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Reviewer: Jim McGuffin Signed Date: 2006.07.11 - 09:10PM Title: Never Forgive, Never Forget

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Judged for competition.

Wow! If you wanted the reader to feel sympathetic for Malfoy, then this is the way to do it. We know, of course, that Bellatrix isn't above killing her own family -- we've known that ever since she killed Sirius back at the end of OotP. Thus she kills Draco because he's disobeyed Voldie, Snape for helping Draco, and Ernie Macmillan, just because he's in the way -- eerily familiar of Wormtail's murder of Cedric at the end of GoF. I'd expect nothing less from one of Voldie's most loyal followers.

Overall, a bit scary, but a good story nonetheless. I wish you luck in the challenge!



Reviewer: HGFANATIC Anonymous Date: 2006.07.11 - 06:28PM Title: Never Forgive, Never Forget

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Whoaaa! That was bloody amazing to read, it really caught my attention! I really like how you portrayed the characters; it made me think J.K.R. left this little piece off HBP ;D Good luck in the competition!

` felicity ...

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Reviewer: amblewat Signed Date: 2006.07.09 - 06:45PM Title: Never Forgive, Never Forget

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wonderful job, I liked the alternate points of view.



Reviewer: Kiss Magdalena Signed Date: 2006.07.04 - 01:32PM Title: Never Forgive, Never Forget

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I thought it was extremely refreshing that you gave insight into the loss of Draco's family. Even if they are 'evil', I think they care a lot about each other. Good luck with the challenge.



Reviewer: lecook4 Signed Date: 2006.07.01 - 09:47PM Title: Never Forgive, Never Forget

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Read for Judging. Good luck with the competition.


I liked how you stayed canon with the end of book six and picked up from there. It seemed like a natural flow from where JK's left off.

Author's Response: Thanks very much! -LilyEvansPotter15




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