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Reviewer: Bw29853 Anonymous Date: 2007.03.13 - 03:06PM Title: Surprise

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Id say a no on the Horcruxes, just my vote. Anyway keep up the good work! Loved it from the start.



Reviewer: Hovanoush Signed Date: 2007.03.10 - 03:06PM Title: Surprise

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Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2007.03.07 - 03:57PM Title: Surprise

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ok so ive read up to this point and i have to say that it is turning out quite nicely. i wasnt quite sure at the beginning because it was some what simlar to the books and in many ways too much so to my liking, but it got much much better as i got into it. the only other thing i didnt like was the harry and ginny became a couple sooooo young...younger than other stories with bonds...most of the time they didnt "become" a couple until later. i just thought that it went a bit too fast but it did work out in the end so it was ok. i noticed a few other mistakes as well as to refrences...like about something harry said to ginny in his head (just recently) and then you had hermione make a comment about it...but she couldnt have known if he said it to ginny in his head. just thought that was annoying. there were some other but i will have to go back and look because i dont remember all of them. oh but another thing was the two way mirrors that hermione's parents gave her. she hasnt used them and wen she found out she was a prefect i thought she should have used it instead of sending hedwig because i thought that was the purpose of getting it...but i also realized that wen tey sent her money that perhaps it had to be done that way. i just thought i would point that out...and for now thats all. so update soon! im looking forward to reading more!
~CodeRomance



Reviewer: Xfactor Anonymous Date: 2007.02.26 - 02:17PM Title: Surprise

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Sorry I hadn't left a review before but I wanted to catch up with the updates first. Well, it wasn't like I had much choice. I was so captivated that I just had to see what happened next. Now I find myself here at Chapter 46 wanting to do the same thing but I can't.

I love how you have changed canon but kept it close enough for us to know where we are. Keep up the great work with that. Forget the Horcruxes. I was so disappointed with HP6 because of that very subject (please don't burn me J.K. lovers) that I find myself only reading AU and Post-OotP. I'm hoping HP7 will restore my faith in our favorite author and be worth the wait as well.

The only thing that I don't like about the story is Ron's consistent negative reaction to H/G and his jealousy of Harry. I know you have him growing out of it but it is taking sssssooooooooo long for him to change. Molly took a while too but she seems better now.

Anyway, keep up the great work and update soon.



Reviewer: Moonlight51 Signed Date: 2007.02.26 - 03:50AM Title: Surprise

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It's your story dear, do with it what you will. You are the driver, we are merely passengers pointing out the funny spotted cows and scenery along the way, you decide where to take us and what to show us.
Cute chapter, Im glad Hermiones Bday turned out better this time around. And I liked the lessons, that poor poor gerbil... that would make me so sad, I would totaly panic.



Reviewer: Ima Geek Signed Date: 2007.02.25 - 01:52PM Title: Surprise

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I wouldn't be upset if you left out the horcruxes, i don't like dealing with them either. But you did mention that Tom Riddle took steps to make sure he didn't. I'm sure you can figure out another way. By the way I LOVE THIS FIC!!!!!



Reviewer: PotterBoy90 Signed Date: 2007.02.24 - 06:13PM Title: Surprise

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Leave out the horcruxes ;)



Reviewer: Breanie Signed Date: 2007.02.23 - 08:50PM Title: Surprise

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aww cute! kutgw



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2007.02.23 - 05:36PM Title: Surprise

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glad hermione has had a party and glad ron was smart enought to get something sliver...glad also harry and ginny are working well now..on the dragon...kutgw



Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2007.02.23 - 11:27AM Title: Surprise

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I think there are plenty of stories involving the Horcruxes; I don't see a pressing need for them to appear in this story, as it is rather AU anyhow. Write the way you want to. :-) [But beware of homonyms -- I expect that what Harry got Hermione was a "stationery" set. :-}]

Interesting "Theory of Apparition," there. :-)

I'm rather looking forward to the point where Harry & Ginny can fully transform to the dragon. That promises to be rather interesting.



Reviewer: clt_71 Signed Date: 2007.02.23 - 11:17AM Title: Surprise

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Well, as far as the horocrux's go, I say leave them out if you can be a bit more creative in how old Moldyshorts comes back. Either way, I love this story.



Reviewer: _kb_ Signed Date: 2007.02.23 - 09:36AM Title: Surprise

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Nice chapter, I'm glad you've put another out. As an author, I can tell you that doing the horcrux hunt thing is not fun, so yes, feel free to not do that and we definitely won't think any worse of you. :-) Having the diary as the only Horcrux is a nice easy way out, and still allows for a good story, IMO. Good luck with the story, I'm curious to see where you take it.



Reviewer: Ginzig1 Signed Date: 2007.02.23 - 09:09AM Title: Surprise

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Great chapter. I LOVED Hermione's joke about “I wonder if Ginny will miss the part of you I leave behind,” Fabulous line! I would not be disappointed if you did not include Horcruxes in your story. There are plenty of stories that use them; I wouldn't mind reading some without. I really liked this chapter.



Reviewer: Roxy Signed Date: 2007.02.23 - 09:08AM Title: Surprise

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please don't include horcruxes. i think they're completely evil and i wish jkr never included them either.



Reviewer: Soccer Devil22 Signed Date: 2007.02.23 - 09:08AM Title: Surprise

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I personally wouldn't mind if you didn't use Horcruxes. My proffessional opinuin on that matter is, leave to Miss Rowling. I still don't entire understand Horcruxes, and I've read HBP at least five times.



Reviewer: peskypetunia Signed Date: 2007.02.23 - 09:08AM Title: Surprise

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As a fellow author, I think your story is great and I think that you should include/disclude whatever you want. That said, how are you going to explain the diary? I'm looking foward to seeing your creativity. Great chapter! Keep up the good work.




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