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SIYE Time:9:15 on 27th July 2021


Reviewer: PrettyFanGirl Signed Date: 2008.11.03 - 04:24PM Title: Chapter 1

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Sad. Good story, but it kinda seemed like it didn't have a lot of detail.



Reviewer: Jim McGuffin Signed Date: 2006.07.07 - 06:36PM Title: Chapter 1

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Judged for competition.

This is an interesting story. It's been a while since we've read about the Devil's Snare, and so it makes sense that someone would try to use it to kill on the train.

The Pansy/Blaise/Ginny love triangle -- I suppose that it's been hinted at in canon. I've read fics in which Ginny has been raped before -- it's scary to read them. I am glad that Ginny will get off on self-defense and not have to go to jail.

Overall, great job! I wish you luck in the challenge!



Reviewer: lecook4 Signed Date: 2006.07.02 - 05:57PM Title: Chapter 1

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Read for Judging. Good luck in the competition.


So Pansy was going to take the fall for Ginny? What's that all about? Can't see her doing that, but interesting twist. A little bit of work on the grammar and this will be a nice little fic.



Reviewer: clt_71 Signed Date: 2006.06.27 - 01:50PM Title: Chapter 1

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I agree with the previous review that it did seem a bit hurried. however, it did seem to have a really good foundation. If you ever wanted to go back and "clean it up" you wouldn't have any problem with that. I did enjoy it.



Reviewer: ander Signed Date: 2006.06.26 - 02:48PM Title: Chapter 1

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looks a bit hurried up, could use a re-writing

Author's Response: yeah, it was late and i saw the challenge and since i was stuck on my other story i thought id give it a quick try. thanks for reading it though.




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