoping I enjoy the rest of it just as much! I'll try and review agan before heading off to sleep :)

Monty

Author's Response: I always love hearing from people who like the prologue. This short chapter is really what got me started on the entire series... this is what I couldn't get out of my head and finally had to write down.
I hope you enjoy the rest. Thanks for reading!



Reviewer: jediprankster Signed Date: 2008.07.22 - 12:22AM Title: Prologue: Tathata

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Wow! That was...abstract. Very good though.

Author's Response: Thanks!



Reviewer: wave Signed Date: 2008.04.18 - 08:31AM Title: Prologue: Tathata

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Awsome Prologue.. best i have ever read... but i didnt get only one part... i didnt what you mean by attraction between the first and the second entity... i understood first is riddle and second is harry.. but wht is this attraction you talking about?

Author's Response: It's not a human sort of attraction. It's a magnetic sort of attraction - two opposites being naturally drawn to each other.
I'm glad you liked the prologue, as not everyone does. I hope you enjoy (or enjoyed) the rest of the story.



Reviewer: MuggleBorn Signed Date: 2008.02.24 - 12:32AM Title: Prologue: Tathata

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Very cool prologue...I like stuff that makes me think :)

Author's Response: Thanks. It's tricky, but it makes more sense as you read the story. At least I hope it does.



Reviewer: the_boy_who_lives Signed Date: 2008.02.17 - 03:58PM Title: Prologue: Tathata

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one word MAGNIFICENT

Author's Response: Thanks very much.



Reviewer: Saphimire Signed Date: 2007.11.26 - 08:06PM Title: Prologue: Tathata

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Wow. One of the best prologues I have ever read. ♥

Author's Response: Thanks! I look forward to hearing your opinions on future chapters.



Reviewer: Vermouth Signed Date: 2007.11.10 - 06:26AM Title: Prologue: Tathata

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I was quite skeptic when a friend of mine reccommended this fic, however, after having read this prologue, the only thing is that I've been completely wrong about it. It has taken me three tries to understand it, but at least I've managed to do so. In other less-Percy-pompous words - BLOODY BRILLIANT!

Author's Response: Thanks very much. I've never pretended that the prologue isn't a bit dense.




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