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Reviewer: Bw29853 Anonymous Date: 2007.03.13 - 03:06PM Title: Surprise Id say a no on the Horcruxes, just my vote. Anyway keep up the good work! Loved it from the start. Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2007.03.07 - 03:57PM Title: Surprise ok so ive read up to this point and i have to say that it is turning out quite nicely. i wasnt quite sure at the beginning because it was some what simlar to the books and in many ways too much so to my liking, but it got much much better as i got into it. the only other thing i didnt like was the harry and ginny became a couple sooooo young...younger than other stories with bonds...most of the time they didnt "become" a couple until later. i just thought that it went a bit too fast but it did work out in the end so it was ok. i noticed a few other mistakes as well as to refrences...like about something harry said to ginny in his head (just recently) and then you had hermione make a comment about it...but she couldnt have known if he said it to ginny in his head. just thought that was annoying. there were some other but i will have to go back and look because i dont remember all of them. oh but another thing was the two way mirrors that hermione's parents gave her. she hasnt used them and wen she found out she was a prefect i thought she should have used it instead of sending hedwig because i thought that was the purpose of getting it...but i also realized that wen tey sent her money that perhaps it had to be done that way. i just thought i would point that out...and for now thats all. so update soon! im looking forward to reading more! Reviewer: Xfactor Anonymous Date: 2007.02.26 - 02:17PM Title: Surprise Sorry I hadn't left a review before but I wanted to catch up with the updates first. Well, it wasn't like I had much choice. I was so captivated that I just had to see what happened next. Now I find myself here at Chapter 46 wanting to do the same thing but I can't. Reviewer: Moonlight51 Signed Date: 2007.02.26 - 03:50AM Title: Surprise It's your story dear, do with it what you will. You are the driver, we are merely passengers pointing out the funny spotted cows and scenery along the way, you decide where to take us and what to show us. Reviewer: Ima Geek Signed Date: 2007.02.25 - 01:52PM Title: Surprise I wouldn't be upset if you left out the horcruxes, i don't like dealing with them either. But you did mention that Tom Riddle took steps to make sure he didn't. I'm sure you can figure out another way. By the way I LOVE THIS FIC!!!!! Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2007.02.23 - 05:36PM Title: Surprise glad hermione has had a party and glad ron was smart enought to get something sliver...glad also harry and ginny are working well now..on the dragon...kutgw Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2007.02.23 - 11:27AM Title: Surprise I think there are plenty of stories involving the Horcruxes; I don't see a pressing need for them to appear in this story, as it is rather AU anyhow. Write the way you want to. :-) [But beware of homonyms -- I expect that what Harry got Hermione was a "stationery" set. :-}] Reviewer: clt_71 Signed Date: 2007.02.23 - 11:17AM Title: Surprise Well, as far as the horocrux's go, I say leave them out if you can be a bit more creative in how old Moldyshorts comes back. Either way, I love this story. Reviewer: _kb_ Signed Date: 2007.02.23 - 09:36AM Title: Surprise Nice chapter, I'm glad you've put another out. As an author, I can tell you that doing the horcrux hunt thing is not fun, so yes, feel free to not do that and we definitely won't think any worse of you. :-) Having the diary as the only Horcrux is a nice easy way out, and still allows for a good story, IMO. Good luck with the story, I'm curious to see where you take it. Reviewer: Ginzig1 Signed Date: 2007.02.23 - 09:09AM Title: Surprise Great chapter. I LOVED Hermione's joke about “I wonder if Ginny will miss the part of you I leave behind,” Fabulous line! I would not be disappointed if you did not include Horcruxes in your story. There are plenty of stories that use them; I wouldn't mind reading some without. I really liked this chapter. Reviewer: Roxy Signed Date: 2007.02.23 - 09:08AM Title: Surprise please don't include horcruxes. i think they're completely evil and i wish jkr never included them either. Reviewer: Soccer Devil22 Signed Date: 2007.02.23 - 09:08AM Title: Surprise I personally wouldn't mind if you didn't use Horcruxes. My proffessional opinuin on that matter is, leave to Miss Rowling. I still don't entire understand Horcruxes, and I've read HBP at least five times. Reviewer: peskypetunia Signed Date: 2007.02.23 - 09:08AM Title: Surprise As a fellow author, I think your story is great and I think that you should include/disclude whatever you want. That said, how are you going to explain the diary? I'm looking foward to seeing your creativity. Great chapter! Keep up the good work. | |||||||
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