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Reviewer: cantante Signed Date: 2007.06.08 - 10:57PM Title: Phase Three
so THATS how the toad gets to hogwarts! cant wait to see what happens now, especially if gred adn forge dont go back... who will set of fireworks in the hallways and turn the foyer into a swamp? lol... great story!
Reviewer: Moonlight51 Signed Date: 2007.01.28 - 01:46AM Title: Phase Three
Damn, Umbitch is still in the story... I guess we can't win 'em all.
Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2006.12.13 - 12:25AM Title: Phase Three
Ah, well; it does seem that you managed to get them back to school, then. :-)
And Ron was certainly going hyperbolic.
So DJU shows up, eh? Hmmm.... I had hoped that Mme. Bones was better-informed than that. Wonder what her reaction will be when DJU's agenda is exposed will be?
Well done!
Reviewer: Sssith Signed Date: 2006.12.12 - 07:21PM Title: Phase Three
Your Ron is such a Dork. Ah well...hurry back with more.
Reviewer: Roxy Signed Date: 2006.12.12 - 07:05PM Title: Phase Three
Good chapter. Just one thing... in the previous chapter, you said that Ginny was allowed to open her gifts in the morning and she was doing so when they first communicated, but then at the start of this one, she and Harry are saying goodnight after they explain everything to Ron. Just a little indiscretion in the timing, Don't know if you wanted to know about it or not, but there it is. Hope for another update soon.
Reviewer: Macsr71 Signed Date: 2006.12.12 - 06:38PM Title: Phase Three
Dang, this review box does not accept italics, the following should be in italics
‘Can you hear me now, Ginny?
‘Yes, Harry. I can hear you. It’s amazing!’
‘I think Ron’s trying to turn every color of the rainbow,
‘He’s been red and violet, and now he’s turning blue.
But he skipped orange, yellow, and green.’
Reviewer: Macsr71 Signed Date: 2006.12.12 - 06:35PM Title: Phase Three
Great story, way too short of a chapter but it's your story, tell it your way and at your pace
I think the single dash for thought-speak and double dash for spoken-speak is too hard to read - most stories that have thought-speak tend to put the thought-speak in italics –
As Harry took Ginny’s hand, Ron said, “Phase three of what?”
‘Can you hear me now, Ginny?’ thought Harry.
“Will someone please answer me!” shouted a red-faced Ron.
‘Yes, Harry. I can hear you. It’s amazing!’
‘I think Ron’s trying to turn every color of the rainbow,’ thought Harry as Ginny giggled. ‘He’s been red and violet, and now he’s turning blue.’
‘But he skipped orange, yellow, and green.’
Harry laughed at Ginny’s observation as Ron got more frustrated. They heard Hermione say, “It’s their secret to tell, Ron.”
Much easier to read from my perspective.
Author's Response: Truthfully, I think it takes too much effort of going through the text and typing and everywhere they think-speak.
Reviewer: starboy454 Signed Date: 2006.12.12 - 06:03PM Title: Phase Three
update more soon way too short
Reviewer: Ginzig1 Signed Date: 2006.12.12 - 05:57PM Title: Phase Three
I thought Ron was going to have a hard time with it, at least Hermione can work on him. I can't wait until they complete the dragon transformation. Yes, it was short, but still fun. Looking forward to more.
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2006.12.12 - 05:39PM Title: Phase Three
ron is going to get it one of these days and hermione is not going to bale him out...glad that ginny and harry made it to stage three and hope that they can work it all out...kutgw
Reviewer: Wergan Signed Date: 2006.12.12 - 04:38PM Title: Phase Three
Hey cool chapter, can't wait for more. :)
