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Reviewer: Enchantedgurls Signed Date: 2006.07.28 - 04:06PM Title: Chapter 2
This was so good and well thought out! I thought it was really funny too. A job well done! Keep writing, I love all your works.
Reviewer: Jim McGuffin Signed Date: 2006.07.12 - 02:48PM Title: Chapter 2
Judged for competition.
I always enjoy reading your challenge entries. It's fun to read about Luna's theory of "Ancheknots" trying to stop the train, as well as the not-so-dead Death Eater. (Darwin?)
Snape -- he tries to show that he's on he's on the good side after all, the way he attacks Ginny and fools Neville into capturing him. Let's hope that Voldemort doesn't figure it all out. It's always interesting to read reformed!Snape fics and theories.
Overall, wonderful job as always, and good luck in the challenge!
Reviewer: lecook4 Signed Date: 2006.07.01 - 10:26PM Title: Chapter 2
Read for Judging. Good luck in the competition.
Good use of al the characters and the continuation of book six and the canon story.
Reviewer: Athea Signed Date: 2006.06.29 - 10:00PM Title: Chapter 2
Great story! I absolutely loved Luna. And Hermione making fun of what she was doing without knowing she was actually doing it. Cute! I tried and tried to think of a way to pull off the not really dead killer (as in And Then There Were None) but I couldn't think of anything. Even though your not really dead Death Eater wasn't the killer, I'm glad someone found a way to work that into the story.
